Hogwarts Family

In this book, some people wonder what kind of person Karan is, and why he feels like he doesn't care about anything at first, but he still wants to integrate into a group and stubbornly insists on his own character. In my opinion, the reason is actually very simple. Although Karan is very mature in his actions and thoughts, he actually hides a little boy in his heart who lacks love and does not understand love. When Dean Anthony used his own way to pry open a crack in Karan's closed heart, more and more people entered his life. In caring and being cared for, giving and receiving, Karan influenced and was affected by the people around him. Until he determined that love is a magic that transcends magic, he began to face his own heart and tried to resurrect Dean Anthony. Isn't this his own response to love? And during this period, the incompatible soul, in a mature and appropriate way, is actually very timid and naive to carefully feel the existence of love. How can it not be awkward?        ，，，，，，，

The ideas and ideas in this book are very novel, and the world construction is also very tempting. But some places like Ollivander's are really uncomfortable to watch. I personally think that the author should carefully explain the psychology of the characters again when writing, and add a little more descriptive angles to make the characters more three-dimensional, such as Gaspard's diary and so on. A more vivid world will make readers read more carefully, and it will naturally make the foreshadowing you took so much trouble to set up more relatable to us. After all, for a novel, I think foreshadowing is not the most important thing, happiness is. Secondly, I think fandom is a new world, which can be completely different from the original Hogwarts. Please don't be limited to it. Everyone should want to see a brand new story. A completely different magical world with a similar background. Everyone must have seen enough of the original Harry Potter books. Also, please don't think that each of our readers is a senior Harry Potter fan. You might as well treat us as if you have never seen Harry Potter, and let us re-experience the magic of a completely different Hogwarts. There are some places that are indeed difficult to understand, and the author has also noticed it. Obviously, you have given special explanations about Ollivander's Oblivion Curse and Professor Mellanth's departure. I think if these explanations can be integrated into the book, it may be much more comfortable to read. The above are just my personal suggestions for reference only. I also hope that the author can write better.

This book is really uncomfortable to read. The most uncomfortable thing is the so-called ambiguity and foreshadowing in various places. There are too many so-called cryptic hints that are completely impossible to understand. Simply put, many places are inexplicable because they are too cryptic or cannot be expressed clearly. The story frame is really attractive to me, but I feel that the author is very bad at character description and psychological activities. Many places are abrupt and inexplicable, like split personality, and are not explained clearly. It all depends on the readers to guess. However, the hints given are also open-ended and completely impossible to guess. Some so-called obscure places are expressions that are completely incomprehensible to the readers. Some of the meanings that the author wants to express implicitly cannot be understood at all. This idea is conveyed to the readers. Once the characters are more complex, they will be confused and unable to understand even after reading it several times. The character creation is really incomprehensible. Can there be no more ambiguities and foreshadowings that only the author himself can understand? Also, can the protagonist's personality not be so contradictory and twisted? It makes people feel that his character creation is completely out of the ordinary. There is suspense in some places, but because it may be written, there is no doubt about what is going on that makes people want to continue reading, but it is simply uncomfortable and inexplicable.

After reading a few chapters, let me talk about my feelings. First of all, the author's writing skills are not very good. Secondly, I can see the author's care and dedication to this book. In just a few chapters, the image of the protagonist has been vividly established, as well as Lily, and my personal favorite Snape (laughing). Overall, it is great and outstanding. Come on! Don't tj (this is very important). Finally, let me talk about my guess about the future direction of the protagonist: he will probably become darker. After all, his character (hypocrisy, loneliness, insecurity), plus hatred for pure blood, he will probably become someone like Grindelwald. It can't be Voldemort 2.0

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Good writing, keep up the good work, all monthly recommendations have been given

Not a closed-brained person? It stands to reason that a Boggart can't guess the protagonist's thoughts, and even Dumbledore can't read the protagonist's thoughts. But a little Boggart can figure it out, alas!

It's wonderful. I would call you the best among Harry Potter fans. Imagination is like the way of reason The plot is like I am a legend Emotions are like jj, a bunch of CP articles But none of them are more pure than yours. I like HP not because of the characters but the magic settings. I prefer HP's magic system to elemental magic. For the rest, I only care about the plot, as long as it's exciting. The plot of this book is very exciting. If you read the first two volumes, they will be very scattered, but when you finish reading them, they will be very exciting and closely linked. I think it is exactly what the author himself said that he pays too much attention to the dark lines and ignores the excitement of the bright lines. Of course volume three is an improvement. In addition to the setting of the plot, the great advantage of this book is that the plot remains unchanged and the original characters are retained as much as possible. However, the plot and characters complement each other. The author later realized that giving appropriate changes to the characters is something I have not seen in other HPs. This book can be said to be a very rare fanfic. The author has researched a lot of other materials, enriched the setting, created a lot of exciting plot twists, and fully retained the character of the characters. Other fics may have one or two of the above, but no one covers them all. At least I haven't seen any fanfics since I've been reading them for a year, not counting the short stories. Highly recommended. By the way, I added this book to my bookshelf around chapter 50. I just finished reading it in one sitting today, and I may pick it up again in the future, because it really feels good to read it in one sitting. It is recommended that if you keep it, you can subscribe and download it once a month. Automatic subscription can only extend for two or three chapters. It's easy to get bored with a good plot-oriented book like this.

