I'm Really Not a Dragon

What you need most is to finish writing a book. I said that your writing skills are not bad, but you have no reputation at all. It turns out that you can't finish it.

It's my turn, have you ever been a dragon? Just write

Author, will this protagonist really become a dragon? If he became a dragon, what kind of dragon would the protagonist be?

I read a section and found it to be okay overall. The only difference is that the paladin profession setting is different. The paladin in the article is more like a knight than the paladin that the public recognizes. It would be better to change the prison part to a paladin instead of a knight.

Those who come here for the dragon can leave, and those who want to read the DND adventure text can stay and read it.

The plot is inexplicable. When I read Goldfinger, I thought it was a cool novel, but after working hard for a long time, I became physically stronger than ordinary people. The opening plot is about a serial murder case. You think it is a battle of wits to solve the case, but in the end the protagonist is framed again. I really don't understand the author's brain circuit, and he writes incomprehensible plots back and forth. This book is so exciting to me.

How come the protagonist can suddenly intervene in the legendary struggle? Even the paragons can't get involved, but the protagonist can still be alive and kicking after being hit. The protagonist doesn't know how to use fireball now, right? Why did you suddenly intervene in Legend to save the Duke? Then why did the villain just watch when the protagonist and the Duke interacted. I know that the protagonist redeemed several props, but there is no description in the text of these props that can convince me that they have the effect of reversing the legendary struggle. Then there is an inexplicable bravery in the protagonist's acting style. The protagonist has clearly seen that Baldur's Gate is a mixed bag of good and bad, with many hidden bosses, but he handles things straight away and feels like he is in control. All the Silver Shields at the Duke's Ball had a higher status than the protagonist and then they all died. The protagonist witnessed it with his own eyes and escaped from death, so he naturally wanted revenge. But the protagonist shouldn't look like he's opening a picture, right? All in all, the objective conditions of the game are very risky, the possibility of death is very high, and the enemy is strong and we are weak, but the narrative style is like going on an outing, which makes no sense logically. The protagonist behaves in a way that there is always a way out, but Goldfinger does not give this. I think the author didn't explain many things clearly, especially the protagonist's strength, motivation, and goals. This goal is hierarchical. For example, killing the Baal Church is the main goal because it poses the greatest threat to the protagonist. The devil Rafl is a branch plot introduced in the process of achieving the main goal. Stealing a piece of Rafl's collection is an optional branch given by Goldfinger during the main plot. But the protagonist doesn't see any similar layering at all. It feels like a player who goes wherever he goes, always prioritizing the task at hand. The excitement of improving strength has been greatly diluted. For example, when the protagonist gets moral approval, there should be three levels of pleasure. The first is the direct pleasure of exchanging the favorite items that have long been optimistic about and the improvement of strength. The second is the hidden pleasure of promoting the potential application scenarios of the main goal. The third is the accumulation of gold finger points to unlock more functional permissions. As a result, the protagonist has no idea what this basic thing is or what its use is. The final fast forward to the reversal of the legendary fight is very puzzling.

I have written three books, but my writer level is still Lv.1 I don't recommend writing books if you only want to gain popularity.

The writing is quite good, but the main character, like a person with Down syndrome, insists on treating himself as a mage. You either have to write that the system has cognitive coverage, or the main character has already discovered that he is being arrogant. Now this performance is too sugary 🥵

Come from Uzumaki Academy. Come on, author.

The rats don't know how to explore the road? There is a huge bug in the beginning.

Do you have a system? Just write, and the font is copied from Xinhua Dictionary, which is inexplicable

In the first three chapters, I have been doing AI question and answer training with the system. It's so boring...

The writing is good, but the plot line is really confusing🙂🙂

The writing is a bit baffling. It was very chaotic, and the feeling of being caught was very abrupt.

He has a strengthened body and can only do about 100 push-ups until he is a young dragon.

I don't know how long it has been since I expressed my respect to the chef.

What are you writing about? It feels like a mess. Why is it that writing a book is such a mess? I feel like I can't string it together.

I don't understand. Drow came to the ground to act as a law enforcer? Or Baldur's Gate?

When Xie Nian was a child, he lived a good life with his adoptive parents. Although he was not rich, his family was very harmonious. Until Lao Sha found him and activated his bloodline and asked him to kill his adoptive parents with his own hands. The blood of Baal was still too authoritative. Ye Ge had to ask him to change his blood if he wanted to save Xie Nian.

The writing style is really good, and it's at the level of a high-quality work. If you're lucky, it's not impossible to get a high-quality work. The reason why there is little fame and popularity is related to the fact that the author does not have a complete book, which makes people dare not read it and only dare to put it on the bookshelf.

The author is not a eunuch, your novel is still very interesting 👍

It's okay, but it's just a quality product.

Please, gentlemen!

The writing is good but there are too few updates.

Overall, it's pretty good. It may not be particularly optimized for combat parties, and the data isn't particularly clear. But the shortcomings outweigh the good points, the dwarf jokes are quite delicious 😍, the idea of ​​building a power is also quite interesting, and there is also the girl-oriented part that I am looking forward to 😍. However, the legendary event he participated in in the early stage was a bit too intense. Logically speaking, a 7-level spellcaster participating in such a big event is just a cannon fodder. However, considering that the protagonist is a young platinum dragon, it is normal. After all, he is the same dragon species as the King of the North Wind.

It feels like the protagonist is schizophrenic. Sometimes he is a paladin with a strange "sense of justice", and sometimes he is a normal person. The goblin who yells about beating and killing is so innocent.

It's really good. I hope I don't die.

Updated today. Does that leave request mean that you are going to be a eunuch?

Who knows how to unfold the introduction?