A Foreigner's Journey

I just finished reading the One Punch Man volume, which is more than half of the book. I will probably continue reading it later, but there are some things that I am not happy about. Mingming's fan fiction parts are generally well-written, and the various pretense and manipulation operations are so complete that you can't stop reading them. You can tell at first glance that you are not a novice. But when it comes to the original characters and other foreigners, it's like writing it by a different person. They still use the torture-explosion routine from Qidian more than ten years ago. The key point is that they haven't exploded yet. They will continue to be tortured next time. Eat, every time I'm either getting beaten up and crawling all over the place, I have to rely on plot characters to save the situation, or I hope the opponent will be merciful, and I'm so cool... I can't find any reason to become stronger other than revenge and survival, right? You must know that the uniqueness of the protagonist is one of the most important and exciting points in the manga. I wonder if this author can't help but want to write group portraits. Online novels and group portrait dramas = no priority. Whoever writes the story will die. He can't even control the squid. The supporting characters and enemies are so awesome. Who do you want the readers to take their place? So the way group portraits are written in online novels is a typical example of self-interest that is well-received but not popular (Uchiha Suzan is not included, strictly speaking, he is also part of the protagonist). For example, why are the settings of several other foreigners so awesome? The Romance of the Three Kingdoms would be a hit if serialized in the current online novel environment... I actually have a rough idea of ​​what the author is thinking. I want every character I write to have its own style. However, the reality is that a world where no one is hurt does not exist. Some people are bright and others are dim. Everyone is bright, which means everyone is mediocre. We generally call this phenomenon of thinking well but actually writing it out to make people feel bad, literary youth. I seldom say so many words in comments. I really can't help it. The author's fan fiction is so beautiful. It's from Luo Qing's level. I can't give up. However, the original plot is really bad. I kept turning the page and didn't want to read a word. The protagonist is too clown. The last time I had this twisted feeling was when I read a blood-red book many years ago, and that guy was also a master at committing suicide. This book seems to be almost finished. It is estimated that there will be another wave of new people, so let's give them a vaccination. This book is still worth reading as a whole, and it is better to have a premonition of breaking the defense than to suddenly break the defense. I don't know if the author can see it. Maybe what I said is a bit harsh, but I really suggest that if you want to create a character, please go to the original area and let yourself go. Don't put poison in your fan fairy grass. Thank you, it's really difficult.

There is no problem with the author's ability, but this achievement is all dragged down by the niche world.

It is a very, very, very unique work. Maybe it was my preconception that it had a bit of the popular appeal of ordinary astronomy in the early stage. But as the author unfolded the story line, the unique temperament of this work gradually became apparent. Currently, the author has written more than two million words. In my opinion, his creative idea can be summed up in two words, that is "fun". The author will write whatever he thinks is interesting, the strength and ability of the character? It's enough. Besides, except for a few moments of failure, the main character basically outshines the plot by overwhelming his appearance. Under this creative idea, the protagonist Heather is a very typical fun-loving person, but his character setting and shaping are also very interesting. In terms of talent, he is an unimaginable super genius, but in terms of personality, he is actually very biased towards "ordinary people". This does not mean that he is mediocre, but that he has no part of his character that can be called inhuman. He likes to play around, show off, and have fun. He will become autistic when encountering setbacks, and he will be reckless when he gets emotional. His abilities and status as a foreigner also give him an exaggerated level of troublemaking. The author throwing him into a story is like smashing a meteorite into it. The protagonists of Hunter World, Caribbean World and Monster Hunter World are still in a period of pure growth, with limited abilities and limited fun. However, starting from the One Piece world, this enthusiasm for fun began to overflow. The author's writing style also began to leave a deep impression on me at this stage. I have read many One Piece fans, and it is extremely rare to be able to write such an exaggerated and free temperament. As the plot progresses, the clone abilities developed from the Naruto arc can be said to be amazing. I read a lot of other discussion posts and think that this clone is a failure. I feel that the author does not consider maximizing the protagonist's combat power and just does these extravagant activities, which is purely self-pleasure. But from my personal point of view, this clone is not only It means that the protagonist can wear more vests to do things, and the ability behind it to hypnotize the world and force the plot settings is the most interesting. The author can come up with all kinds of crazy and cool characters and plot settings and stuff them into the original plot. With the taste and level shown by the author so far, I don't think it will produce anything vulgar and boring. Of course, the Chainsaw Man chapter is really good. I can even feel that the author gave up a lot of plot deductions and finally chose this path of conquering the gun demon at high speed. This is because after really starting to write this kind of psychotic work, he found that the fun of inserting Heather into it was limited, so he simply ended it quickly and advanced the Death Chapter. But I don't doubt the author's level. In addition, I still hope that the author can maintain his own style. Come on.

