Shall We Go Pioneering Tomorrow?

Book lovers can share their favorite extraordinary abilities. It is best not to be too exaggerated and consistent with the setting of this book. Settings of this book: Supernatural ability = natural ability + Nian Innate ability is the superpower obtained after awakening through baptism, which requires Nian to activate. Nian is the awakening of transcendence by establishing a channel through baptism. The substance flowing in the body is equivalent to internal force, which can activate the natural ability and various mental abilities.

Shh! Keep your voice down, look what I found (๑ʘ̅ д ʘ̅๑)!!!? A wild cauliflower, for God's sake, can feed everyone in our camp for a whole day. It is rich in a variety of vitamins needed by the human body. It is very timid. The slightest sound will scare it away. The way it escapes is so special that it is difficult to catch up with it. ( ๑´ڡ`๑) Oh, Brady, look, I caught it, it struggled so hard, it must be a great guy in the cauliflower world, it's time for us to think about how to eat it, we don't have to worry about food for ten days, how about charcoal grilled cauliflower? Cut off a part and skewer it with a stick and brush it with a little butter. Under the residual heat of the charcoal fire, it emits a rich aroma. It is best to add a little black pepper. Then a charcoal-grilled cauliflower is ready. It has the fragrance of cauliflower and the taste of beef. (っ˘ڡ˘ς) I can't wait.

After reading the first volume I have some suggestions, and the author decides whether to adopt them or not. 1. Regarding fighting, the language should be concise and brief, focusing more on the description of movements and expressions, with less psychological description, and less explanation. For example, in the last two books of Squid, the explanations of abilities during fighting are basically descriptions of effects and effects. The explanations are mostly explained by characters or let readers guess by themselves. It is rare to have redundant descriptions during fighting, and strive to be brief and beneficial. 2. When the protagonist is forced to leave at the end of the first volume, it is a relatively tense moment. It is more recommended that Sister Baoer stops the arrow and immediately tells the protagonist to leave. The protagonist hesitates and then runs away immediately, thinking about it while running. When he is about to disappear, design a scene where he looks back and shouts in tears. I personally think it's more tense this way. Some dialogues are interspersed in the recollections, and the characters' movements and expressions when interacting are described in such a way that the readers feel like they are excerpts from the extra story. 3. Character image. Personally, I think some of the characters are not very three-dimensional yet. Of course, this is just the beginning, but the description of the characters makes me feel rather isolated. It was during a journey that some characters disappeared for a while, appeared for a while, had fragmentary descriptions, and then disappeared. There was a feeling that they could not be connected, as if the characters had no ideas of their own and could not capture the scene in the author's writing, but I did not explain it very clearly 😓 4. The descriptions, interactions and details of the protagonist's interactions with the circus people and Mrs. Jasmine were relatively sparse and empty. Therefore, I feel that the emotional foreshadowing of the farewell to the circus people and the second farewell to the group was still poor. However, this is also greatly affected by the length. After all, chapter 20 is about to end, and it is really difficult to lay the foundation for the relationship Good I will write this point for now. The above suggestions are only personal opinions. They may not be suitable for the author or better. If you don't like them, please don't criticize them. Friendly discussions are welcome.

The writing is very good, and the novelty is worthy of encouragement. It's really nice to find a book like this when there is a book shortage. I hope the author can stick to it!!!

The plot and writing are okay, the relationship between the characters is a mess, and the heroine is inexplicable. She just stole things at the beginning. I didn't see that she felt guilty. She didn't know to return them for so long. She gave her glasses to someone a few days after we met, and she became the heroine. The society inside is considered a representative of power, and the ruins are a symbol of wealth. With a group of people who have only met each other for a few days, you form a society. You don't need to guess to conquer the ruins. The protagonist is the first one. The relics are regarded as the property of the society. Does the author think it is reasonable? In the content, the protagonist has outstanding abilities and should act alone. He should be written as a lord. The society has a clear hierarchy. There are always a few characters popping up. They are familiar with each other in the previous life. They take the lead in fighting monsters and giving things. It is okay to write a rebirth article. They knew each other in the previous life and repay the favor. This is more reasonable. In real companies and guilds in online games, all have owners. The ten owners of your society are all people who have known each other for a few days.

How can I put it, when I saw the heroine giving my eyes to it, I didn't want to watch it 😓😓😓. It feels a bit too hasty and unacceptable.

Overall, it's okay, but I have to say a few words. Some details are not handled properly. It's obviously a Western fantasy story. Don't use a name like Ma Yun. It's easy to think of Ma Yun and Ma Rong. There are also "Shen Shang" and the like. It's not that it can't be used. If the writing is not strong enough, it will make readers feel that it is a drama.

I still like it very much and will support it by ordering it all. In fact, there are quite a lot of things in this book that are eye-catching. Many people complained about the clichéd setting, the protracted plot, and the unclear characters. But the author actually integrates it very well. Nian, star shells, map land reclamation, interesting props, etc. Are already very novel among so many online articles that are seriously homogenized. We need more encouragement for authors so that they can do better. The author insists to this day that he is really generating electricity for love, and the royalties are not enough for electricity bills. Those readers who have given me advice are also asked to write a book for everyone to appreciate. I hope the author can persevere and I believe your books will get better and better.

There are very few well-written books nowadays. This book is recommended by old bookworms. Come on, author.

I wonder why my grades are so bad. I always write some words that are self-explanatory and dramatic. This is a fantasy novel. You want to make the protagonist more flesh and blood. It is right, but it is hard to portray it as a frivolous joke. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye