The Emperor of Thieves

The early writing is really good, and I've been following it, but does the author know why he hasn't left the circle yet? More than 350 chapters, almost 1 million words, and you haven't even raised the flag of rebellion. The real water person is a little physically unwell. You obviously have the appearance of a great god, but you will never be able to touch the edge of a great god when you write like this. Give up and give up. The author is really short-sighted.

Reading all the way from "Zhaozhou", accidentally, confused it into "Loyal Guardian" 😌 I felt very happy reading it, I voted for you with all my monthly votes, bring it on, author!

After reading the content before it was put on the shelves, I have a lot of doubts and I want to complain! ——There is no problem for the protagonist to go down the mountain and open the vest, but after a long time, who knows what will happen in that era of underdeveloped communication, so the author arranges for the protagonist to jump back and forth on the mountain and down the mountain from time to time to show his presence. This is not a problem in normal times, but later on he often jumps back and forth like this after a battle.             bug，！ ——The first point is bearable, but the latter point is unbearable. It's the problem of the two protagonists' identities! There are too many people who know about it. Although the young lady will not tell anyone for her own sake, who knows if she will give up on herself for the sake of the family and then betray the protagonist! There are also people under the protagonist who know his identity. It is impossible to stay by the protagonist's side. As the protagonist becomes famous step by step, interested people will pay close attention to the protagonist. If the protagonist jumps back and forth so frequently, sooner or later someone will find out. Then interested people will definitely collect information from the people around the protagonist for information or handles. At that time, the protagonist will either choose one of the two, or kneel down and be a dog. Especially in the later part of the battle against the Ten Kings Village, in order to cope with the above investigation, the protagonist resorted to sideline rebellion to bind dozens of subordinates to keep secrets. How can so many people keep secrets? I want to see how long they can last! ——So I personally think it's better to give the protagonist a golden finger to deal with the identity issues on both sides. Otherwise, like the protagonist, he would jump from both ends and treat others as fools!

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D found that it was too slow. There were less than 1,000 governors.

You are both responsible and established. If you like the status given by the court so much, then what kind of rebellion are you going to do? You still look down on the rebellious people next door who are at least aboveboard. How can you pretend to be so secretive and fight for the rest of the world to go to bed? While saying that the imperial court sucks, you still want to lick the shit out of it.

I have been following this book from the beginning until now. At the beginning, I could feel that the author's writing power was actually quite limited, and the protagonist was poorly portrayed. The image of the protagonist is not very likable. As a time traveler, there is no "golden finger". The only thing the author gives to the protagonist is his amazing bravery. However, as most modern people, the protagonist of time travel and hegemony should have no historical foresight, advanced economic system, or reform of agricultural equipment. Of course, this is also the current situation of most ordinary people. From another perspective, this kind of writing is also quite attractive. The heroic ordinary protagonist travels through time and fights for hegemony, and starts to make a fortune as a bandit. The superposition of various buffs is quite interesting, which makes up for part of the lack of writing skills. The author also depicts the process of the protagonist's fortune in a general way. The protagonist has little awareness of the talents under his command, and even has few scholars. He inexplicably quickly accumulates a thick family fortune. With the opportunity to compete for hegemony, the protagonist also inexplicably learns the ability to march and fight. Although his own power's political system, economic system, and agricultural field have no outstanding performance, he finally conquers the entire world. If we just write like this and follow the route of Genghis Khan conquering the world, conquering the entire Eurasian continent along the way, and occasionally describing the dynasty management, it should be a good ending, but the author prefers not to. The author insists on describing the process of dynasty management in a large space, but the author is not good at writing this aspect. After entering the chapter of dynasty management, the author was a little overwhelmed because the protagonist made his fortune too quickly and had no time to cultivate talents in various fields. For example, in the agricultural field, the author did not elaborate on how many talents were cultivated who could reform agricultural equipment and increase crop yields, how many talents were cultivated in the commercial field with excellent business vision and business acumen, and how many talents were cultivated in the scientific research field who could invent inventions that surpassed the times. Then the author suddenly wanted to carry out reforms, but the problem was that the process of the protagonist's fortune was too fast and he had cultivated many civilians and officials under his subordinates. Most of them were born in large aristocratic families to carry out the basic implementation of reforms. The protagonist's character was indecisive and he wanted to make most of the projects complete. The problem in Shanshi Mountain is that many of the projects under the protagonist's hands belong to those who remember Li Yi. Even if those projects are not talked about by their families, will their families do anything wrong? In this case, the protagonist is still useless. Apart from the bead curtain, I wonder how the court can deter those big families. A large aristocratic family has thousands of good people pushing out one or two of their children to do some illegal hookups, while the rest of the family does some related non-illegal business. How can it deter those aristocratic families by only punishing the offender himself? How can the asset transfer of the criminal be traced under the supervision of the ancient times? In the absence of an implicated system, the aristocratic family will have no scruples. After all, the money and the land are also obtained, and the worst is to quit one or two scapegoats. Finally, there is the protagonist, who improves the status of merchants and allows the children of merchants to take the imperial examination. In this case, basically the vast majority of aristocratic families will have many people engaged in business. In the past, when everything was low-grade and only those with good education were good, the smartest people were basically in the official career. However, after the protagonist's policy, a small number of very smart people will turn to business. In addition, without the threat of the implicated system, the ability of social and economic crimes has rapidly evolved, and has evolved to the point where the ancient political system cannot regulate it. Such a policy can easily give birth to aristocratic families that are integrated with politics and business. What should we do if aristocratic families in more remote areas begin to raise private soldiers? Just get rid of the chief culprit? In that case, it is easy for aristocratic families to make a comeback. After all, those private soldiers don't know they are committing crimes. They are just practicing when they are busy farming and when they are free, you can chase them or not. In ancient times, there were no surveillance systems, nor telephones or telegraphs. It might take months or years for information from remote areas to reach the capital. In this case, policies that are unfavorable to aristocratic families will basically not be implemented. Policies that are beneficial to aristocratic families will result in a family that has no estimate. Under such circumstances, it will not even be transmitted to the descendants of the protagonist, and it is estimated that it will be finished in the protagonist's generation.