What I wrote above is really great, it makes me feel like watching Samsara Paradise, but it's a pity that Final Fantasy collapsed. The emotional drama was a complete failure. 😭

To be honest, when I saw that I was going to write about Final Fantasy, the first thing that came to my mind was ff14 However, the subject matter of this series is indeed quite rare, so I hope I can continue writing it

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It is enough to recast 30% at the beginning, but then it is only 50% when summarizing.

I was shocked. Two monthly passes were given to me.

After recuperating a punch, he suddenly came back and found that Qi Shi was dead and Heather was brutally washed. It can only be said that it is very uncomfortable. In the final analysis, the author's description of the upgrade of the protagonist's combat power is too flat, and Heather's growth is suppressed. In fact, I also like reading this book. What I like about it is the author's setting and the fashionability of skills, as well as the image of Heather as a wanderer who travels through the heavens. Also, there is a character I like, Nanami. It can be said that I insisted on watching it precisely because I saw the story of You Dao Yu. The author is trying different writing styles in each volume, including invincible flow, hot-blooded flow, legion flow, and even the behind-the-scenes flow. Heather's character also has different changes. Of course, this is the result of the author's manipulation, but I noticed that there is always a lazy and leisurely side to Heather's character. I guess this may be related to the author's original setting. The author of this book may be showing the various worlds of the two-dimensional comics in his mind. Therefore, Heather's journey is actually to travel the world of comics on behalf of the author. Just think about it, if we were able to travel around the comic book world, and we could cope with most situations and live a smooth life, would you focus on more of the world's scenery, or would you choose to work hard to strengthen yourself? Some people will choose the former, and some people will choose the latter. Now it seems that the author himself may be more inclined to the former. From this, the author's own thoughts were projected onto Heather, resulting in the current situation. This style is a bit like the old cartoons. I still remember the book "Girls' Contract" that I read when I first came into contact with cartoons. The protagonist also suddenly encountered a super-sized enemy in the middle and late stages, and then sacrificed himself and was washed away, and then played the rematch again. Does this seem to be a common problem among people who came from that era? It seems that the author is already an old two-dimensional person. Today's comprehensive comic novels are more or less in the invincible or semi-invincible genre. There is a clear path for the protagonist to upgrade, or it can be said to be an upward exponential trend, and the snowball will get bigger as it goes on. Therefore, it is very easy for the combat power to collapse in the later stage. Therefore, I rarely see the author's writing method of flat combat power upgrade nowadays, although it is just to suppress the combat power. Because the author's focus is not on Heather's upgrade, he thinks that Heather's task is to show him the scenery in the comic book world. But for Heather, this is unfair. You used the collapse of his character and the things he finally had to gain your own satisfaction, and then you negated everything about him in a bad way, just like destroying a pile of sand castles on the beach. As a result, Heather looks like a clown in our eyes. You create the character, and you limit his growth to keep him where you want him to be. Let him be a child who will not grow up. Now he is using destruction to make him grow. And it is not yet known whether this growth is real growth. The upgrade of combat power is absolutely linked to the characters. Although the author's approach is somewhat reasonable, after all, the main tone is similar to that of Zhutian Travel. But sow the cause and reap the fruit. Going too smoothly will eventually lead to big setbacks in your life journey. Long-term success will slowly blind a person's mind. Sometimes he may have discovered his own problems, but he always wants to stay in his comfort zone and have some luck. So Heather tasted her own pain, lost and had, had and lost, and it was through such lessons that the boy continued to grow into a man. The protagonist of this book is more like an ordinary person, I mean ordinary people like us, so when we see him, we will be angry and sad for his misfortune. Isn't there some shadow of myself? You won't understand some things until you have suffered a big loss. So I am willing to give him more tolerance. But in the final analysis, this is a work of pleasure from the author's own heart. There are many creative problems or poisonous points. But things have come to this, the past cannot be pursued, and what is lost cannot be brought back. After all, this is a fantasy world. The important thing is to regret and correct mistakes by facing them head-on. So in the next volume, whether Heather can fulfill her vow to Qishi is an important turning point for this character and this book. If you can work hard and step forward alone, you have grown up. If you are a man, it is not too bad. If you still write in the same style as before and just write words that are bad in words but actually bad, then it will really be bad. I don't know if the author has seen the problem with the current copy. Although everyone is here to watch the comprehensive comic, it is also time to lay out your own background and world settings. The subsequent plot can be written around the strangers, supplemented by dungeons, and it can be 64 or 55 open. (This is what the plot after Naruto should have done. Although the author wrote it, he only wrote about 10 to 20% of the outsiders at most, and they continued to strengthen the enemy.) So, the waste stream has been written, and the next one is the repentant genius' revenge stream, right? Heather, can you do this? Author, can you do it? I haven't written a long review for a long time. I don't mean to criticize the author. I really like this book, so now I am a little disappointed but also looking forward to a good result in the end. The manga is no longer here, and I hope Heather can reach the final destination of his journey. Respect the journey of foreigners.

