Hogwarts Archaeologist

Review this book. This is my first time writing a book review. 😏Personally, I feel that the author's HP article is relatively new. Most of the HP articles are student articles, and there are very few professor articles (a few recent articles are quite good). Professor's writing has two advantages over student writing. First of all, the protagonist does not need to consider how a child (protagonist of a student novel) with a soul of several decades and a body of a teenager should face three brats. Student novels are always prone to problems in this aspect. If he gets involved with the trio, the protagonist is said to be mentally immature and like a follower. If he is too alienated from the trio, it will be difficult to develop the main plot. And some HP fan fiction protagonists (and readers) often complain about the trio (especially Harry and Ron) for being reckless, doing things without thinking, failing to discover the good teachings of Sri Lanka, etc. However, you must know that Harry and Ron are only twelve or thirteen-year-old children. It is already remarkable that they have the courage to face Voldemort, who most of the wizarding world dare not call his name. And we always read novels from a God's perspective, thinking that the trio can't even discover that Peter is a mouse. Harry and Ron are also ordinary children. They only know magic, but their hearts and wisdom have not become older because of this. Personally, I am very disgusted with thoughts such as "If only I had...". Secondly, as a professor, the protagonist of the professor's article must have certain strength. This is much more reasonable than the invincible model in the student article where others have been cultivating immortality for three hundred years and I have been cultivating immortality for three years. At least level 50 to level 100 is slightly more normal than level 1 to level 100. And this also avoids the weird plot where the male protagonist doesn't go to school and masters all kinds of magic (remember, there is also a character who brews a blessing elixir at the beginning). Also, in a student novel, it is difficult for the protagonist to control his attitude when facing a trio (please see the first point), because each trio has its own advantages and disadvantages, and you cannot force a child to be proficient in everything about relationships and accidents. But professorial writing is different. Teachers can teach and educate people to change their character flaws, allowing the trio to develop better in the fanfic than in the original work. I think there are two highlights of this book. First of all, the protagonist is an imperfect person. In almost all the Qidian novels I have read, the protagonists are almost perfect people in terms of character. They have shortcomings that are almost lovable, such as being funny, stingy, etc. However, the protagonist of this book presents an image of someone who pursues ancient magic and is even a little crazy. The protagonist's little bit of snake syndrome really matches the style of the Snake Yard. I think the protagonist also has shortcomings such as a bad temper, a petty mind, and unobtrusive speech, but this makes the protagonist's image more three-dimensional. Another highlight is our Mr. Al! The image of Mr. Al's cute appearance and the soul of a little adult living inside is really vividly described. Moreover, unlike previous HP articles where animals were just cute pets, our students can be either cute or fierce. 🤭 I hope the author writes this book better than the previous one. In fact, I personally think that the previous one has better ideas, because almost no one writes about the parent generation. As a result, the author suddenly ended the story. Still quite sad. I wish the author success with this novel.

Bubbling To be honest, it would feel good if you released Harry's chapter in Quirrell. Those chapters are really full of feeling and very attractive.

The latest content is still very well written, and some of the previous foreshadowings have been contacted. Now I have dug a lot of holes, and I am looking forward to the next development. Overall, it's a very innovative fanfic

There are currently two professor articles serialized in Qidian. Professor Mowen, I feel like you are obviously very powerful, why are you still playing with children? Azkaban feels that the protagonist is too low-key and does not show the pursuit of magic at all. An ordinary person should not be ecstatic when seeing magic instead of just taking it easy. So the biggest problem in professorial writing is how to balance the boundaries between a professor and students. If it's too shallow, there won't be much drama about the protagonist; if it's too deep, the logic will be unreasonable. The author may want to find a middle ground.

The protagonist is a strong, paranoid, and self-centered image. There is nothing wrong with this - but this kind of person must have strong strength to stand up, otherwise he will be a clown. In the author's setting, the protagonist is indeed a very powerful wizard, but the plot overturns many times - and such a character cannot withstand overturning.

To be honest, there was a problem with the portrayal of Hermione as a good student in the original novel. Let's make a comparison. The Wizarding Qualification Examination is mainly for the fifth and seventh grade, which is equivalent to the Chinese High School Entrance Examination and the College Entrance Examination. This comparison is actually unreasonable, but from the perspective of importance. Then just take other exams casually. The exams are used to check the level of knowledge you have mastered, to check for gaps and fill in the gaps, non-selective passing exams, etc. That are meaningful to reality. The other more important is to master the level of knowledge, not the test scores. At least this has been the case for me from junior high school to college. I usually don't review for quizzes, but review for midterms and finals. Only the high school entrance exams and college entrance examinations require focused review and repeated practice. At least I think Hermione is not like a normal good student in the original work. The most likely reason is that Rowling herself did not have a good student experience, so drawing a tiger cannot be an anti-dog.

I haven't read it yet, so I'm collecting it first. I'm complaining about the author's very interesting name. The original version is a combination of Callan McAuliffe and Thomas Sangster, and this one is a combination of Toby Regbo and Freddie Highmore. It can be said that the appearance is very good. They are all in my favorite video list. Will the next one be Asa Holland (🐶)

I suddenly found that I seemed to have clicked in several times. In the end, they were all persuaded to leave by the indigenous protagonists. It was really hard to accept the indigenous protagonists and it was difficult to have a sense of substitution.

