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If the writing collapses, will the spiritual stone also inflate? ? ?                 According to the author's setting: 1. 1 Medium-grade spiritual stone = 10 low-grade spiritual stones, 2. The protagonist's father (the former leader of the small clan) has earned more than 30 medium-grade spiritual stones in his life, 3. The protagonist (Qi training level 2) once Consuming 15.5 Medium-grade spiritual stones, for example, the father (deceased) earned 300,000 in his lifetime, and the son (orphan, unemployed vagrant) spent 150,000 on practicing spells at one time. It may take several times. Is this reasonable? ? Can other casual cultivators still survive? 4. He also said that making alchemy is as simple as cooking. Practice makes perfect. The ingredients are not cheap. How can you master it after 10 times? Practice pressing 0.5 Medium-grade spirit stones once, and 5 of them will be needed 10 times. 5. 1 Magic walking talisman = 2 medium-grade spiritual stones, which is extremely expensive for casual cultivators and inconsistent. The magic walking talisman is used to save life, so it is expensive. The training materials are daily necessities, so the price should be cheap (the protagonist and others need them, you can see) I won't talk about other things, too many settings are unreasonable, I can't watch it anymore

I will be recommended on it the day after tomorrow. I heard that if the recommendation score is poor, I will have no choice but to run naked. I am so nervous. Are there any brothers who are pursuing it? Please give the author some confidence.

Xianxia is like this, no one watched it at first. It only starts to grow after a month on the shelves. This is the case for many people's books.

The writing is very good, but I hope the author doesn't expect a big improvement after less than 100,000 words. Many new authors only start to get better after writing more than one million yuan. I have been chasing it in the early stage of Dao Zhengfeng. I remember that Dao Zhengzheng seems to have written more than one million yuan before slowly getting up. I suggest authors not to be impatient and write slowly according to their own outline. Good books will never be buried. Come on.

He is the slowest protagonist to level up. He is still in the Qi training period for hundreds of chapters. Upgrading in one Qi training period requires various resources and various conditions. For those who don't know, he might think that he is preparing to ascend to immortality...

The early writing was quite good, but after I was sent to be used as a bait to refine the Blood God's bloodline, I couldn't understand it at all. It was very confusing and I felt like I wanted to squeeze every plot into it.

There is no logic, the villain's thinking is so clever, the one who clearly attacked the protagonist at the beginning just went out and was exposed and turned into a counter-attack. Is anyone really making a joke about his own lifeso casually

The protagonist joins the sect. He first takes the benefits from the sect, but doesn't want to pay for it. He is just a white-eyed wolf and wants to take revenge on the sect. This is disgusting stuff.

I don't know what to say. It turns out to be a particularly attractive book, both in terms of the title and the exercises in it. But I always feel that the writing is messy when I see it on the shelves. There is no complete main line. The characters' personalities are also vague. Sometimes the preceding text does not match the following text. Although the entire novel is pieced together. But I think the author should develop along one line. Don't copy too much or too much. It becomes difficult to control if there are too many. You can start with a short video. There is no need to develop a large map. I think he's a eunuch. It might be better to reimagine it.

I was a little confused when I saw it. At the beginning, you said that although your own martial arts is not powerful, it can even corrupt other people's spiritual consciousness. It is not impossible to put it in the furnace to make it bigger and stronger. However, after changing the map and joining the sect, you just randomly choose one. The fantasy book you wrote has the fairy skin that everyone can become an immortal. Excuse me.

I just read Chapter 20, I feel good, but it turned out to be a eunuch 🙂

I finally found a good book, but the author went to the palace to practice the Sunflower Manual😌

Aboriginal protagonist, this kind of character will miss at least half of the readers.

This second one is awesome. Can you come out to jungle at level 1 of Qi Refining? ! I don't know where these two guys got the courage. If they meet a mortal who is practicing body training, wouldn't every minute be free of charge?

After taking a look, I found that some of the settings were a bit strange, but they were innocuous. Some plot bugs were quickly overcome, which is good, and much better than most novels that are patched around bugs. But I got bored after reading 40+ chapters, mainly because of the following points: 1. Why do I still practice Qi? (After flipping over, I'm still practicing Qi) 2. Does practicing Qi involve space? Has space travel become the norm? 3. The collection and function of trophies (this is considered a bug, it is harmless) 4. What is the stage of Qi training? Are most people so poorly qualified? What are people thinking when they go out to practice Qi without reaching the bottleneck? 5. Tiandao League At a glance, it can be seen that it is a new author. Maybe the author is mentally familiar, but when he wrote it, he was too familiar and thought that the readers should also understand this mentality. I hope it will get better and better in the future, so I won't read this one and let the author practice his work.

If you don't get a golden finger in three chapters, you will be on the street.

Author, I would like to mention my thoughts. The beginning is okay, but when it comes to Golden Finger, it is a bit uncomfortable. It is said to be a treasure of chaos. It is a bit uncomfortable here. The setting at the beginning of the pattern is a bit big. For me, it feels a bit dissuasive. I have seen many book friends also reacting to this problem. I wonder if you are interested in changing it, but regardless of whether you change it or not, I wish you good results in your future writing, come on! 🙂

A low-level rubbish monk can still drive the Chaos Treasure. It's awesome. That's what the author thought.

I heard that the protagonist directly uses medium-grade spiritual stones. Author, you are so awesome. Do you think the protagonist is a second-generation immortal?

What a pity. The author should continue writing books and find more people to recommend books to each other.