First of all, let me say that this is not a sarcasm. I am quite happy to see a hunter fan, but you cannot tell lies without conscience, and it will not help the author. After reading four chapters, the writing style is weird, the main plot is unclear, and the protagonist's character is unconventional and weird. With so many disappointing factors gathered together, there is a high chance that this book will be a hit. Also, if the title of the book is changed to include the words hunter or full-timer, it will attract more fans. The current title of the book is not concise.

What do you say? I feel that as the protagonist travels through different worlds, the character of the protagonist has been floating. After One Piece, I feel that the protagonist has a tendency to become a reckless man. He always thinks that he has great advantages, and then the fantasy volume is crushed by Sephiroth's IQ. Obviously you can pass the test very easily, but you have to make it sloppy. I hope this Holy Grail War volume will be better.

To be honest, if the author's writing was not good, I would have deleted the book a long time ago. The character of the protagonist is very unlikable and even a bit disgusting, and the growth of the protagonist is too long and stinky. I have no problem with the protagonist growing up, but after more than 3 million words, the protagonist is still growing, and the funny thing is that the protagonist seems to have grown up after experiencing some things in the previous world, but the next world is still the same, which makes me feel sick to my stomach.

It has been collapsing ever since the Legion Weapon Man appeared. It is really hard to accept the change from the invincible flow to the behind-the-scenes flow.

The beginning of Pirates is very interesting, but I feel like the author is starting to let himself go. Because after choosing a camp, you have to do what the camp does, and the bottom line of the protagonist's character can still fluctuate 😐

Originally, it seemed that Heather was having fun pretending to be cool, but I didn't think twice about it. After thinking about it carefully today, I found that the protagonist's strength has not improved much from Naruto to Chainsaw Man to Death to God Killer in four consecutive worlds.       ，，， Chainsaw Man belongs to the transitional world and has little improvement, so I won't make any comparison. When it comes to Death, the most outrageous thing is here. He completely controls the murderous sword and defeats the omniscient and omnipotent Habach in nine seconds. In the world of God Killer, he can't even explode stars. In the world of Death, the murderous sword is raised so high. As a result, only with the blessing of the will of the world can he achieve "a giant typhoon covering half of the planet." To be honest, it's not half as good as "Flowing Blade Like Fire" Swastika. In the world of God Killer, it seems that the powerful players are not good at it. However, the actual combat performance depends entirely on the "curse power" and "divine power". In the end, the player is longer than the blue bar. Later, I looked through the comment area and found that a buddy was right. Heather's concept is not "weapons" but "carrying weapons." I have never practiced seriously, all my moves rely on copying, and all my skills rely on natural growth. I kept pretending day after day, only to be beaten by Pluto.       ，， I'm just pretending not to understand.

