I Finally Waited for the End of the World

The protagonist looks like a funny guy, the writing is dark, and the patterns flow, so why is there so much nonsense?

It was empty, and it seemed that the author's body was not the same as anyone else's, so I faced the author without saying a word Me: "I'm coming in" Author: "Finally someone commented" (Is it really that simple?) Me: "I see!" Author: "What did you do in the comment area?!" Me : "The author's comment area (butt) is so nice, so fair and fair" Author: "! I... My comment group is now white." Me: "It's stained with my color! Hehe" From then on, the author's comment area started to have people coming and going, but the author's first time will never be something that others can expect.

It's too ink, and it's completely a narrative style.

This is a doomsday novel. The cold-blooded character created by the protagonist is interesting in the first three chapters (it feels like someone needs to polish the writing), but then it turns straight into a verbose, weird, and full of nonsense. In a post-apocalyptic novel, you come up with an online game writing method, killing monsters and exploding things, killing monsters to level up, etc., But I still reluctantly accept it (funny). But what do you mean by making a copy? It has completely changed. When I saw Chapter 60, there are two copies that directly occupy Chapter 30 (you directly changed the copy flow) plus the seven or eight chapters before, what are you writing? There is no distinction between priorities and putting the cart before the horse. The promised doomsday stream? Also, I have been talking nonsense about the protagonist (too many mental descriptions), supporting characters, changes in the world, changes in animals and plants, and the world view. I have written more than 100 chapters, but there is still no introduction. Author, you are in doomsday self-entertainment mode. No wonder your grades are so poor. There are too many problems and they are too toxic. I hope you can improve on your own in the future! (I just finished spraying people in the front, I didn't finish it yet)

First, the protagonist's start was too strong and too smooth, which directly weakened the tension of the coming doomsday. Secondly, the settings of skills, items, etc. Are quite satisfactory and have no highlights. Especially the setting of professions makes it feel like an online game novel, which dampens readers' expectations for the plot. I like novels about fighting monsters and exploding equipment at the end of the world, so I apologize for any mistakes in my two sentences.

It's too long-winded, and the protagonist talks a lot of nonsense whether he understands it or not. Moreover, the protagonist is not dark, he is obviously evil and perverted. Hey, if it wasn't so verbose, I could still read it, but now I really can't.

It's really a lot of nonsense, and I've been blaming it all the time.

A copy of Chapter 9, what do you think? The feeling of looking is gone

Why are all the high-end equipment at the beginning?

Author, don't you think the protagonist is too good at talking nonsense? The number of words can't be so bad.

Let's talk about his second talent. Didn't you use the second talent card at the beginning? Why did it disappear later?

Protagonist with a bit of ink

This introduction is good, but it's a pity

Why do I like all the authors who write novels without heroines? They write about pets being beautiful women. Alas, dogs can be licked everywhere.

I really can't stand it when I see the fish, it's so tiring. The fish one seems to be a Japanese movie.