One Piece: Age of Rivalry

I didn't really want to write a comment, but I'll write one anyway. This isn't a One Piece novel template at all; it's a fantasy template! It's a completely incongruous monster! It's a fantasy novel disguised as a One Piece story. Devil Fruits, treasures of the sea, Logia-type fruits, represent the potential for natural disasters, yet you've written them down as nothing more than roadside…

There are many plot problems. First, with the appearance of the Black Dragon's essence blood, the entire storyline and art style changed from One Piece to a roadside fantasy cultivation novel. Secondly, is the Nine-Layer Waves martial art really something that would appear in One Piece? Third, even Xiong Da has come out; aren't you worried about being criticized?

Seeing the black dragon's essence blood made me laugh.

Really great! 😊 Keep it up, I've given you all my votes!

The author had too much personal bias, and managed to write it as a Chinese martial arts novel.

It's really well-written, the writing style is good, the plot and the Devil Fruits are all great. I personally prefer Shanks's domineering style. I'll keep this One Piece book for later. Keep it up, author! Don't abandon this project!

It's really well written, but it would be even better if you could include the names of the moves. For example, the sonic shockwave from a roar at the enemy could be called Lion's Roar, a punch thrown from a distance could be called Shockwave, and the one that hits the enemy could be called Hadouken, etc. Mentioning the names of the moves would make it much more effective.

I hope the author will keep going and not abandon the project.

Those who say it's well-written are laughable. This novel has numerous problems with even basic word choice, tone, and description. I had high hopes based on the positive reviews, but it only proved my naiveté.