The Outcast: Night Watchman

Ace Censor looks good, but it's a pity

Not much to say, it is too embarrassing to write about foreign countries, an organization can compete with the country, and it is also too embarrassing to write about Japan... What I want to say is why almost all those who write about little devils always write about Japan as very powerful. Weakness has passed, and now we are strong. What kind of strength can an American dog have? Without its beautiful father, it would be like riding a horse in Tokyo and enjoying the cherry blossoms.

I saw the protagonist in Chapter 128 going to a meeting. It's outrageous that the Dragon Kingdom is only supported by the Heavenly Master. Let's not talk about the Chinese people's habit of hiding their secrets. How did they develop into a big country without masters?

You said you want a single female protagonist, what about the other girls? Giving away a daughter?

It feels like the author really treats the protagonist as a savior. Why does one person work so hard? If you said that the company sent more people to do it together, I have nothing to say. It feels like you are just doing it with your face in your hands. If the sky falls, there will be tall people to support it. What if Leviathan revives? Can he still succeed in fighting peaceful weapons? Using the overlord of 1,000 years ago to challenge today's technology feels like a middle-class feeling like a mysterious boy who was selected to become a hero who saves the world.

If you don't want to write, just finish it and cut it thoroughly.

Write more about Xia He, 👴 I love reading it

Come on, come on, come on, it's very interesting, but the relationship between Xia He and Zhang Lingyu is gone (the author said that the protagonist and Xia He took each other for the first time), then Zhang Lingyu can practice Yang Wu Lei. The subsequent plot development is not easy to develop. I personally think this is a pitfall. It depends on how the author writes the subsequent plot.

I feel that the portrayal of the character in the novel deviates too much from the original work. Bi Lian is a senior sixth child, but the portrayal is a bit silly. The clean little uncle is known for his good temper, so he is portrayed as a grumpy old man. Of course, he has not met Bi Lian. Chen Duo does not want to add emotional scenes. She is a Gu body holy child who only has some emotions in the end. I hope it doesn't make too much of a show. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch now.

This protagonist is really stupid, he obviously has a lot of weaknesses, but he still dances so happily