The Wandering Dragon

In fact, the most important thing is that there are not many people in China who believe in Christianity, or most people hate it. There should be a lot of new things to see here. But after reading it, for example, I didn't like the atmosphere of this novel a little. I think other people are more or less affected by this factor.

The author's writing is very good, and it has an internal flavor. However, giving the armor to Liam in the latest chapter feels a bit poisonous, and it would be better to make Liam's exit miserable. Otherwise, it would be unreasonable for him to mess with the protagonist like this.

Very good. It is unique here. I have a slightly vague understanding of the general direction of the story, but I have no idea how the story will develop. I have read a few online fairy tales, but this is the best one. The inability to know the direction of the story is a very good feature of this book, but in the infinite world after the main world, I can feel a very clear direction of the story.

There should be no problem with the theme selection, but the problem is that it took twenty or thirty chapters to unfold the world view and it was not unfolded. Those who wanted to see Transform into a Dragon waited four or five weeks and did not see it. Instead, they have been enduring the weird world view introduction. From this myth to that myth, there is not a single key point that should be written. The update is still slow, and it was discontinued some time ago. And no matter how the world view is developed, it is not just a bunch of things that the protagonist cannot encounter now and may encounter in the future. This is not hundreds of chapters later. How infrequently does the protagonist appear in the first 20+ chapters? It is basically a group of portraits to set off the protagonist, and the center of gravity is ridiculously shifted. Only a few literati can appreciate writing novels using the technique of writing prose. It is particularly unbearable when placed in a fast-paced Qidian novel.

The beginning is good, and it can be seen that the author has a good foundation. But, oh, but, it's twenty chapters and the protagonist hasn't transformed into a dragon yet. Isn't the progress of the plot too slow? If you don't transform into a dragon before it's released, there won't be many people left.

Updates are so slow. When will I become a dragon and a duck?

I was looking for a book and saw that there was a God Killer coming in, and I read a few pictures which were quite interesting. But... When I saw Chapter 70, let me tell you, did the author spend a year writing about the setting and mythology? Is this the same for later subscription chapters? Then why can I travel infinitely? Although it is quite interesting to watch, it is completely a fairy tale, not a time-travel novel. It is better to just say that they are aborigines. The time travelers are not noble, but have different values ​​and methodologies. This is not necessarily useful to the protagonist, but the scenery in the eyes and the thoughts in the mind are different. Simply put, it is a modern person's vision to travel and conquer the world. You have a completely native mind, and occasionally mention that the protagonist has traveled through time, and then his thoughts and actions are all mythical. Then why not just let him awaken clairvoyance and foreshadow some past mythological stories and future scenes. I think this time-traveling identity is of only this use to the protagonist 🙂 Don't write about time-traveling. It would be great.

At first, I felt that the fairy grass had great potential, but then I kept talking and realized that the soul only has three days to live after death. It took more than fifty chapters and it was too watery.

Have the time-travelers been replaced by indigenous people? Is it disgusting to force sensationalism? Can't you just write about the indigenous people like this?

There is no need for the author to be too negative. At least the writing style of your book is smooth and fluent, and the story arrangement does not have any poisonous points. The plot is a bit slow, but it is not a bad point. The main reason is that it is easy for a newcomer to write a slow-burning novel, which makes it more popular. It is recommended that authors should not expect to make money by writing articles. If they are short of money, it is better to work odd jobs to earn more. But if you have the time and energy, I hope I won't stick with it, at least I'll still be watching!

Disappointed, I am completely speechless with the latest one. The author is really alive, and the black water is flowing all over the world. One chapter is all water. You have lost me, the genuine reader, forever. Goodbye all the way.

I originally thought it was a good Western fantasy book. But the author may want to add a bit of humor. But how can I put it, the book that was originally quite serious at the beginning was written in a non-serious way, and it felt a little off. Now this book has become completely like a spoof written by the author. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

I almost wanted to plagiarize the author's creativity, but in the end I found that although I had read Grimm's fairy tales, Andersen's fairy tales, and Aesop's fables, I didn't understand the myths of each civilization at all, and I couldn't copy them.

Selling dog meat as a sheep's head, the plot is messy and long-winded

After hearing the news, I came over to support you.

This is almost like me killing the dragon!

Come back and read it when this book is finished! But all book friends, please remember to burn it for me.

I haven't seen the transformation into a dragon after reading Chapter 45, and the whole story is dead silent, without a climax, and the bystander's story is not even considered. If you are bored, listening to the audio will be troublesome. It is extremely poisonous and can cause death.

Author, you know how to stop, so why is there no climax here? When I think I need it, you give me a whole hand of teleportation, escape, fragmentation, transfer, or a peer from another world. What on earth are you going to write?

Qin Shihuang did it for himself, but that Ziyuan deserved to die even more. What's more, the author kept it for a long time, which resulted in the dragon turning into a dragon before it was killed. More importantly, without the holy sword, how can we defeat the boss?

I thought this book was different, but it turned out to be nothing different. King Arthur was finally written as a female.

The more I wrote, the more awkward it got. It was quite grand at first, but then it slowly turned into an emotional drama about me fighting against myself. I was originally looking forward to American Gods.

I would like to ask any book friends who still remember the name of the novel written by the author under his previous pen name. The main character traveled through fairy tales and was half a golden cat because of his merits. I wanted to review it recently, but forgot. If anyone knows, I would like to thank you very much.

I explain your dream, and you are so bad at it? Spend money to feed the dog

Song Jiang in Xunyanglou wrote an anti-poem, but Huang Wenbing took advantage of it and wanted to arrest him and hold him accountable. "Don't worry, brother, Wu Yongnai and I have been friends for many years. His name is Zhiduoxing, and I am the King of Ideas. We have a good relationship for a while. As long as I use a little trick, I can help my brother out of trouble!" Dai Zong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Brother can mess up his hair, splash his urine on the ground, pour it in, and pretend to be a wind demon." "High!" One day later. Song Jiang was in the lobby of the government office. One Buddha was born after being beaten, and the other two Buddhas passed into nirvana. Their skin was torn and their flesh was dripping with blood. Unable to fight, he had no choice but to take action and was taken to death row, waiting to be executed. Dai Zong went straight to Liangshan for help. "Don't worry, dear brother, as long as I use a little trick, I can help Brother Song Jiang get out of trouble!" Wu Yong laughed. "What's the plan?" "Write a false reply. When the wise brother goes back, he will say that the Grand Master will send Song Jiang to Tokyo, and we will be robbed nearby." "Wonderful." Three days later. Dai Zong was tied up and beaten until his skin and flesh were torn, and blood flowed out. He really couldn't stand the torture, so he had no choice but to surrender. He was put in a big yoke and thrown into prison. "Don't worry, brother, I have a plan to keep me waiting for a few days." In prison, Dai Zong comforted Song Jiangdao. "The plan is out?" "I have a good friend Huang Kongmu..." Six days later. Song Jiang and Dai Zong had plaques tied on their necks, glue was applied to their hair, and a red silk paper flower was inserted into their heads. Having a long break and saying goodbye to wine. "Don't worry, brother, I have another plan..." "Brother, I want to be quiet, you'd better stop talking."

I feel like the last few pictures are pretty good.

You can let Chiron teach the protagonist, the teacher of Greek heroes is no joke