Immortality Begins with Quanzhen

After going to the world of Journey to the West, I felt like it was just a piece of shit. It was no longer interesting. It could be thousands or hundreds of years old. But have you ever thought about your wife, children, and disciples? They are no longer human, and they are not just robots.

I just discovered this book recently, from a recommendation on the web version. The beginning is very good. In fact, it is the simplest useless start, but the author handles it very well. The will and persistence are all quite good. At least it is to my liking. And the most important thing is rationality. A time traveler, in an environment like that in ancient times, would not be able to find all kinds of secrets as soon as he arrived, and he would not be able to find natural treasures, magic weapons and weapons just by looking for them. Therefore, the difficult situation in the early stage, ten taels of silver just to find a way, is very realistic. The golden finger in the middle is expected. After all, I am getting older and I want to live forever after reading the title, so it is normal to have a golden finger. When the Quanzhen Sect first met Yin Zhiping, I thought there was going to be a clichéd martial arts competition or something like that, but in the end nothing happened. After all, it is impossible for a high disciple of the Quanzhen Sect to be tolerant of others, and some children have normal tempers. It makes perfect sense from the beginning of the article to this point. But after arriving in Jiangnan and meeting Huang Rong, there were some problems. As for Huang Rong, there are many people who like her, so the author wants to arrange her as the female protagonist, or let him have some intersection with the male protagonist. Everyone can understand it. But some are too deliberate. Huang Rong is quirky and can be explained away as a little thief, but it makes no sense for the male protagonist to force Huang Rong to stay with him after recognizing her true identity. Since you are afraid that Huang Laoxie will come to your door, shouldn't you borrow a donkey to go downhill? Knowing that Huang Rong has nothing to do with the Yellow River Gang, you should let her go. In this way, even if Huang Laoxie comes to visit, it will be a misunderstanding. Due to your reputation as a disciple of the Quanzhen Sect, it will not embarrass you too much. But you know your identity and are still by your side for no reason. Aren't you just waiting for Huang Laoxie to take pictures of you? On the one hand, he keeps saying that he is afraid of Huang Laoxie, but on the other hand, he is holding Huang Rong captive. Isn't this contradictory? The latest chapter is another scene where a hero saves a beauty. Huang Rong can be the heroine, but she can't make it awkward just for the male and female protagonists to meet. After all, it is a novel, and coincidences are normal, but the author emphasized rationality from the beginning, and now for Huang Rong's sake, the logic is inconsistent and inconsistent, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. Could it really be written by someone else?🤔

Each person has one opinion and one feeling. I think the more I watch, the more interesting it becomes.

The main plot of this book is smooth, learning skills along the way, going down the mountain, and fighting with great strength. It is a bit fast, but very smooth. The protagonist Xu Tianya created by the author does not have any big poisonous points, but there are quite a few minor ones. I saw Xu Tianya returning to the mountain. There are a few things I find strange about the previous article. First, the author goes straight to the description of the cultivation of immortality and the power system, and is a bit contradictory in the detailed description of the Quanzhen Sect. First of all, Yin Zhiping was described by the author as the successor to the boss when he first appeared. He was only a teenager when he appeared. Although he is a disciple of Ma Yu's lineage, it is a bit exaggerated to say that he is already the successor to the head. The subsequent arrangements for Nie Changqing also proved this (there is a high probability of foreshadowing, but that is two different things). A large-scale semi-military Taoist organization with the main central idea of ​​resisting the Jin Dynasty and restoring the Han people's country, the largest sect in the world, when the disciples taught by the professor decided to devote themselves to the cause of resisting the Jin Dynasty, they had to resort to betraying the Quanzhen Sect. This is not like the practice of a large organization, but a bit like a grassroots team. Second, the author has a misunderstanding about the Yueyang Tower agreement between Qiu Chuji and the Jiangnan Seven Monsters. The description of Qiu Chuji is too small-scale. The Seven Monsters of Jiangnan left Jiangnan and searched for Guo Jing and her son all over the world. They finally found them and passed on their skills. Relying on one belief for more than ten years is not something ordinary people can do. The Seven Monsters of Jiangnan at that time were all young people, except for the boss Ke Zhene. More than ten years have passed, just for a promise. For the appointment at Yueyang Tower, Changchun Master hopes to repay his reputation with the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan. Fulfill the loyalty of the Jiangnan Seven Monsters. Don't forget, who are Yang Tiexin and Guo Dingtian? They are the heroes who fought against the Jin after Zhongliang. The author is constantly striving to cultivate immortality and improve his power system, but the description of the world of low-level vulture shooting is a bit light. Humble opinion

This is martial arts written as fantasy, and it no longer has the flavor of a fan.

Don't follow the example of skipping the second update. If you have a bright future like that, you need more updates.