The author, if you can…can't…control…the omitted…number…in…the words…for a moment, it's…really…uncomfortable….

Conquering the world does not rely on excellent weapons, brave soldiers, and strategies. It relies on such despicable means as assassination! It's not that there were no assassinations in ancient times, but which political power relied on assassinations to win the world? It brings down the structure of this book! ! !

In the latest chapter, the protagonist still wants to cancel the involvement. To be honest, I really can't see the protagonist growing up at all. How can I still not understand such childish thoughts even when I am in this position now? According to the social concept of ancient times, if you don't set the cost of making a mistake higher, do you think you can control it? Do you think that nowadays there are surveillance systems to catch people, and you are not implicated. If someone else commits a serious crime and just runs away, can you catch it in ancient times? Anyway, you are not involved, and you don't have to worry about your family. You can just run away. What can you do? It's really hard to tell. I feel like the protagonist hasn't grown up at all since he traveled to conquer the world. The author can't write about the growth of the protagonist at all. It just feels like he just traveled through time.

The writing is really interesting. There is a hint of ancient style but the overall narrative is concise and the pace is very lively. The plot is advanced, the characters are portrayed with a foothold and a way out, and climaxes come one after another in a straightforward narrative. It's been a long time since I've written a comment, but this article was so short and concise that I really liked it. I hope my comments are like applause for the author!

Brother, I am about to catch up on the latest chapter of this book, but I have to abandon the book. Because it's toxic, I can't accept it! The reason is as follows. When the Khitan went south, Fan Yang's army couldn't hold it anymore. They asked you for help from the southeast. You sent troops to support it. That's no problem! But you led 10,000 people to support you. I can't understand this. The key is that you still have to cross the Pinglu Army's territory. Don't say that Zhou Xu thinks he has no hope of conquering the world. My son is less than one year old, and there is only one leader of his clan, and his prestige is not high. The protagonist leads 10,000 people across other people's territory and fights foreigners on another warlord's territory. The author, please tell me what your idea is. You can send your own clansmen to send troops to support, and you will be righteous, or you can recognize Meng Qing as your adopted son and let him go to Ducheng! When the protagonist reaches this stage, he usually sits at the back and controls the overall situation. He goes up and fights all day long. This is the early stage of starting a business, and there is nothing you can do about it. Therefore, this point is completely written by the author.