Living in a Campus has been completed The drawing looks a bit like a girl... After looking through the comments of Parents, I realized that there is no fanfic of Karan

It's not even finished! ! ! I thought there were so many chapters that I wouldn't get stuck again...

Bastard, even if your writing is a bit messy in the later stage, you are still better than the eunuch. 🔪

Five chapters are updated every day, I forgive the hasty ending of your pro era 🤫

The Patronus Charm is an extremely complex and difficult spell to cast. Most wizards cannot summon it. In the past, the Patronus Charm was regarded as a necessary condition for joining the Wizengamot, so if everyone really learned it, it would feel like their combat power would be ruined.

So, is this a complete run away? I just worked on my mentality in the last book, so I can change my account in the future. This account is no longer available.

This novel is in the name of Harry Potter and features relatively realistic original characters, but the protagonist is not particularly likable. For readers who read HP fan fiction, the sense of immersion is not good, and the excitement is not enough. Not to mention it is a short novel. If it is such a deep novel, no matter how deep the novel is, it needs a climax. The ups and downs of the climax, big and small, are all the motivation to attract readers to continue reading. Just like this one, the writing is good, but the target audience is narrow. People who like to read Harry Potter will not want to read the frustrating plot in the article again, and you have written it to be even more frustrating. If you don't like reading this kind of article, you won't read this at all. So in the end, I can only trick some readers who like to read Harry Potter fan fiction, and select a small number of readers who are attracted by the writing and plot or who like to read this kind of "torture" (unpleasant) readers.

Now that I have seen the basilisk in the second year, I feel that the writing is very messy, with all kinds of inexplicable operations to force the plot to continue. The protagonist feels that he is only good at the magic circle, but in actual operation it is of no use. Will the subsequent plot be better?

Has the Harry Potter fandom become involved to this extent now? Open the fantasy category, the first page, 12 Harry Potter fanfics (ー_ー)!!

I jumped to read the free chapters. I was very interested in the subject matter, but the content became more and more uncomfortable. Ever since I read Professor Rune, most Harry Potter fans can't stand it anymore. I found that in many fan books written about foreign works, the words spoken by the characters are not close to the original works. I can tolerate it if it is about time travel, but the indigenous protagonist cannot even tell a British joke... Including I also read some Marvel fans, the characters in the original works play Chinese homophonic jokes in the book...

Author, you are too cruel to leave five chapters like this to prevent theft. We spend money to watch it for fun, so you are abusing fans. . It's better not to update it. . . In the past, it was fine to just turn on the anti-theft and make up for it the next day. Now if you do this, aren't you afraid of losing fans?

I have read more than a dozen of them, but I always feel that the protagonist's character is not much stronger than that of a child, and the writing is very messy. I have also read a few fanfics 😥

The indigenous protagonist is a little bit unacceptable, and there is Potter, who is so ordinary but confident. When the protagonist looks at him in the bar, he can think that the Sorting Hat wants to sort him into Slytherin. The protagonist also thinks so and suspects that the protagonist is a thief. I am really convinced by this brain circuit.

Disadvantages: The protagonist is too much of a Riddler, and the character development in the middle period is very confusing. Advantages: The world view and the plot are very good. Even the Riddler and the protagonist with an unknown character in the middle stage cannot stop this book from becoming a classic. My favorite character is Al, even though he can only bark, he is so cute! ! I think the interaction between Al and the protagonist is the soul of the book. Angela is also good. It has also made up for the regrets of the original work. Although it has been discontinued, it is still a very, very excellent work.

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To be honest, no one thinks Toby is very sexual and sexy😍

I can't watch the Chamber of Secrets anymore. It looks good in the front, but weak in the middle.

It looks pretty good from the beginning, better than the previous book. The professor is more fun to start with than being a student, and the pace is also fast. He is a bit neurotic and eloquent but has great strength and experiences mystery. There is also a special Niffler. He is a very charming protagonist. The way he gets along with Dumbledore and Snape is also very interesting. But as it progresses, Toby's plan to make a big job becomes chaotic. After Toby's exploration of ancient magic begins to go out of control, he loses his mind and takes risks blindly. This is how I felt when I read the last book. The first part was pretty good, but the further it went, the more it deviated from the original and the more it felt wrong. Maybe I am suitable to read the first hundred chapters.

I've finished reading the free chapter. Well, I arranged for a trio to misunderstand the protagonist. Well, strengthen the noseless monster. You can strengthen it. You wrote it without any clue. To be honest, you are very good at writing the three golden chapters. The beginning is really good. Why does it give me the feeling of eating a fly as soon as I get on track?

To put it simply, before Basilisk, I felt that my performance was normal. I gave up the book only when I got to Basilisk, mainly because I couldn't stand the continuous unexpected events.

Let me take advantage of Dabao to promote my own books, The White Devil Beginning at Hogwarts, Beginning in the Fourth Year, Alchemy.

The author made Hermione so annoying, especially the protagonist, who is actually a professor and is having an affair with Hermione