I Am Not the Supreme God

I always feel a bit contradictory. I still want to say my feelings about this book. I have never written a novel but I have read a lot, so I will express my personal views from the perspective of a reader This novel has three lines in total. The earth line, the main universe line and the sub-universe line. The earth line is only a branch line. The connection between these three lines is not good enough. There is a slight jump, but it is not a big problem. The main problem is that the selling points of your book are very contradictory The main selling points of this book are sandbox civilization and interstellar travel, but I really don't think these two themes are suitable to be written together Most readers who like sandbox civilization think that the protagonist must have a divine existence, no heroine, no parents, and it is good to be a casual person. In fact, this is indeed in line with the selling point of sandbox civilization, which is an almighty sense of dominance. One moment he is omniscient and omnipotent, and the next second he is pretending to slap people in the face. In fact, there is a sense of identity tearing. In addition, the existence of the earth branch and parents makes people feel very awkward because gods do not need to worry about it. After becoming gods, they have to repay the blue star. It makes people feel that this god is cheap and has dissuaded a large number of readers And for those who like interstellar travel and pretending to slap faces, it does attract a considerable number of readers. But your sandbox civilization takes up half of the page. Readers have to jump to read it. This is not good for the reading experience. After all, why should I read something that I don't like half of the book? Those who like to show off may still be interested in the sub-world. What about those who like interstellar travel? Similarly, those who like sandbox civilization are probably not interested in interstellar travel. After all, there are a large number of people who just come to see sandbox civilization, and coupled with the pretentiousness and slap in the face, they will directly dissuade most readers. What's even more embarrassing is that the overlap rate between these two readers is very low This book falls into a situation that is unflattering to both sides, because the length of the main world and the sub-world are almost the same. Interstellar travel and sandbox civilization are not in conflict, but it is difficult to combine the two together. I believe that the author's writing skills are not up to the requirements, and sandbox civilization and pretentiousness are conflicting attributes, and they cannot be written together. So we can also see that the score of this book is not good Generally speaking, books with good scores are either like raising all human beings, the real part is very short, and the protagonist has no worries, full of character, or it is like most immortal novels with a small world setting, and the small world is just a tool to improve strength It can be seen that there are many things you want to write. But thinking and writing are two different things. Your writing power cannot support these story lines, so in the end, you wrote a book that is not pleasing to either side and is inferior to everything else The above only represents my personal opinion. Rational discussion is very welcome

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Ancient God

Drive high and go low. The front gives a particularly grand view of the world. What is written on the back?

Why do I just not like this female pope? I feel like she has not positioned herself correctly. I especially don't want to see her opposite Tang Chuan from God's Family House. Ahhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, so annoying! Maybe it's because I think Tang Chuan shouldn't have some bad qualities, such as sexual desire. But the ambiguity between the related body and the female pope made me very uncomfortable. Especially the female pope!

Help the protagonist return home

The layout is very grand, but the writing techniques and descriptions are simply not worthy of this grandeur. The protagonist's thoughts are also very primitive and are not worthy of this powerful style. The author's writing techniques are also not worthy of the powerful setting of this setting. It feels like a king plowing the land with a golden hoe.

In the beginning, the protagonist's status is too high. He is directly one of the several supreme beings in the universe. The other supreme beings used the universe to be sealed into a ball and used it as a glass ball, while the protagonist used half of the main divine power to create a sub-universe. Then, in order to suppress the protagonist, he gave various meaningless explanations. In the final analysis, the author doesn't have enough imagination and can't hold on.

The beginning is obviously very exciting, the main plot and the main plot are very good, but the author is so good at talking about popular science and philosophy for several chapters. I wonder if the later chapters will be better, so I keep reading. The key details are all charged, I really want to give them money.