Only My Way

I watched the plot halfway through to the point where the protagonist is thrown into the Northern Territory. The part near the middle was a little boring before, but now it's much better. It feels like changing the map in the first book. I fell in love with the first book. The male protagonist has a cold and ruthless character, coupled with his style of fast dressing and getting dressed. I have always liked this style. I have also been reading a certain Suicune's book before. It's a pity that there is no such frequent map changing plot since the second book, and the plot after escaping from the prison in the second book is a bit too boring. I can only say that the things written are too grand, have nothing to do with ordinary people, and there is no story. The same goes for a certain Suicune. The maps in the last two or three books have not been changed very much, and even the image of the protagonist has become some kind of righteous knight. Whoever reads his books comes to see this 😅 The male protagonist just happens to have some kind of soul beacon setting. I feel that I can rely on this to write a little bit of a fast-travel plot 🙂

The quality is okay. To be honest, the water is a bit interesting. The author has also put in the effort to delete all the negative effects on the work more than the positive ones. It is not the kind of water that Baidu copied and pasted, but it still feels awkward and it is normal to skip reading. .

Just don't suppress it! Big cheers for the author

1. Character aspect: The protagonist's character is decisive in killing. There are currently no surprises, which makes people very comfortable. The main reason is that the hook may be a little strong, but there are certain restrictions (physical endurance limit). The highlight is that the character's hook can develop different moves and effects compared to those in other worlds based on the character's modern soul 2. Rhythm aspect: It is very comfortable so far, not too dragging, but I don't know if it is because of the protagonist's personality. For reasons of quality, I feel that the plot has no conflict or climax. What interests me are the moves and effects developed by the protagonist based on the hook. (Of course, I have read some novels, and the novels I like to read have all been ranked in the top 50 on the list, but I really can't write novels, so I won't comment.) In summary, the novel has the potential to at least hit the top 50 on the list. If the publicity is in place, there will be no problem in at least the top 30! I hope the writers can work hard! It doesn't matter if you take your work seriously and write slowly, at least you can make sure you don't end up in the palace! {"NickName":"Passing by the Second Dimension","UserId":187445178}

The worldviews in the novels written by me are all connected and belong to the same big worldview, and all the protagonists (Orshiga - the devil of the abyss of the worlds, Xishenrei - the one who does whatever he wants, Ling Wu resentment - the only way...) Can all be regarded as different aspects of the same individual. In the same way, the heroines are in the same situation. They are just playing games with the protagonist. If you really can't understand it, just think of all the protagonists as different accounts of the same individual.

I hope you don't become invincible too early. After becoming invincible, it's too difficult to write. If someone else holds a knife and you use a nuclear bomb, it's also very empty and not very nice. There are also more outstanding supporting characters that can be written, such as subordinates, heirs, and opponents (female characters, I beg you for less). There is nothing else. After all, the author doesn't know what he will write. I feel ashamed to say that I was a free prostitute in the first two books, but I definitely won't do this in this one. It can be regarded as a small support.

Nowadays, all the comments are talking about water, talking about water when fighting, talking about water when not fighting, talking about water when talking, talking about water even when not talking, talking about water when practicing, talking about water when not practicing, talking about water even when walking a few steps. Could it be that the water department of the heaven is collectively descending to earth to build a team?

Alas, I still don't really like this type of protagonist. Before he started a harem, he looked like a cold and powerful god, but after he started a harem, he looked like a family man who could raise a harem. I couldn't accept this gap. I had already given up on the author's previous book, but I came here after hearing that this one had no female protagonist.

I have read the first two books by this author. One problem is that it feels very annoying and awkward. It is the female protagonists. There is nothing special about these female protagonists. The protagonist just pays great attention to them and is very good. Even if the ending explains that they and the omniscient and omnipotent protagonist were originally together, aren't they still accessories created by the protagonist, and there is nothing worth paying attention to.

Large image of the character's avatar. The protagonist probably focuses on playing his own game in the middle and later stages. How is the world? None of my business...

Why do you want to waste your work like this? You can obviously write it well, but you have to be a water-filling king to perfuse everyone. I dare say that 90% of the readers came from Demons of the Abyss of the Worlds. Although that book was also unfinished in the later stages, fortunately it was only a quarter full of water in the end, but with its good beginning and unique vision in the early stage, coupled with the excellent imagination, it is still commendable, and it can be regarded as a "good book" recognized by everyone. But look at it now, one book is more watery than the other, and even this one can no longer be described as water injection, the nature is too bad! I saw the author's statement today, saying that due to life reasons, he may update intermittently in the future, but he will insist on updating it more completely. I have been sad, because it will definitely be better in the future. Although I don't want to say this, it would be worthwhile if the author can really face the problem. I always feel that the author can write a good book, which can be seen from his first book. Although life is beating you up in many ways, I hope you understand that you are still talented in writing books. You have to stand up. Maybe the turning point is here. I'm currently looking forward to your next book being written well.

