One Piece: Starting with the Sharingan

It's too poisonous. Chapter 1 advises me to quit. As a pirate fan, I believe that in the pirate world, no one becomes stronger casually. Whether it is the Navy, the Four Emperors, or the Supernova, there is no strong person who does not have a strong talent and a character that can be carried out to the end. Every strong person on the sea has a distinctive personality. Being a pirate is not just playing house. If you don't have the determination to kill and be killed, how dare you become a pirate? With just a Sharingan, he still dares to call himself a member of the D clan, really. . . What kind of gadgets are recommended by the Qidian guide now?

Good guy, the main character is Ace's little brother. From now on, Zoro will be Luffy's little brother. It's really amazing 🙂

Why is Guina so awesome? Faster than the protagonist

It would be nice if Kuina's cause and effect is grafted onto the protagonist. This is not a pure anime, so who says Kuina can't be the protagonist's.

The writing is really rubbish. You can defeat Kuina without even learning anything. It is also said that her chest was deliberately chopped. I don't know whether it is because Kuina is not good at it or because the protagonist is not good enough. The weirdest thing is the custom-made shuriken. Has anyone told you that you know shuriken? Without explaining it, you have to know that Koushiro's hometown is the only country with shurikens. It's useless not to mention it. It's hard to add. It's not like the Hokage has specially produced one to buy. The protagonist also behaves like a child, not like a time traveler at all. The Sharingan ability is just an insight.

This book has been read to me at least five times. Please, please stop reading it to me. I was scared. I ordered it countless times and I wasn't interested. If you still wanted to give it to me, I vomited.

Stop reading, this is a bad book!

I feel like the author has no outline and keeps copying what he is saying. He is still mentally retarded and needs no independent opinions! Everyone who has watched One Piece knows that there are troubled times in it, except for Luffy! In the world of Chinese martial arts where the strong are respected, those who want to reach the top (people nowadays) know that they should first improve their strength before going to sea when they encounter bottlenecks, or find a way to go to the navy headquarters at the beginning. In one sentence: In troubled times, there is life and death in troubled times.

Good guy, I don't want to read this novel after reading the comments 😅

I saw that you used D for pig's feet in your introduction. You didn't even finish filling in the Oda pit. You started using D when you came up. I admire you for daring to write like this. Whoever reads your book after he finishes filling it will be embarrassed.