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I can't finish ten chapters. The male protagonist's character is so bad and completely inconsistent with his identity before time travel. Moreover, the female protagonist is really disgusting. The white lotus and the virgin bitch are just right.

There are too many loopholes, the preface does not match the subtitles, and you never get distracted when reading novels, so you should also write novels carefully~_~!

I don't know what the author wants to write. Could it be that a time traveler used to write short stories without being able to discern the main and branch lines? The only thing is that the protagonist is showing off

Oh my god... In the early stage of Xiao Ling'er, the protagonist knew that he had other thoughts, and it was as if he had never seen a woman before. Well, later Qinchu comes, you see, the line of Mingjiao is actually really easy to write. The two people hurt each other in the collision, understand each other, tolerate each other, and can also promote the main line. Suddenly the author cut off this line directly, went out to fight, confused, and something happened when he came back later. Well, Mingjiao was directly abolished, Niu Niu. Let's talk about Xiang Ying, who came out halfway, because the emperor granted marriage to them, they went abroad once, and the proper protagonist of the palace was completely obedient to her, which made her numb. So what did you write in the first hundred or so chapters? Two women, writing poems, dating, crying, and entering the house? Will it become transparent later? You might as well go directly to the capital and meet Xiang Ying, which is about twenty chapters. If it weren't for the sign-seeking trap buried in front of her, Xiao Ling'er wouldn't even have to mention her name. If you only write a book based on the likes and dislikes of the book reviews, without an outline of your own ideas, and write it according to the character of the characters in the book, and change it day by day, is this possible...

After reading more than 110 chapters, I feel that the writing is quite good, but there are still too many loopholes in the protagonist's first battle. First, the Northern Qi emperor decentralized power so much that it is unimaginable. This is the "Han" dynasty (of course this is barely logical, after all, there are similar ones in history); second, the troops mobilized are so strange. To attack Qi Guo in the south and mobilize the border troops in the north? And the time is wrong. How can we go from the north to the vicinity of the Yangtze River so quickly? Could it be that the march could be hastened by another 600 miles? Thirdly, the Eighth Prince of the Northern Qi Dynasty was in danger of marching. Such a superior force was so desperate to use troops (of course there were some who used troops to take risks); fourthly, the crossing of the river was so smooth, with 40,000 to 50,000 people carrying horses, how could they cross the river so fast? The people of Qi State didn't realize it at all. They were worse than pigs. No matter how lightly we took it, this situation would never happen. Fifth, when the Northern Qi Dynasty had just crossed the river without deploying its troops, more than 10,000 Qi people were killed in the battle and more than 10,000 were injured... Unable to complain. Sixth, the two countries of Qi and Qi, which had fought with the Yangtze River as their boundary for decades, had no navy? There are no naval figures in a war of this scale...; Seventh, I feel that the weapons used in the article are not grenades, but mortars. Where grenades can be thrown that far, they can usually be thrown thirty or forty meters, and the range of bows and arrows should generally be one hundred and fifty meters. In short, the bombardiers cannot go up at all (and there are bugs that other military formations deal with here); Eighth, the gunpowder is made too fast. Can ten children prepare the gunpowder for three thousand mines so quickly? There are many other loopholes that I won't go into details one by one. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing war plots. It is better to describe it sideways or briefly mention it. But this was a plot that happened a long time ago, and it's useless to talk about it again. The reason why there are so many Bibi's stories is because I've run out of times to talk about them in this chapter.