Fine. If you read too much, you will hit a wall and pretend to be cowardly. This book is quite interesting to read slowly over low heat. Slowly and gradually, Pig's Feet slowly became a master from a shopkeeper, taking charge of a party. Say something normal, the sentences are smooth, coherent, and reasonable. The only two small flaws It is too slow. In the current environment, people's hearts are floating, and there are many fewer people who can read quietly. The plot gradually progresses, and the pig's feet become bigger and stronger step by step. This was originally an advantage, but in the past few years, it has almost become a disadvantage. Bland, how do you say this? For example, Naruto, Death, etc., Three chapters with a small climax, ten chapters with a story, can you understand? For this one, simmer over low heat. 90 points

Why not get the Nine Yin Manual. The most powerful and easiest martial art in the world of the divine eagle is the Jiuyin Manual. The world has been confirmed. It is at the foot of Zhongnan Mountain. I have been to the Quanzhen Sect countless times and I must be familiar with the area around the Quanzhen Sect. Why don't you get the Nine Yin Manual? Isn't the Nine Yin Manual better than the junk martial arts of the Quanzhen Sect? Wang Chongyang found that he could not defeat Lin Chaoying with his innate skills, and could only defeat Lin Chaoying with the Nine Yin Manual. The Nine Yin Manual is engraved in the secret room. No one can find it, but you can find it with a little patience.

I like this book very much. The protagonist's experience is steady and steady. He practices spiritual practice when he should and acts chivalrously when he should. There is also a lot of original content. In terms of martial arts, it also has the flavor of Jin Yong's original work. But looking at this book, it is classified in the science fiction, time and space travel area. The title of the book is that immortality begins with Quanzhen, and it will definitely go to other worlds in the future. I have read many fan works, including a large number of people who switch from martial arts to cultivating immortals. It is inevitable that there will be several problems. 1. Once the zone is changed, the boundary division begins to be chaotic. 2. The steady and steady style becomes more difficult to write as you go forward. 3. Some characters and martial arts in the world of high martial arts may not be as good as those in the world of low martial arts in terms of wisdom, character, and intentions. 4. After traveling through the world, in order to prevent the protagonist's previous efforts from seeming in vain, he is always allowed to quickly recover his strength. They often fall into the reincarnation of fighting with top masters and then competing for dominance in the martial arts world, without the previous down-to-earth and natural character development narrative. These are common problems. After all, we have seen them too many times. I sincerely hope that this article will not encounter them.

Unless the main character hacks his son to death, I won't watch it. It's very toxic and everyone won't like it. Even though the protagonist doesn't have much time to spend with his son, it's just that he doesn't spend much time with his son, not that he doesn't accompany him. As a result, he doesn't even want to call him dad after not seeing him for several years. He doesn't bother practicing martial arts and dances around every day. Later, he runs away from home and becomes a demon. He kills so many people and is actually hacked to death by the protagonist with a sword. Alas. What did you write? It shouldn't be about a son. In addition, the protagonist keeps sighing that it's my fault, it's my fault. It's very unbearable. He thinks it's Duan Zhengchun, and the sword cultivator's firmness is gone.

After seeing Xu Ning killing so many innocent people because his girlfriend faked her death and became a demon, the protagonist didn't say anything. He just said, "I didn't educate him well." It was gone, gone, gone... Really, if you didn't educate him well, give me a good education! Even if he declares to others that his son's sins are his own, he still chooses to bear his son's sins. How is this different from today's trashy romance TV series? "If the world is destroyed, it will be destroyed. If she is gone, she is really gone..." Speechless. If this is the author's world view, I just want to say that it's great that the author is not in a high position, otherwise we, ordinary people, would have no choice but to die. Forget it, when the author engages in a mafia-style material "cultivating immortality" concept of mortals cultivating immortals, this is what should happen, and he slipped away.

I can't stand it anymore, just because you coveted Huang Rong's body, and then used it up irresponsibly. You gave birth to a son and you didn't educate or raise him. Now you know your son's condition, and you don't have the tools to cure your son's inner demons, but you still don't care and continue your own spiritual path. Then when you come back, your son becomes a demon and massacres ordinary people. Then you blame yourself, blaming yourself for wanting to become stronger. You didn't expect this. Then, my son is fine, you are fine too, but what about so many people who were killed inexplicably? Did they provoke you? Just go into seclusion and wander around in other worlds for ten or more years. Then why did you provoke Huang Rong? Just because it was Huang Rong, I wanted to have a good time, and then I didn't care after I was done. Why would you marry a wife and have children if you take the ruthless path? Since you don't want to worry about it, why don't you stop pretending to show your warm side?

How should I put it? The author feels that he has reached a dead end. The main world and the mortal world could have been very exciting, but they were watered down and the map was changed to force the author down. . . There are also two poisonous points, Huang Rong and her son. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Generally speaking, the author's writing skills are above average. I rated this book as "tasteless". There is no meat in it, but it tastes good when it is removed. Nowadays, I just jump to read it. I really can't find any other good time travel novels in the recent book shortage. I don't know what to say, but the author should avoid these poisonous points in the next book. Your grades could have been better. Please listen to your opinions on how to improve. If there is improvement, I plan to pursue your next book about time travel. Of course, if your Quanzhen can change and become more exciting later on, I will continue to support it, but the patience of readers is really limited, not to mention this is an online article 😥

I hope that in reality the author is not an official, or there is no official in his family. Otherwise, will the common people still have a way to survive? Your father is Li Gang, garbage.

