Pirate's Steel Chain Finger

A very good pirate fanfic. It's the one with the least poisonous points that I've watched for seven or eight years. ①The protagonist is not a time traveler. From the side description of the protagonist's "apocalypse" in the ending, it is more like a pirate native who has read the memory of an earthling and achieved alternative omniscience. In fact, in my opinion, this setting is better than the protagonist settings of many time travelers or ignorant natives. It's not that there is any difference in terms of plug-ins, but that the mentality is different. The protagonists of most fan fiction are time-travelers. There are two major categories in this category. One is to clear the level as if it were a game. They are like rootless duckweeds in this fan world. The author who created them is just to make readers happy, and there is no core in essence. The other part of the time traveler protagonist wears the skin of the red spirit to make a revolution, completely ignoring the difference in world view and era. Just like Long Aotian, a little red spirit skin popping out of his mouth can shock a large number of people. To follow him as a saint, if the writing style is not suitable, it will look very dramatic and politically correct. But for the indigenous protagonist who doesn't know anything about the plot, it also makes many readers who have read fan works for a long time feel as uncomfortable as constipation. There are very few people who can write this kind of protagonist well. ②The protagonist's combat power system is actually not bad. Although it does not focus on describing the growth of the domineering system, it is actually not bad. After all, the protagonist's combat power is more reflected in the development of fruits. Since the setting is not about mediocrity in combat, then don't describe a genius as a mediocre person. How many authors describe a genius as someone who struggles to learn everything. In fact, it is just to reduce the number of words, but the work will appear to be bloated. In my opinion, the protagonist's three-color domineering is also very reasonable for the protagonist. This kind of protagonist is worthy of the overlord-colored domineering and high-level weapons, not to mention that one of the protagonist's plug-ins is the natural color of knowledge. Many people think that the protagonist's Devil Fruit is too powerful, but since the author also set Im's ability to be the power of Devil Fruit, there is actually nothing to say. It's also quite reasonable. Moreover, it takes the protagonist 8 years to surpass Im's 800-year-old fruit ability, and it is set that Im has eliminated the shortcomings of the fruit (fear of the sea and self-consciousness of the fruit), thus making the protagonist slightly better than Im. It's pretty cool in my opinion. After all, as long as a person has a normal IQ and has the ability to eliminate his own weaknesses, he will never leave any weaknesses, whether he is a person in the pirate world or a real person. If you are given a choice, you will not leave a fruit with no weaknesses unselected and choose a fruit with obvious weaknesses. So, has Im himself been deceived? In fact, many people are worried about the death of the protagonist. But in fact, I am a reader who hates bloody knives. For the first time, I felt that the protagonist of this book died because of the fate he chose. Since the protagonist's ideal is to overthrow the world government, the key to defeating Im is to disable Im's immortality surgery and prevent his countless resurrection methods. Then the protagonist will link Im's destiny by himself, exchanging his own end for Im's end. In my opinion, this is not a bloody death, but a sacrifice he chose. Without the support of a system or messy plug-ins, if the protagonist can avoid death through something, then there is no reason why Im's 800-year-old heritage can't do it. It is because I have been reading books for so many years that I feel relieved about the death of my favorite protagonist.

To be honest, this novel is really well written. Both in terms of conception and writing. I have been reading novels for seven or eight years. When I see a good one, I can't help but recommend it. I also hope you can recommend it more. I'm very confused as to why this novel isn't recommended. It's obviously much better than some recommendations.

The beginning is mediocre and not attractive enough, but as it goes on it becomes exciting. The middle paragraph is very exciting, the various combat descriptions are well done, the combat power increases not too slowly, and it also feels like pretending to be B. Now I see the establishment of a hunter association, which is about pirate fandom. If you don't become a pirate, you can still watch it, but if you set up an association to hunt pirates, it will change the flavor. I give up the book, you are not my taste Your writing is good, but we have different paths and do not agree with each other. I can only support you so far

Come on, author, your writing is very good. I have read the original work. Those fans who are purely YY are not interesting at all. I only like you who expand new plots in the world view. Isn't this interesting?

After reading dozens of chapters, let me briefly comment on this book and my opinions on many fan fictions First of all, the zipper cheat idea is great, and the first part is quite comfortable to read. The first flaw is that Robin jumped into the protagonist's arms. I was shocked by this. It can be said that Robin is the character with the most distinctive personality portrayed by Oda. From the encounter on Ohara Island to being chased by the World Government, her character has become extremely rational. It can be said that she is the least likely to do such an act of throwing herself into the arms. The second one is the protagonist's growth rate and whether defeating Moria is worth immediately alerting the World Government and the Five Old Stars. Of course, this can be explained by hanging, and everyone's understanding of pirates is different. The third thing is that you can feel that the author suppresses the male characters in One Piece. This is not surprising in male-channeled novels, but it also made me unable to read it. I don't want my favorite characters to become villains or annoying. Of course, this does not mean that I don't like fan works. Some of the fan works from the beginning are great. For example, there are a few Marvel works that restore the characters of the characters in the original works to seven or eight points, and at the same time make up for the regrets in the original works. This kind of works is worth reading.

Let me start with the title, this book is great! Highly recommended. The protagonist of this book is my favorite type among the novels I have read. He is gentle and elegant, has a clear distinction between good and evil, attaches great importance to love and justice, is decisive in killing, and does not deliberately pretend to be sexy! I have been reading novels for more than ten years. I have read basically all kinds of books. To be honest, I am more and more disgusted with the protagonists in some books now - they are skinny, talkative, and ruthless. They are not stable at all and give people the feeling of being unreliable. Maybe I used to like watching funny protagonists when I was young, but now that I'm older, I feel more disgusted with them the more I watch them. The protagonist in this book is my favorite type. Although I have not read Jojo, it does not affect my reading. Moreover, the plot of this book is innovative. It is different from some traditional One Piece fans. I have basically read all the One Piece fans. Only this protagonist is eye-catching and I can't help but like it. Highly recommended. This is my first time writing this kind of book review. I hope the author will work hard.

