Siheyuan: Starting Out as a Master Chef

Let me tell you about that old man. Throughout the whole series, I thought he was a decent guy, but in the last few episodes, his attitude disgusted me. He blocked the father and son from reuniting. What a rotten person! Then I watched the show again and realized that this guy was really no good. Even the Second Uncle had a lot of apprentices.

I didn't even make it through Chapter Four. I gave Old Man Yan thirty yuan to buy things to celebrate the house renovation. I'm speechless!

At first, I thought the mild violence was acceptable, but as I read on, something felt off. Yi Zhonghai kept bullying me but never retaliated. You ignite the readers' anger without quelling it, making it very frustrating. Not only did he not retaliate, but he even used a system item to do so! This kind of revenge offers no satisfaction; it just makes you seem cowardly.

Didn't the author realize that without the system, this protagonist is utterly useless? The background is so strong, the abilities are so powerful, the relationships are so good, yet he still acts like a wimp when bullied, only able to fight back when the system conjures something up. Throwing a few stones in the middle of the night would have been much more satisfying. It's purely a forced addition to make that crappy system and those ridiculous jokes appear.

I've read less than ten chapters, and the protagonist has absolutely no intelligence. An old man schemes against him like that, and he can't do anything about it? The protagonist just doesn't care and that's it, and then he has to use a bee to get revenge? And who said that the girls who are interested in him at this stage must be good girls? That's ridiculous.

I strongly suggest changing the name to: "The Courtyard's Useless Wimp".

Jia Dongxu was perfectly fine after dying, but you had to bring him back to life. Do you even know what kind of personality he has? No matter how you write it, it feels jarring. Are you just making things harder for yourself? And the name Li Xiuzhi is so out of place! Does she think people haven't seen The Herdsman? Do you really think you can just write whatever you want?

The protagonist of this book, I would call Fei the number one loser on Qidian. He's written as loser as possible, so if you can't stand it, I suggest you don't read it.

It's disgusting, it's so frustrating to watch.

The book on interpersonal relationships is good, and it's not too harsh. However, some details are a bit rough. For example, Uncle Yi donated 50 yuan, Uncle Er donated 20 yuan, and Uncle San donated 10 yuan. These amounts are really outrageous, especially Uncle San's donation. I'd be surprised if he donated more than 2 yuan. Please revise it.