The famous river god once said: The Milky Way is also a river. What does this mean? The so-called strength or weakness of a "concept" is meaningless, only having the "right to define" and "the right to interpret" a "concept" is meaningful. ………… In my opinion, Heather's so-called improvement in strength is a "physical" and conventional improvement. The only thing that surprised me was the recasting of the "Sword" into Heather's ability system. I thought that the author finally started to improve Heather's level and let her truly join the ranks of "powerful people in the world". It's a pity that after that, she just kept writing mindless and cool articles. There are even some worlds that can't even be "cool". ………… Then what is "metaphysical"? Let the protagonist "define" and "explain" what a "weapon" is. This is what I consider "metaphysical". Example: Lies don't hurt, the truth is the sharpest knife. Truth=quick knife→Truth=knife, knife=weapon→Truth=weapon. Heather brought the "truth" under his control by mastering the concept of "weapon" and applying the above formula. Another example: In the multiverse, there are strong people who can "throw" planets as a way of fighting. Therefore, for strong people, "planet" is also a weapon, so Heather can use the concept of "weapon" to control the planet. ………… Netizens have discussed the ability like "concept" too much. It is generally accepted that as long as it is a "concept", it is not weak, only human imagination is weak. Heather is like Thor in the "Thor" movie in the author's writing. Are you Thor? No, you are the God of Hammers. Without Mjolnir, you are nothing.

After reading a little bit, author, do you want to change the protagonist in one volume? ? The characters keep changing, and then the plot is forced to be watered down, and the plot is forced to open at 55

I think whether a life tool is strong or not is secondary. There are too many powerful things in various works. The plot needs to have the characteristics of "difficult to conquer" If you combine the two characteristics of "powerful" and "difficult to conquer", then either the acquisition conditions are difficult or the weapon is "alive" Original characters such as "Reaper's Jade" and "Gundam" can be copied and remade, and items without souls can only become T1-level treasures and cannot become life tools "The Four Souls Jade" is difficult to obtain in its entirety, difficult to master, and is in line with fate. It has the characteristics of a tool, but its strength is weak, and "Cong Yunya" can be planned to be in the ranks of life tools as long as the difficulty of obtaining it is increased by one order The "Principle of the Circle" can affect the principles of God in the parallel world. There is no doubt that it has the status of a life tool. Compared with this, QB gives others The special ability of witch transformation can only be regarded as a side dish, and Homura's reversal of time is a bit interesting The "Sacrifice Snake" Shakugan Shana has a real creation level. If she can become a Fire Mist Warrior through him, it must be a life tool level, but that is something that the original work cannot do. As for the "Zero Hour Mystery", although it has the power of a life tool level, the difficulty of obtaining it is too low, so it is simply a waste Needless to say, "Infinity Stones", Marvel is the most qualified to become a life tool " The power of elves in "Elf Spirit Costume" Date A Live is unique but has varying strengths. The ones that appear in the later stages are remarkable, and their power against the country involving cause and effect time and space is pretty good "Curo Cards" must be found one by one. Seeking recognition one by one, raising the difficulty by two levels is enough to be called a life tool "God's Whip", "Heaven-shaking Seal" and "Twelve-grade Golden Lotus" are T0 level artifacts in myths. Needless to say, there are additional concepts of laws, and It has spirituality and even weapon spirit Some of the familiar beasts in the later period of "Blood-devouring Beasts" feel a bit too exaggerated. The original author's writing power can't control it. There are things like freezing time and space, devouring time and space, and there are monsters that can travel through time. Time "Sekiryuutei's Cage" There are actually many God-destroying tools in Demon High School that can be used as life tools. They are powerful enough and only in quantity, and using too much will be life-threatening "Havista. Simulated Star Creation Chart" The problem child comes from the late period of another world. The law-based gift. To obtain it, you must win the final trial of mankind, have the powerful qualifications for life tools, or seize various solar sovereignty in the original work. It is also possible to use it as a life tool Moon type The most candidates for life tools are the Beast's "Grand Temple of Time", "Ti Ma's Sea of Origin of Life", and "Primate Killer", each of which is a unique and almost uncontrollable killer sword, or the "White Giant Sefalu" and "Slash the Emperor" that specialize in civilizations and planets, the "Mercury UO Spider", an invincible plot that covers areas covered by alien rules, or the "Elquit" that smashes the moon, or the lunar computer "Mooncell" that records everything and calculates all the past and future Automaton" The special thing about Xingyue's Noble Phantasm is that it is not even an object. It can be a concept, a physique, a skill, or even a false legend. As long as it is strong and special enough, it may become a life tool after being stripped off. Some of them can also be strengthened with composite spiritual bases Actually, I think the destiny tool still depends on the foreigner's own compatibility. For example, the female stranger with the color concept of "Spectrum". If she contracts Van Gogh of FGO, then even if it is not a life tool, it is comparable to a life tool for her. Of course, it is also possible that she will be driven crazy by the "Color of Stars" first Those are the only things I can think of at the moment