I saw the big climax again, so I couldn't help but shamelessly write a book review 😁😁😁 First of all, I still have to complain about the military arrangement. All the 100,000 forbidden troops have left the city 😥😥 This is true...; The other is that there are not many guards around the emperor. Logically speaking, the emperor usually needs to take a thousand with him when he travels. Then he will be chased to the city gate. After leaving three to five hundred, our Prince Su will definitely not be able to enter the city. Well, these arrangements must have been made by Empress Xiao, it cannot be the famous general Wang Xiang, nor the author Jun 😏😏😏 Then there is Chen Jingzhi. For literati like Chen Jingzhi in history, I personally understand intellectually but disagree emotionally. To be honest, it would be better if this kind of person died as soon as possible. It's unpleasant to look at him. But this guy was really smart, and he committed suicide with a sense of justice. Otherwise, even if Prince Su let him go this time, the young emperor would still kill him in a few years. It would still be too late by then, and of course Prince Su couldn't wait a few more years. Then there is the choice of the protagonist. As we always say: unexpected, reasonable. Let's talk about what makes sense first. This is an official spoiler from the author himself. He briefly said that the main character is only the prince, and the author has no choice. In addition, Zhao Xian's psychological activities that appeared many times in the previous article are whether he wants to be Cao Cao, or simply Zhao Xian is biased to be Cao Cao, so it is not surprising to have this choice; another point is that if he chooses to be emperor, he will have to kill his nephew, and Zhao Xian probably won't be able to do it. Besides the unexpected, this should be the thinking of many book friends: I think the protagonist should just be the emperor. First of all, since a coup has been launched, then go straight to the sky without stopping to avoid long nights and dreams, because in Qi State, the protagonist has the theoretical right to inherit the country. If the emperor dies, and his nephew is dealt with, there will basically be no problem. Kill those who are dissatisfied. History has proven that killing is very effective. Secondly, no matter how powerful the regent is, there are two inevitable paths in the end. The first is to seize the throne through another coup, and the second is to end badly. This has been practiced by all the regents in history, not to mention someone like Zhao Xian who has launched a coup and even has a good death. How will future generations deal with it? Then, Cao Cao is not so easy to do, especially in the current environment. Cao Cao "holds the emperor's hand to command the princes." What are princes? It is a country of its own and does not belong to the power of the emperor. Zhao Xian's next step was to "hold the emperor in order to order the ministers." The ministers belonged to the emperor's power. Although Zhao Xian held several key positions in his hands, the people below were dissatisfied. The ministers were loyal to the emperor rather than the regent. This was a difference in stance and even interests. The ministers are not so easy to control, and most of them are acting in disguise. After all, Zhao Xian is not the emperor, and his reputation is not justified. Once the little emperor seizes the opportunity, he will be overturned. It is like the belt edict in the Three Kingdoms. It is impossible to guard against it. If it succeeds, Cao Gong will overturn. However, as a non-Qi nationalist who traveled to the past in modern times, maybe Zhao Xian can give us a surprise, just like he said to Xie Kang: Maybe I did it? Therefore, I look forward to more exciting plots from the author in the future.

Blast furnaces are used for making iron, the raw material is iron ore, and the product is pig iron. Steelmaking uses open-hearth furnaces and converters.

I hope I can collect 10,000 words in five updates a day

The beginning of this book is nonsense. The royal palace has no rice to cook with. Isn't this nonsense? Even a broken ship has three-inch nails, and a skinny camel is bigger than a horse. Writing a book should be more practical. Leave

This Xiao Ling'er is too poisonous. The protagonist is like a beauty she has never seen before. She becomes a licker when she sees her. Even if she gives money to the protagonist, she is not wholehearted. The protagonist is already good enough for her. The author insists on making the protagonist respond to her requests. This is extremely poisonous. I have died from the poison.

How do you say this at the beginning, and what is the background? In this context, do you dare to say that etiquette is not important? So here comes the question, no matter how stupid or stupid a member of the royal family is, as long as they are not explicitly abolished, a dignified prince and son will be bullied by a government servant at the beginning? I forget what rank this chief officer is, and he came up with an excuse to go out for three months. His political opponents joined the court, and none of them could escape. Does the royal family have no face? You can say something like that, but it represents the face of the royal family outside. Don't say who instigated it. You can secretly drug him or sap him. If you do it openly, are you kidding me, author? This has nothing to do with the modern thinking of the protagonist, but only to do with the surrounding environment. After experiencing the unification and division of the First Emperor, some legal concepts established by the First Emperor still exist, as well as the First Emperor's title class. In a dynasty that grew up in such an environment, how could members of the royal family be treated like this openly? This is immediately ruined from the beginning.

The writing is like shit, drunk, novice writing, primary school logic

Someone please help me, I'm already frothing at the mouth and falling to the ground after reading 20 chapters.

Is the author trying to fool us readers in Chapter 1? The ability to persuade people to quit cannot be surpassed in 20 years

What is it! The hereditary prince who founded the country. The whole palace is so poor that it can't even be passed on to the second generation. What a joke! As a prince, don't you have friends to take care of you? If he dies, all his property will be divided up. This looks so ugly. Even if the emperor wants to cut it off, he still has to save his face. How could it be possible for the hereditary prince II to die? Do you treat everyone else as a fool? The property of a prince's palace has been divided up, and the family has no foundation at all? Not even a faithful servant? What can I eat to be clean in three years? And a sister was suddenly sent down from the fucking sky. You said it's okay if it's a bit difficult. If you can't even afford food, let's just get over it. Don't you have any relatives by marriage? All dead? Even if you want to do it, you will have to kill all your relatives. An old friend was transferred away. The servants are white-eyed wolves. Now that all seven of his brothers have been killed, what is the main character left to do? Even if he is an idiot, why is it necessary? You've already done something so despicable, why waste your reputation? No memory. Behaving strangely. What's this? What a piece of shit!

Start with an old servant? Although the author is fictitious, he still connects it with history. This is a king, but no land? What if there is no official in the royal palace? There are also relatives in the palace, and relatives of the emperor. They are all dead. You are a rich man. The death of the old prince is not a trivial matter. There are specialties for the heir to the throne. If the heir is unconscious, then he will adopt someone from the side or something. I definitely can't wait for you to wake up. The bad start will be too much to watch.

To be honest, this book is far inferior to his "Wushuang Bastard". The protagonist is a white lotus, and there are some virgin bitches, and the methods are not ruthless enough.

