From the Start, I Became the Black Cutter

The worst thing in writing a novel is to indulge in self-indulgence, moving the author while disgusting the reader.

Transformation weapons have a cooldown, right? Well, take your time to cool down. I'll come back to check on you in ten or twenty years.

Self-indulgence is fine, but the author's approach is terrible. If others criticize you, you can argue with them or ignore them. You write novels for your own enjoyment or money, right? Why insist on making it featured? If the writing is good, that's one thing, but if it's really bad, it's better to let people leave peacefully.

The descriptions of the exciting moments are too drawn out, with half of the main text consisting of inner monologues and self-praise, and very little actual substance. Skipping pages won't make much of a difference. The dialogue of the extras is too long.

The books on Qidian are getting worse and worse. I really want to go back to the period from 2012 to 2017, when all the heroes were vying for supremacy. Now look at what kind of garbage they are writing.

The author's writing is good, but the premise is weak. The protagonist should be made indestructible; an indestructible broken sword would be the most appealing element. If it could be destroyed, the protagonist would be smashed in the next chapter because he really couldn't do anything. Artifacts are like that; if someone can't protect them, they'll have to destroy them.

Write more from the male protagonist's perspective, stop rambling on and on. Where's the word count? Before subscriptions, it might only reduce the number of readers, but after subscriptions, I guarantee most of the remaining readers will either go to pirated versions or the author will abandon the project.

Why is he always so bizarre? He was only able to become a Black Cutter because of the system, but he never thought to check on it until he was about to be melted down. It's utterly inexplicable. What was he doing before? Was he in a state of impotent rage? Did he only think of escaping when his backside was on fire?

The writing is alright; it reads quite naturally.

This is a book that belongs solely to the author; none of us are worthy to read it. If you still want to see, listen to me and don't read it. On Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), whenever there's a book where the protagonist becomes a weapon, their master is always a woman. It's disgusting. The author made me want to vomit. I'm not worthy to read your book. Thank you, goodbye.