The author writes so well! It was supposed to be recommended, but it couldn't be updated enough! You can only watch slowly!

I just read a dozen chapters, and I think it is a very well written book, so I followed it 😁

Don't be in a hurry, write slowly. As a new author, I look forward to seeing you become a god with one book. I haven't seen such a wonderful pirate article in a long time.

I think the protagonist's ability is a bit too limited. It just attacks based on the sharpness of the chain without any new ideas. You can refer to Sister Bu's substitute ability. Sister Bu's substitute can open a zipper on that person after attacking the human body, so can we think about it? Make the protagonist's steel chain parasitize other people, and then consume other people's physical strength to use the ultimate move continuously, or open a zipper vertically or horizontally on the enemy's body, split it in half and then cancel the ability.

Write well and grasp the outline well, not bad

This book is great, cheers for the author

I kind of understand why the author's performance is so dismal. There are too many original plot characters in the book. It's not that it's not good, but there are too many. After reading it for a long time, it will become boring. If you don't write the plot of the original characters, and write your own original plot characters, it will inevitably make people think that it is selling sheep's heads and selling dog meat.

So far, it seems that there are no flaws at all. The writing is really good. I hope the author can be more creative and develop more moves.

Damn it, this book is the only one among all the Pirates fics I have read that is close to Oda's Devil Fruit setting. When I saw the latest issue of the manga, Luffy's rubber fruit directly transformed into the form of the human fantasy beast Nika, I was immediately reminded of this book. I can only say that the author is awesome! ! ! ! !

The ending of the tragedy reminded me of Bucciarati. Although it feels a bit like a literary youth, Bucciarati with steel chain fingers is the embodiment of enlightenment, and Victor perfectly inherited this will. This is the one in One Piece that makes me feel the most perfect when writing JOJO.

What do you think of these three generals?

The image of the big brother, Bucciarati's ability, ennnnnnnnnnnnn

The author is invincible. Oda may not have read your novel before updating.

It took me a week to read this book. Although it is not a top-notch book, it is still a rare and good book. The content of this book is solid, the pace is tight, and it is not sloppy. The ink growth of the novice village in the early stage has been omitted, the cumbersome settings have been simplified, and there is no life-or-death torture. All kinds of inner BBs in the first-person perspective have been cut off, and the scene is shown from a third-person perspective. In the early stage of the work, problems such as storyboard description and heroine setting appeared, which could be quickly optimized or avoided after suggestions from book friends. Don't follow the boat, there are a lot of theatrical version characters and original characters. Some timelines and character settings deviate from the original work, but it doesn't matter. After all, they are the same people. Unlike the first work, the author must have accumulated good writing skills in other platforms or fields. But maybe it's the update speed? The name of the work? Introduction? The popularity of the work is far lower than it should be due to the lack of popularity of the work's subject matter or author. At least I wasn't attracted by the subject matter. I tried reading each one one by one. This book was at the back of the book list. It can be said that I tried to read it because there was really nothing else to read, although I almost gave up on the first few. Fullmetal (I thought it was Fullmetal Alchemist when I saw Steel Chain for the first time), Hunter, and JoJo are all beyond the level that I have never heard of or seen, so I usually just skip the fancy pages about this aspect, which gives me a headache. Reading fan fiction also requires skills. You can skip some places directly. Don't be too entangled in some settings, otherwise you will have no books to read. If you can read the original work, why read the fan fiction? As long as the book is complete.

Emmmm The Whitebeard Pirates have been ignored from beginning to end (ಡωಡ) The Strongest Man only has a few scenes of drinking and dripping (ಡωಡ) This is the only pirate fanfic I have read that does not involve fighting, does not attack the Whitebeard Pirates, and does not beat up Blackbeard's little brother (ಡωಡ)

The most successful part of this book is that the moves have cool names, unlike other pirates whose moves are too boring.

The heroine lets nature take its course and accepts it as she pleases, don't mention those words about a cult without a heroine

No matter how you describe this novel, you can say that it is a fanfic, and the elements of a comprehensive comic are similar, but on top of these basic elements, the author has completely written a story with a beginning and an end, the original characters are fully integrated, and the original setting has patched the original work. This is not a One Piece fanfic, this is another One Piece world.

If there is a boatload of women and only one man as the main character, it is still a piece of cake.

If it's an interesting supporting role, there's a chance it can be included in the plot. 1. The name should conform to the style of the One Piece world, with the last name first and the first name last. Of course, no surname is acceptable. 2. Refuse to completely copy the templates of other anime characters. 3. It's not okay to have overly cool abilities. 4. The more detailed the description of appearance, personality, and abilities, the better. If you are interested, please feel free to play.

So far, the fruit is the best developed and has the most moves, each with its own characteristics. Although the chain fruit is a bit exaggerated, it is really cool, unlike some burning fruits that are turned into flame pillars after removing the fire fist.

The writing is good, but the theme of this book is not suitable for the world view of Pirates. Barrett cannot be an alliance with others at all, let alone become a younger brother, and the ending is too literary... I feel that it is not written in the same style as Pirates.

Did the author secretly eat Sauron's naming fruit?

This, I can say, is one of the few masterpieces among One Piece fans.