Most of the readers who supported you were probably chased by demons from all realms, and you ended up fooling everyone like this. The last book was written as a side story about demons from all over the world. I thought this book would change, but in the end it was still written in vain. How can an old reader like you support you? I hope you can respect the fan base that I have finally accumulated!

General Post Ao had the talent to be a great person, but then he poured water on himself and finally turned himself into a little loser.

Except for the first one, the biggest shortcoming of the other two books is the strict control of wives. You can go to various worlds to make a living like the first one, and you can keep writing in this type. After you finish one book, you can change it to another one. There will always be this kind of audience anyway. After all, there are very few books in this type of book where the protagonist can do whatever he wants. The biggest shortcoming of these two books is the harem The wife is strict, a person who does whatever he wants is controlled by others. You can be careful but you can't be the wife. Originally, a good article about doing whatever you want is ruined by this. If you can do whatever you want, you should write a good article about doing whatever you want and being controlled by others. This makes readers feel too frustrated. The purpose of reading this type of writing is to be happy and happy just to not be restrained.

It's not good, but the first Demon of the Abyss is good. The author is suitable for writing novels about the flow of gods and unlimited combat power.

Author, since the Abyss Demon became the lord, you have boasted about the greatness and power of the protagonist from all angles and aspects. The same is true for the two subsequent books. The protagonist has not grown at all and has become invincible. Then you start to brag again. Do you really have nothing to write about?

If you read this alone, it's a total flop. This novel feels like it's been written to waste and the plot is rubbish.

Stop writing about feelings and write less about women, okay? What are the previous books like? Isn't this a pitfall that I can't touch?

When Jehovah first sent the great flood, he had to come to ask the author for advice.

I read sixty chapters, each chapter has two thousand words, half of which are self-complaining and half of which are explanations. I don't know what the author's previous works are like. But if you want to eat this type of food, at least the current level is not enough in my opinion. If you continue writing according to this trend, it will be difficult to achieve great results. I originally thought I could see the early writing method of Bear Wolf Dog, but what I saw was the super water "Get away" writing method.

I often use half a chapter to explain a term, such as energy just now. The progress of the plot is basically zero. Is it really good to be so weak?

Nowadays, the protagonists of many books have the same character. I hope the author can bring out the style of the devil's book and write something special. Ou always has his own characteristics.

I'm a little afraid of this author, who starts licking women once the protagonist becomes strong. Just keep it and watch it for a while, if you find a licking girl, run away.

[Body Refining Realm], [Bone Forging Realm], [Strengthening Blood Realm], [Strengthening Internal Organ Realm], [Qi Nourishing Realm], [Source Acceptance Realm], [Yunshen Realm], [Mingyi Realm], [Supernatural Power Realm], [Original Phase Realm], [Heartland Realm], [Dongxu Realm], [Heaven Realm], [Eternal Life Realm], [Immortality Realm], [Destiny Realm], [Creation Realm], [Creation Realm], Infinite Realm, and [Domination Realm].

One sentence, a few dozen words can explain something clearly, but you have to repeat it in hundreds or even thousands of words later. Are you writing a novel or a parenting textbook?

It doesn't look good after it floats. It might have been more interesting if there hadn't been a windfall that day.

Author, I feel that the core of yourself has changed. In Demon of the Abyss of the Realms, what we see is an evil protagonist who endlessly pursues endless power. He has a strong and determined self and a winning heart. Having fun and beating the weak are his daily entertainment as an evil element. I recognize the protagonist Orlonga. His perseverance is eternal and he will definitely be able to climb to the highest level. But looking at your recent works, I feel that there may be an error in your thinking. You write about Lezi people, and I feel that you are actually not very good at writing about Lezi people. You prefer to write about the pursuit of endless power and the firm will of the strong.

It is said that the law of the jungle is essentially the strongest. How did the orphan grow up? Although there is little social security, even if the real society is not alive, it is judged to be a dark and cruel book written by a kid.

It's because the author likes to rest on his laurels, and there's no need to create his own realm. Find a martial arts novel and copy Skin, Flesh and Bone, Zhen Gang Fa, Dan Yuan Shen, Immortal Jin Luo, or go to Dragon Talisman to copy it!

You can still read it from the front, but it looks like AI writing from the back