Sword of Oath of Glory

Meili Meili

The settings for novices are fine, but when it comes to character interaction, it's awkward and difficult to do. It could have used its strengths to avoid its weaknesses. For example, the protagonist is written a bit like a virgin licking a dog. It would be much better if a task could be added. There is already an attribute panel. It will be different if you add a task to gain motivation. At least old readers won't find it awkward. At least from the current starting point, if you write a virgin licking a dog, you lick a female character at the beginning, or for a group of people who have just met you, but you call it your future thigh for the sake of a group of people who have just met you, or if you have some foreshadowing and go through life and death for others (newcomers should avoid writing foreshadowing!), You will be said to be a poisonous weed. Therefore, the protagonist of the Bright and Kind Madonna is actually the most difficult one to write. I have to admit that you are very brave.

Fantasy taboo virgin, the male protagonist licks too much, it's disgusting

Bronze peak kills gold peak? Sure enough, the existence of levels is to show the protagonist's awesomeness. Reminds me of the novels about cultivating immortals that I read before, about practicing Qi and the golden elixir in seconds, and building the foundation to kill the Nascent Soul.

So many people say the dog-licking novel is good-looking, so that's right.

The leap in strength of three times is too big, and it can actually cross levels. Even if the difference is not big in the early stage, there should still be essential differences between bronze, silver, and gold. Three times is too little! Realm is simply child's play!

I just watched it. To be honest, I don't know if the author doesn't know how to portray female characters. After just two appearances, she created such a stupid image, making trouble without reason and without the most basic calmness and restraint.

I also bought an old sword Xixi, it's good, the quality is excellent, the scabbard is very beautiful

When can I get 5 treasures when I drop Gao Wen?

Reviewing The Amber Sword was very touching.

1. I don't think the protagonist is a high-end player, but rather a civilian player who has watched the strategy plot. (Aren't high-end players all straight men?) 2. There are quite a lot of inner dramas. Although I was taken in, my relationship was not confirmed, so why do I think so much about it? 3. At the beginning, I saw a BOSS-level character who was not dead. It felt like a Japanese comic. Personal opinion

Beauty is only worthy of the strong JPG

Well written🌹🌹🌹🌹😃😃😃

Here is a small reward, I hope the author will quickly take out the holy sword that represents the moon! My king competes high!

There are too many emotional scenes and it's boring to watch.

Um... Has the author seen fate?

Can I also have a supporting role? Like a knight of the round table like Lancelot

Wow, author, are you okay?

Water comment, water comment, I want to be the operations officer! ! !

It may not be clearly stated in the book, but I will explain it here. First of all, Mogust is not the perfect golden peak. He only has the power of rules, so he is considered the golden peak by Gawain. Secondly, if you calculate the attributes, Gawain's level 20 civilian can be regarded as a level 10 templar, which means that he has the level of a level 40 templar. The triple combat power of "Eternal Night", even without the improvement of skill power, etc., The triple attributes alone are no worse than the average level 60 silver professional. Finally, in addition to the fact that the "Breaking Dawn" of the Blazing Sun Swordsmanship is itself a high-explosion extraordinary swordsmanship, is it difficult for a miscellaneous soldier like a skeleton warrior to understand in one move? Even if this soldier has reached the gold level

A book with connotation needs to be able to withstand loneliness, just wait until the word count comes up!

The characterization is very successful, each has its own characteristics, and the images are vivid on the page, which is great.

The author's various characters are set up very well. It's great.

The plot is well set up and really enjoyable.

I like this novel very much. People come here every day to catch up on updates. The author would like to work hard to update it!

One more chapter is not enough, please add more.

Uh, I can understand everything about the Holy Mother. Why do you have to be a good person instead of a dog? It's so strange.

Great, all my classmates ate my Amway, and we discussed the plot whenever we had nothing to do.

A book with connotation needs to be able to withstand loneliness, just wait until the word count comes up!

The two of them really encountered something. It made me nervous, fearing that something bad would happen in the next second! 1