I'm not holding back, you say he's overrated, but the protagonist is not weak, you say he's strong, but the protagonist always suffers, is there a problem with the author's writing or is there something wrong with me🤣

It's very torturous to have amnesia at one time and another. The key is that there are too few, so the events seem to unfold slowly, and the perception is getting worse and worse. . .

Let's put it this way, since the beginning of Final Fantasy, I have been waiting for the end of this chapter to go to the next world. There are so many chapters and I haven't read a single one. I neither play Final Fantasy nor am I familiar with the plot, so I have no sense of involvement. I'm going to the next world with my own blood. I've been waiting for many months.

After seeing Final Fantasy, I have to complain. I was played by the villain throughout the whole process, and I no longer look like a time traveler. How do you understand the plot? How about the accumulation of several worlds? What did I see?

What the author writes is just a clown. What "weapons", "universe", "props" and "power" are just blowing, and what's the result? Is this a weapon concept? Isn't Heather's ability the ability to bring weapons to other worlds? His strength really hasn't improved at all, he's just a clown. It's not as good as Pluto. They bring machines, you bring weapons, their fire source has infinite energy, Heather's clones share a blue bar, and all their machines are dispatched. Your Moxi is offline all the time, and you can't open a wood escape. You have used up all the accumulation in the previous world. You can't put it together. There is no mana every minute after putting it together. The machine can be resurrected and strengthened. Your weapon is the best. What it was before is still what it is now, without enhancements, the Unicron explodes the star, you are a misty dragon with a unique move, and you need the storm god of all gods to charge you, pure clown Now it seems that Heather's concept is not "weapon", it should be "carrying weapons", there is no such kind of concept that all plants and trees can be used as swords, it is just to bring out the weapons that people know can be used to fight.

I feel that the most awesome thing about this book is that it reaches the upper limit of strength in the third copy. This is the 13th copy. The highest limit of strength is still in the third copy. The ten copies after the third copy are all about broadening the width and controllability of power. This is the first time I have seen such a circular upgrade book. It is so awesome.

In the middle period, the master has begun to abuse, so you must read this book with self-respect. In the middle period, the master has begun to abuse, so you must read it with self-respect.

After reading this book on QQ, I couldn't help but want to complain in the comment section here. Did the author write for too long and forget about Tifa and Alice? Can he open a side story to give them a good ending?

It's all finished. Let's copy and update the routine protagonist's attributes one last time to see what it looks like in the end.

The author writes well, you are 👍🏻, the coverage is too wide, even a more than 10-year old man has some works that I don't know about. The writing is first-rate and the plot is very good. The ending is smooth and smooth. It's very good ദ്ദി(•˕•マ.ᐟ, Looking forward to the author's next work

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