After watching the Meadows episode, all I can say is WOC. I have never seen such an annoying, self-righteous character who can definitely be identified as the protagonist. Compared to other HP fans or those who annoy Hermione in the original novel, it is nothing compared to it. That one is called coquettishness, and the child makes trouble, and the other one is called mentally ill, even if one is strong and beautiful. Tell me more about what you did. When the protagonist was not in school, an elder wand was missing from Ollivander's shop and the Forgetting Curse was cast on it, leading to suspicion that the protagonist had obtained it. On the school train, the protagonist began to be tested. Even if he was obviously not welcome, he still had to squeeze into a car. Later on, because of a similar experience to Tom, there were many examples of arguing with the principal that the protagonist had a problem Then in the Defense Against the Dark Arts class, the sparring team showed a level beyond what the students could handle, and knocked the protagonist unconscious into the infirmary. Later, he said that he repented and realized that he was wrong. I think this character's image has changed. Then I went to the library and saw books about Legilimency, and I thought, if you don't tell me, I'll read it myself! Do you want to forcefully read the memory? This is nothing, after all, the protagonist is a born master of Occlumency, so I can't see it anyway. Going to the back, secretly following the students to the Forbidden Forest using the illusion technique, and not taking action when in danger. Later on, this Meadows is obsessed with the elder wand, telling the protagonist over and over again that I need this wand because I am going to Egypt to do very dangerous things. Come on, you are so much older than the protagonist. You have tried the elder wand a long time ago and it is not suitable for you. You still have a big head. I gave up three times because of this person and skipped more than n chapters! It felt good to pick it up during a book shortage, but I abandoned it again after seeing a certain point! Highlight: Improving poison resistance is really no exaggeration! After reading this book by Meadows, I won't be bothered by reading dozens of other hp fanfics for women! No HP fanfic characters can irritate me, no one can annoy me to this extent, really!

Don't be fooled by that post that claims that HP fandom is the strongest... I was tricked into it by that guy... Personally, I feel that this article is a bit unfinished even if I read it in one go. The author worked very hard to bury the story in various ways, but the effect of burying it can be said to be worse than not burying it at all. The loose and jumping plot cannot support readers' expectations for foreshadowing. The result of poor character description is that you have to think about the plot to come back later (such as Meadows). Too much foreshadowing cannot be called foreshadowing. It is more like digging holes on a flat road, which makes people feel unsmooth when reading.

I just finished reading the content of the first grade. Maybe my level is not high or it's because I listen to the book, but I still can't figure out what the protagonist is going to do (ಥ_ಥ). It feels like the protagonist has a schizophrenia, and then the background changes. I don't know about others, but I personally feel that the plot is confusing and incomprehensible. Until now, I still haven't figured out which side the protagonist wants to stand on when he does these things. It is said that Voldemort said "pure blood is disgusting" at the beginning. It is said that every member of the Order of the Phoenix except Dumbledore understood him and trusted him, and some even turned against the protagonist. Even if you stand alone and want to be a lone ranger and learn magic safely in Hogsmeade, you don't need to be a Riddler. Are Snape and Lily not good to the protagonist? From time to time, you talk to yourself or change your face. Wouldn't it be better to speak clearly and be more frank? He offends people everywhere and pushes away those who care about him. I was initially attracted by the author's writing style and the background of the pro-age era, but by the end of the first grade I didn't see what kind of person the protagonist was, and it was very tiring to follow. I hope the author can write more clearly and take care of novice readers like me. After all, I read novels to relax after writing a paper, not to do reading comprehension.

What kind of thing is this written? It's so poisonous The protagonist is a smug clown. He is unpredictable at the beginning and looks like an intellectually enhanced version of the Dark Lord. However, as soon as he enters the plot, he loses weight and is deflated everywhere. He is still pretending to be a fool. He repeatedly emphasizes how much other students are afraid of him, how much the principal and professors are afraid of him. It makes me laugh to death.

