The Zhang Clan's Cultivation Chronicles

This is my first time writing a book, so don't scold me if it's not good. I have read a lot of novels about immortals and family cultivators. I want to write a family story from my heart. If something is not written well, please give me some pointers.

Seeing this, let me tell you my opinion. So far, the protagonist has not contributed anything to the family. It can be said that he has always been for himself. Even if he doesn't use it, he won't give it to the family. For example, if he gets a high-level pill, his parents won't give him one. If he practices high-level skills, he can hand-copy a copy and hand it over to the family. If not, his parents will not tell him. His ancestors spent their whole lives to grow their family and did not have the opportunity to practice to the late stage of Golden elixir. The protagonist got the elixir left from the Nascent Soul stage. Should you give it to your father and ask him to give one to your ancestor? Regardless of whether it is useful or not, at least the ancestor knows that everyone is working hard for his family!

After looking at the first three pictures, I feel that they have a bit of that flavor, but in any case, the segmentation is relatively poor. I think too much about what I want to write. It's better to go step by step. It gives me a headache to output so much at once.

I feel that the protagonist should give the harvest from the cave to his family. No matter how powerful you are alone, how can you be as powerful as your family? A person has to make elixirs, grow herbs, raise spiritual beasts, practice, and practice swordsmanship.

It's so shameful, I started plagiarizing from ordinary people just by writing.

Raised to death

The biggest problem in the early stage is that the family conspiracy is taken as the main plot, and the protagonist is marginalized. The biggest test of family flow is the balance between the family and the protagonist.

Such vulgar plagiarism, the work of a primary school student.

I still hope that the author can widen the gap between the big realms and turn it into an insurmountable gap. The protagonist can be invincible in an equally big realm, but it is best not to cross the big realm. Only in this way can the difference between the big realms be highlighted.

After reading seventy or eighty chapters, it is basically a running account, and all kinds of unreasonable and inconsistent details can be seen everywhere.