I’m Just an Extra in the Primordial World

One major flaw in fantasy novels is the tendency to internally criticize powerful figures in front of them. For a top-tier figure like Tongtian, whose name alone is enough to evoke a response, how could one dare to do so in front of him?

The most difficult aspect of prehistoric fantasy novels is that everyone can tell fortunes and powerful figures can read minds, whereas in Marvel and similar works, only a minority can read minds.

I recently read two novels about the prehistoric era. In one, after reaching the Great Luo realm, the protagonist leaves behind a clone. Once at the Great Luo level, the powerful figure travels to the chaotic myriad worlds to play. In the other, the Great Luo realm represents the true supreme being of all realms.

It's pretty good, but the name "Tai Shi" might not be up to par. That's a minor flaw. Also, avoid too much internal monologue; a protagonist with a bit more self-awareness is annoying. Otherwise, it's a genuinely good book, only standing out because of its competitors.

The protagonist just transmigrated and is already an immortal with no lifespan limit. Wouldn't it be better to find a place to survive the Investiture of the Gods era? He's clearly terrified of death, yet he dares to go and cause trouble at Zhou's camp? He's just a rogue immortal with no power or backing, and yet he possesses a treasure like the Fallen Treasure Coin—he's practically a master of courting death!

Making Yuanshi owe a great deal of karma is probably a joke. Let's see what happens to Hongyun first.

I've read dozens of chapters, and it's generally okay, except for one part that really annoyed me: the Daoist title: Tai Shi. How dare a minor character like the protagonist use such a name? Yuan Shi would probably turn you to ashes in an instant.

Who would believe that someone would dare to call themselves the Primordial Beginning? They'd be asking for death.

This protagonist keeps changing his mind: one minute he's saying he wants to live a carefree, easy life; the next he's going out to show off; then he says he's scared of dying; then he goes out to act recklessly. It's driving the viewer crazy, like he's having all sorts of split personalities.

The Five Primordial Immortals are among the most powerful beings in the primordial world. Good heavens, the protagonist isn't even a Great Luo Immortal, yet he dares to call himself the Primordial Daoist. And his cheat ability is just the Eye of Calamity. Can he withstand such a huge karmic burden? (The novel is very well written; I'm just complaining about the title. 😁)