Zhaozhou

The author is so awesome

The writing is very good, the concept is exquisite, the storyline is smooth, the expression is accurate, and the characters are relatively vivid. I support it!

I've had it for a month, start watching

It's a very interesting work. The writing rhythm of the first half is quite good, but the second half seems a little rushed since the author left Beijing. Overall, it is worth watching despite its shortcomings.

As always, he slowly rises from a small role. I hope he won't be as indecisive as the previous protagonist. Every time the protagonist in the author's hands starts the story with a concubine, he suppresses it first and then develops it. In my opinion, it is always suppressed until the ending. . . . I always feel that various frameworks have been surrounding the protagonist. This can't be done and that can't be done. It's really not an ordinary aggrievement to see it put in (it was also so aggrieved in the original book. I hope the protagonist can be more ruthless and break the shackles on him, whether he is an official or a rebel in the later period. Maybe in the eyes of the author, the protagonist is cruel enough, but in the eyes of our readers, there is no difference between the so-called cruelty of the protagonist and the Virgin. I hope to be cruel to others, to kill them all, and not to be restricted from killing or to let them go just because they are in that era. Just break the shackles and be good to your own people.

Alas, I can't stand it anymore. I don't like the character of the protagonist, he talks too much like a virgin. Also, who does the author want to be the emperor in the end? The prince is out of the question, and the Kang family is out of the question. In the end, the protagonist becomes a prince.

Time travel does not take three years to make guns, five years to make cannons, and ten years to kill the emperor. It gives people the feeling of real and realistic history, but the author does not handle the family relationship well. Since it is a realistic historical novel, it is very strange for the daughter of a businessman to be the main wife. In ancient times, the status of businessmen was at the bottom, just like today, a civil servant with a good reputation married a woman whose parents are criminals. In the ancient times, when family background was so important, people around him did not reject him? It feels weird.

I criticized this author for a few words and was permanently banned.

It looks so depressing, my fate will always be left in the hands of others. Obviously, Uncle Seven cannot protect the protagonist. Taking the blame again and again, with no results. At first, he was disgusted by his aunt every day, and then he was ridden by Zhizhou every day. There is basically no turning around. Then there will never be any grudges or grudges. Generally speaking, after being suppressed for dozens of chapters, there is always a moment of revenge and gratification. No, the comeback is only briefly introduced, and there is no sense of satisfaction after being suppressed for dozens of chapters. Very empty and frustrated

Origin of Yingying Baihuatang How infatuated and mistaken for Liu Niang Unexpectedly, they met after a storm Condemn Fu to accompany Zhaolang for the rest of his life

At the beginning, it was written about how the eldest mother oppressed herself, but later she was made invisible? So were you writing these aggrieved scenes just for the sake of being tortured? The war scenes in this book are also very bad. There are never any scouts or sentries on the opposite side. The protagonist's scouts can get all the information on the opposite side.

It's really disgusting, everyone here is a voice changer. His voice is always hoarse. His voice is always hoarse. Is there something wrong with his throat? The protagonist loses all his majesty after a beat. The soldiers don't even know what the commander looks like. A man who did not know how to fight was a military governor in the late Tang Dynasty. He died without knowing how.

He is proficient in all kinds of music, chess, calligraphy and painting, and his knowledge of the Four Books and Five Classics is better than what he taught in a private school. It stands to reason that people with such cultural literacy will not be too low-minded? How come you can't even fight a country housewife? The oiran was married to a scholar who was just a scholar (the master's profession was, at best, a section chief of the municipal government in later generations, from a middle-class family) and she was still a concubine. In the end, you can only barely eat enough? Why did the protagonist's mother fall in love with him? ? The contradiction between the character design and reality is too great. I can't stand it. I can't stand it.

The new emperor succeeds to the throne, the Kang family rebels, the protagonist quells the rebellion, and works as a military governor for a few more years. The new emperor loves to build palaces just like Yang Guang, which makes the people in the world miserable. Military governors everywhere, peasants revolt, the protagonist builds high walls and accumulates grain, waits for someone to kill the new emperor, then seizes a prince and establishes a new emperor, quells the rebellion, wipes out the world, and then makes a concession. Then destroy the Turks, overthrow the Khitan, wipe out the Tubo, train the navy, build sea ships, colonize the world, and unify the world (end of the book).

Let's talk about my feelings. I am also an author and I am just like that at the moment. I came from a concubine, let alone fully subscribed. I basically ordered all of them. Ahem, I went astray... I couldn't stop reading it. This is my feeling about this book. The rhythm is still perfect. I hope it will be better! Come on! 😊Don't say I'm asking for help. - Although I was a bit of a loser, it wasn't too bad! Let's all hope this book gets better and better.

It's extremely unreasonable. If someone asks a child to deliver a letter to you, would you explain to the child the content of the letter? Why do people send you letters?

It's good, but there is one thing. I asked in a hoarse voice: Why is this game so hoarse? Why is this game so hoarse?

I was wrong... I thought the author's last book seemed to have a single female protagonist. In real life, the relationship has reached the point of meeting the parents. There can't be more female protagonists at this juncture. Life and novels are indeed separated... I understand that the author needs to be right when writing. There is no way to help the fact that the audience of multiple female protagonists is larger than that of single female protagonists... Eh... I don't know what I want to complain about. This is what I want to complain about this year. This is the second fictional historical novel that I have followed. Both of them had a single girl but multiple girls. The author of this one is okay. At least he didn't say that he wanted to have a single girl. It was my own wishful thinking after reading the early plots of male and female protagonists. I really understand the author and hope that the author will continue to work hard. I will accompany you here first ... I'd better not touch the serialized historical novels this year. I can't bet on it...

When I saw the protagonist being dragged to a restaurant for dinner after arriving in Beijing, looking like Grandma Liu entering the Grand View Garden, I knew I couldn't continue reading this book. A modern person in his thirties lives in the age of the information explosion. How can the knowledge gained in more than thirty years be matched by the ancients? Everything the protagonist did until he entered Beijing, including the slightly more advanced thing of movable type printing, could have been done by the ancients. Where is the golden finger of time travel? Let's read another ten chapters, or see you later.

The airborne Zhizhou had a conflict with the local wealthy family. The Zhizhou invited the bandits next to the wealthy family to enter the city and kill the family. At the last moment, Pig Knuckles ran away and told the bandits to go away... My uncle is the prince's teacher, you can't kill us~ Is this plot arrangement hasty? I just watched it, can anyone please tell me what's behind this plot, thank you

The eldest mother and the second mother-in-law are so disgusting. They can set up a trap just when they are going to take the exam, and let the eldest mother steal the pretty boy and get him raped in the pig cage. When Jinshi came back and separated the family, he launched a rebellion to kill his second mother. It will be fun for everyone to watch

I spent money to read more than a hundred chapters, but I felt it was poorly written and not worth it. I went to daoban and read dozens of chapters. I really can't stand it anymore, it's really getting worse and worse as I write it. Damn, waste of time.

As a time-traveler, except for copying a few poems, I regard myself as an ancient person from beginning to end. So what is the point of traveling back in time?

The author's writing is quite good, but there are too few updates. Come on, I have voted for the four monthly votes this month. Can you please 😎

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It's not good-looking. I thought I was going to write about a character like Lu Buwei, but the result is this... Hot chicken

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I have added it to my collection. I have a lot of ideas and the author's writing is very good. This title makes people want to click on it. I came to visit with my work "Old man picks up rags in time and lives by making bad movies". Thank you!