The White-Robed Sword Immortal of Qingyun

Lu Xueqi

It feels like the writer is both a native and not a native; the writing is ambiguous.

Did the protagonist actually read *Zhu Xian*? If you say he did, he doesn't know Wan Renwang; if he didn't, he knows Zhou Yixian. This constant contradiction makes me not want to watch.

This book is excellent. I've read many Zhu Xian fanfictions, but the protagonist in this one feels like another original novel set against the backdrop of Zhu Xian, not a fanfiction. Although it largely follows the original story, it doesn't prevent me from reading an excellent cultivation novel (not a fanfiction; you can't tell it's a fanfiction at all.

Ethereal and pure

Fellow Daoists, I have already cultivated to the fourth level of Jade Purity.

Is the protagonist an original native or a time traveler? Initially, I only wanted a single female lead, Xueqi, but after Biyao appeared, I think it should be a dual-female lead setup. Hopefully, Biyao won't use the infatuation curse again.

Well, the worst thing about fan fiction is following the plot exactly and trying to do everything yourself.

Um, let me give you a suggestion. The author's answers to many reader questions are ambiguous. For a book, you should have a basic outline, including character development and changes, etc. Even if it's fan fiction, there should be some of that. The most basic thing in your book is whether the protagonist knows the plot. You've made it unclear even to yourself... This makes it very jarring. Does he know or not? You don't want me to guess, do you?

Harem? Speechless, I'm leaving.