Extremely poisonous, mentally retarded logic, you are so awesome, I read books for entertainment, I am the food and clothing parent of you who have enough money, your writing is a job or a part-time job, it is a way of survival that you choose. Rich second generation, you write any book, don't you just want people to read it, so that you can make money, you don't even know how hard it is to make money, you deserve to be thrown into the street. You walked slowly without sending it away, and you didn't make people complain about the poison you wrote. How can you be so awesome?

"The Concubine Wushuang" is well written, but the first chapter of "Jiangbai" is full of pitfalls. I just traveled through time and asked the old butler how to make money, and then went out to ask my brother, "You change so fast, do you really think others are fools?" ? Maybe the ancients didn't know what a time traveler and a reborn person were, but they still knew about the evil spirits from the outside world and the crazy ones. If the three golden chapters are not good, the results of this novel will definitely not be good either. Relying on late-stage saves is of use, who has so much time to see behind?

After reading three chapters, I feel like the author should go back to high school for another two years. Forget about the history department, you can graduate from high school first!

I can't figure it out! Why do such good ancient military-themed novels have such poor results? Hey~~Fantasy is really the rule now!

I like this book. The male protagonist is smart, has a measure of advance and retreat, and has a conscience. He is decisive and sinister when it is time to strike, and he retreats readily when it is time to retreat. The supporting characters are also great, with intelligence and uniqueness. There are very few books in Qidian that can write brilliant supporting characters, but many of the supporting characters in this book are very enjoyable. Especially the emperor, he is so wise and majestic that it's hard to dislike him. It's a bit sad to think that he is going to die... It would be great if he and Zhao Qi could be honest with each other like real brothers before he died. At least he wouldn't have to die so lonely and coldly. QAQ Well, it's unlikely, but I really like him. It's sad. The descendant of the general who achieved fame is also very impressive, and Sikong Xia is also quite interesting. As for Chen Jingzhi, he is annoying at first glance, but he is a powerful minister after all, and only by being hostile to Zhao Qi can the emperor feel at ease. At first glance, he has nothing to do... Haha, I like this book so much that I can't help but order it and read it in two or three days. I will start reading it next... I really like the details and plot in your book. Author, please write slowly, don't worry, the quality of the book is so good, more and more people will read it. I'm presenting you with a monthly ticket I booked~

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was told to keep a low profile and some people wanted him to die. But as a result, he participated in a poetry meeting and was so low-key. Isn't it contradictory? Since the higher-ups want to destroy your family, does the protagonist have any backbone? Shouldn't he be honest and do things that others can't think of? Also, as I said before, you have been crazy and stupid for three years. Now that you know someone is trying to harm you, you won't continue to pretend to be crazy and stupid? Anyway, in the eyes of others, are you really crazy and can't you hide your clumsiness? The author has writing problems, but the story is a good story. It's just that the main character is not well written.

The first book is the author's stain! In the early days of the Republic of China, not to mention the princes of the Qing Dynasty, even Beile Beizi and the Zong clan without titles were not so miserable! This is still a change of dynasty! Wouldn't it be good to raise a fool without changing the dynasty? He can no longer threaten the throne! If not, kill him! I was told to quit in the first few chapters!

You are awesome. Reading is a pastime for me, and I am the food and clothing parent for you who have enough money. Writing books is a job or a part-time job, and it is a way of survival that you choose. Rich second generation, you write books, don't you just want people to read them, so that you can make money. Money is hard to make and you don't even know how to eat shit. You deserve to be thrown into the street. You walked slowly without sending it away, and you didn't make people complain about the poison you wrote. How can you be so awesome?

I've read more than a dozen chapters, but I really don't understand. The title of the Prince of Qin. I said that if the emperor really regarded the protagonist's father as a thorn in his side, he would be a thorn in his side. Six brothers have already died of illness, so what's left of the protagonist to be a fool? It's already been done so ugly, don't others know? They were all dead, and suddenly a sister ran out. Wonderful. But if there is no such sister, I would also like to see what it is like behind the scenes. The protagonist said he wanted to keep a low profile, but ended up becoming famous by running a poetry club. Also, the mentality of the protagonist seemed to me like a clown. In the part where he received the imperial edict, his front legs were so scared that he was paralyzed, and his back legs were like beautiful women. This damn thing was beating too fast. I really don't know if he is a big-hearted person or an idiot.

Can a novice write articles? Ridiculous 🤫

The author is extremely loyal! 3 Books can make you an emperor, but you don't know the trap of Thux Didide? One of the powerful ministers and the emperor must die.

It's extremely poisonous. You are so cool. I read books for fun and provide enough food and clothing for you. Writing books is a job or a part-time job. It is a way of survival that you choose. Rich second generation, you write books because you want people to read them so that you can make money. It's hard to make money and you don't even know how to eat shit. You deserve to be thrown into the street. You walked slowly without sending it away, and you didn't make people complain about the poison you wrote. How can you be so awesome?

Why do you always recommend this author's online articles to me? This person writes too many poisonous points