The Outcast: Night Watchman

The movie "Ace Censor" is good, it's a pity it's over.

Enough said. They portray foreign countries as incredibly powerful, depicting an organization as capable of fighting against a nation, and they also portray Japan as incredibly powerful… What I want to say is why almost every book about the Japanese portrays them as so formidable. We were weak in the past; we are strong now. What power can America's lackeys have? Without their American daddy, we would be trampling Tokyo and enjoying the cherry blossoms.

When I read Chapter 128, where the protagonist went to the meeting, it was absurd that only the Old Master was holding the fort in the Dragon Kingdom. Putting aside the fact that Chinese people are accustomed to keeping their strengths hidden, how could a country develop into a great power without a master?

You said you want a single female lead, what about the other women? Send them away?

It feels like the author really treats the protagonist like a savior. Why is he working so hard all by himself? If you said the company sent more people to do it together, I wouldn't have anything to say. But it feels like he's just shamelessly doing it all by himself. There's always someone taller to hold up the sky. So what if Leviathan is resurrected?

If I don't want to write anymore, I'll just end it directly, cutting it off completely.

Write more about Xia He, I love reading!

Keep it up, it's really good! The only problem is that Xia He and Zhang Lingyu's relationship is over (the author says the protagonist and Xia He took each other's virginity), so Zhang Lingyu can now practice Yang Five Thunder Techniques. The subsequent plot development might be a bit tricky. Personally, I think this is a big cliffhanger; we'll see how the author writes the rest of the story.

I feel the character portrayals in this adaptation deviate too much from the original novel. Bi Lian is supposed to be a seasoned sixth brother, but he's portrayed as a bit dim-witted. The virtuous and well-mannered junior uncle is famously good-natured, but he's depicted as a hot-tempered older brother—of course, before he even met Bi Lian.

This protagonist is truly stupid; he has so many weaknesses, yet he jumps around so enthusiastically.