Great author, the characters you wrote are all broken. The protagonist is self-righteous and arrogant. Snape was kind and honest when he was a child, look at what you wrote. I can't even grasp the characters' personalities. In Harry Potter, Snape basically has no shortcomings, but unfortunately he is a licking dog, licking him to the end...

Why do I feel that the protagonist is a person with a split personality? The supporting characters in the work can not understand the protagonist and feel that the protagonist is deeply hidden, but it does not mean that the readers should also watch the protagonist in a 180-degree turn without any inner monologue. The sudden reversal is too abrupt. It feels like the author Wen Qing in the novel long ago has a disease, that kind of: I don't want to be your enemy, I am the enemy of the world.

I hope Meadows will never get the wand I'm so fed up, it's like a rich second generation who always wanted an old man's heirloom, but the old man was unwilling to give it because it was not suitable for the rich second generation. Then the old man gave the heirloom to Karan who was suitable. As a result, the rich second generation cried, made trouble, and hanged himself. He used financial power and power to force Karan (for example, he has been targeting him), and even relied on the teacher to lynch Lucius in various ways. You want to teach students casually and unreasonably, but you don't want to protect the students themselves? You said that if you want to die, you need a wand, if you need strength, you need a wand, so wasn't the wand always there before Karan came? Charming but generally annoying and important character. I hope this character will not be a female protagonist. I also hope Karan doesn't give her the wand.

The overall writing style and character creation are very good. The current performance is not good, mainly because it is too slow to warm up and there are too few small climaxes in the early stage. I believe the performance will get better and better.

The protagonist is very talented and strong, but he is always suppressed in school and bullied by this one and that one. He didn't dare to take revenge openly, he only dared to take revenge secretly, but in the end he was still bullied. How disgusting.

It's a masterpiece among HP fics. The plot is also great, but the character design is very strange. The protagonist repeatedly jumps between saints and demons. When something happens, he says it's not important. The motivation for the behavior is completely incomprehensible. I still don't understand what type of person the protagonist is. A few friends are also very strange, and generally speaking, basically all the characters feel awkward. It can only be remedied by the excitement of the plot

It can only be said that the character of Dorcas was well created by the author. It has persuaded so many people to quit. Of course, I am one of them. It makes sense that the two books are so popular.

The author has really succeeded in designing the character of Dorcas Meadows, making it lifelike. I was disgusted to quit and click back in many times. _(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__

The ideas for the new chapter are great! Come on! Just write it down according to your own ideas!

I don't understand why the author and people like Snape are mixed together. The role is limited, not even as good as roommates. When I read Chapter 141, I can only see the character of the protagonist as very bad and extreme. The protagonist is assigned to Hufflepuff, I think it is just to give him two tools. If we just need tool people, I think we can part ways with Snape and the others. If we are together again, I think Snape will no longer have the gloomy character, and Lily will no longer hate evil. It can be said that the author is simply joking when he wants to restore the original work. There is also the motivation of the protagonist, which I have never understood. It is always vague. I think it looks like foreshadowing, but foreshadowing can last for dozens of chapters without being explained. I didn't expect it. Sometimes I even have to read it over again.

Is there any Shennong? After reading more than 40 chapters, the female protagonist Dorcas was extremely persuaded to quit. I was going to get mad, but other than that, everything else was pretty good. I was confused whether to read it or not. Will it still be like this in the future?

The historical plot has a strong sense of fragmentation among the protagonists

After reading the latest chapter and thinking about it, I feel that the reason for the poor performance of this book is not the writing nor the story. The problem is that it is not exciting. The readers are not involved and cannot feel the excitement. This is difficult in the online literary circle. For example, the plot of Lily Snape and James, the previous After spending so much time writing about the Lily, Snape, and Callan trio, and James' arrogance, most readers sided with Lily Snape, but the author had to write a plot that showed James' good side, and it was easy to feel frustrated. This is why I considered giving up after finishing the latest chapter. Everyone is tired from life, why should we go through unnecessary tangles when reading an online article?

I just read the first three chapters. It's a lot of nonsense. What is the soul of an adult showing off in front of several children?

Nowadays, there are so many people who can't even accept the most traditional image of a tsundere lady. It's really amazing.

I feel that the character of Meadows appears a little abruptly. The other plots are very interesting. Once the plot involving Meadows is involved, it feels far-fetched.

I lost my interest in reading the first fifty chapters. Is this protagonist really a time traveler as an adult? His thoughts are full of thoughts, his actions are childish, and he is quite cowardly.

I really like this kind of fan fiction with normal views, unlike some novels that start with some dark Dumbledore words, and make Dumbledore want to die immediately, and then the protagonist finally turns into a third-generation demon king or something.