I feel that the plot after becoming the emperor is too empty, and the overall feeling gives people a depressing atmosphere. It is obviously the early years of the dynasty, and the writing is about prosperous things, but the emotions expressed in the text have a feeling of twilight years. Many policies feel too taken for granted, and it seems really uncomfortable.

From eating food that is tasteless, it is a pity to throw it away to eating food that is tasteless, it is a pity to throw it away. I am becoming more and more speechless.

At first, I thought the protagonist was brave and resourceful, but after seeing more than 500 brave characters, he no longer looked brave. He was simply reckless, not to mention resourceful. There is no need for any book to add gunpowder, and the role of gunpowder is exaggerated. From the Tang Dynasty or even earlier to the early Ming Dynasty, gunpowder rarely played a decisive role in ancient wars. Since you have the advantage of being a time traveler, why don't you write about this?

To be honest, the author can learn from how Mike writes historical articles. When you write historical articles, you go to fight and win. No matter how many troops you send out or how much food and grass you deploy, you don't get any. Other people's novels have various perspectives, including soldiers, middle-level generals, civil servants and ordinary people. Do you have it too? Just say that the ordinary people are not living well! Others write novels based on how much land the family has, how much grain they collect, how much tax they pay, how much grain they keep, and whether there are any soldiers in the family. If you don't know how to write, you can check the computer and read more related books. Your book is like a castle in the air with nothing underneath! I think your book had a small scene in the early stages, but luckily you abandoned it later on.

I can't keep up. I really drove high and walked low. I've been jumping to the next level for half a year. Now I really can't stand it anymore. I don't care about my grades anymore.

The main character in the book is trying to equalize land, which is really poisonous to the extreme. Each person is only allowed five acres of land, and the rest is confiscated. The landless are each given two acres of land. This writing is simply outrageous and extremely depressing.

. . . A few months later. . Almost all of them are bad reviews. . How arrogant he was when he blocked me permanently. . He was banned forever without doing anything. . There are so many bad reviews, why don't you delete the post and control the comments?

It is unqualified as a military text about fighting for hegemony. There is no emphasis on military organization, weapons and equipment, military uniforms, and military laws. The key is that you have to travel through the past as a modern person. At least you have some modern insights, such as muskets and artillery. Otherwise, why would you write about a modern person wearing it? I suggest the author to read some military texts from the late Ming Dynasty or study them carefully.

Those of you who haven't left yet are considered men. Those of you who can still continue reading are considered old men.

Bandits are a thing. If you don't rebel, you are a bandit. If you rebel, you are a rebel. It's not interesting, I have no desire to watch it. Let me give you an idea. In Chinese history, there have been successful bandits, but no pirates have succeeded in rebelling. It is recommended to write pirates

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This author has such a lack of common sense that I really can't stand it. Black powder can only be used to defend cities and blow up people? Does the sounding arrow have firecrackers on it? Give up, give up

I feel that the author doesn't have the youthful feeling of just writing a book, and there is generally no literary youthful content, which is quite commendable. The overall atmosphere is very relaxed. But, the word count of "water", the word count of "water" repeated in large paragraphs, your word "water" is too exaggerated, the word "water" is very vulgar, do you need to change the title to appear several times in each chapter? There are many other similar situations, so I won't list them all. This way of counting words greatly affects the rhythm of reading, just like having to pick out Sichuan peppercorns with each chopstick when eating. It's really a waste to read a book that I can obviously finish smoothly.

Hasn't it been written about other Jiedushi envoys occupying other states?

After reading thirty chapters, there is one point that I just can't stand anymore. Let's talk about it in the comment area The author has a big problem with reading this sentence. It's really uncomfortable to read. If I can finish a sentence, I just add an ellipse in the middle to break it into two paragraphs. And it's habitual. I often add ellipsis. I feel that the author may want to show that the protagonist is thinking, making it appear that the protagonist is more intelligent. But let's just say, it's so annoying all the time. In the first thirty chapters, there are hundreds of ellipses. Every time the protagonist goes through mental activities, he has to.... It's like the protagonist's cerebellum development is not perfect. It's really unbearable.

It was very frustrating to read. Isn't it a story about fighting for hegemony? It gave me the feeling that it was not as good as what I had read.

I would like to recommend my new book, "Thieves of the Han Dynasty", which started as a bandit. At the end of the Han Dynasty, there was no system.

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