It's not enough, the author should try to make more

Let me tell you The first 200 chapters of this book are okay, and I can barely read it after 300 chapters. After Xu Tianya's son becomes a demon, I can completely abandon the book. I have gone through four copies so far First Mortal, Second Parallel Modern, Third Immortal Sword, and Fourth Journey to the West. How can I put it? Of the four copies, only the first and second can be read, but there is no plot participation. It feels like an assembly line. It's not as enjoyable as reading the original novel for you. Of course, the transformation of the world can still be barely seen in the main world of the Condor Shooting, but here's the point. Ever since Xu Tianya's son became a demon, the plot has become a mess. I didn't explain it to anyone in the world. The son of a pig's trotters has the privilege of slaughtering cities and villages. What the hell is written in the fairy sword? Kneel down and lick the pig's trotters. What the hell is Journey to the West? Really, it disgusts me to death. The best thing about this book is The World of the Condor. I really don't recommend reading it after 200 pictures. I regret it now. I have ordered the following chapters. I hope everyone will remember it.

Well, I saw so many people talking about Huang Rong. . . . . Then since you believe that Guo Jing and Huang Rong are destined by God, why do you read fan fiction? What you should be reading is The Legend of the Condor Heroes. You read the original work and have no money to buy it? Huabei cashes out,

The author is not good at describing emotions, but he insists on writing about Huang Rong. I really don't know what to say. The poisonous point is really concentrated on this heroine, who is also a talented person. Subscribing to 10 chapters is considered a recognition of the plot that has nothing to do with the heroine and the writing that has nothing to do with the heroine. (What a pity) Abandon it and disappear

It was okay before I got into the subtleties, but after I got into the subtleties, it was completely rambling. If you want to conquer the world, just write down how to prepare. According to what you said before, Quanzhen has a huge influence in the north. All parties see Quanzhen as a powerful group. Just write it down and we will compete for the world. Anyway, Goldfinger needs resources. If you win the world, the resources will be yours. If you want to live forever, you will have a solid foundation. This is also reasonable, so don't be too whiny. There are countless numbers of people, and you don't know what to do. The north is your Quanzhen base, and you feel that you can't afford to offend Jin and Mongolia. You shouldn't say that Quanzhen is very powerful in the north, which makes your logic confusing. If you want to concentrate on practicing martial arts and ignore the disputes in the world, you don't want Bi Feng to go to Mongolia, then to the Jin Kingdom, and then Little Dragon Girl. In fact, in front of the army, what does Quan Zhen mean? It's nothing more than being at both ends, trying to survive in the cracks and not being able to get on the stage. You have traveled through time and have no experience compared to the natives. You are stumped by the Quanzhen Sect Rules. You don't know what to do. It's depressing! It's recommended to clarify your thoughts before writing. Don't mess around just to update five chapters a day, which will end up throwing you off.

The author is great, can't I update one more page every day? Why ! Write more! Two pictures a day are really not enough! ! ! I hope you don't give up on this book! ! Come on, come on, come on!

It's a garbage book. It's forced to lower one's intelligence in order to follow the plot. I'm afraid it's not a novice who can read it. When a modern person goes to ancient times, his brain becomes stupid. A modern person has to use ancient thinking to think about things. It's clear that Yang Kang wants to cause trouble, and he has to wait for others to cause trouble to make himself uncomfortable. Then the stupid protagonist doesn't kill Yang Kang immediately. It makes me sick to read.

I stopped reading it after Shooting the Condor, and I didn't know what I was writing. Suddenly, the martial arts turned into a fairy tale, and the background was changed in a very abrupt way.

Except for a little less than two meals a day, everything else is pretty good. It's not easy to find this book. Good luck, author.

The progress is slow, the author is abusive, the author you wrote is very bad, the author you did a very bad job. The author, your writing is very, very bad. Author, your plot is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. What you write, the author, is very bad. The author, your writing is too bad. The author you wrote is not good. (This message rebounds all attacks)

Author, what are you writing about? The protagonist went to the desert to teach Guo Jing martial arts. The hand that was transmitting the Quanzhen Dao Song was interrupted by Mei Chaofeng and the two old monks. Before the formula was recited, someone was eavesdropping, and there was no follow-up. When you taught Jin Yan Kung Fu, you were on the mountain, and you just asked Guo Jing to study Qing Kung at the bottom of the mountain. Did you teach it or not? The main thing is that he passed on a set of the Great Demon Subduing Fist from the Nine Yin Manual. What are you writing about?

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I can't stand it after reading Chapter 132, it's so ugly

It's rubbish. At first glance, it looks like it's just put together to get money.

The setting of son, wife and sister is disgusting and redundant, and removing it will have no impact at all. The final copy of Journey to the West is so poorly written that it would be better if the book was removed. Mortal I think the writing is pretty good.

"Tao Fa Hui Yuan" says: "The three talents of Tao are one Qi ear, the sky moves with Qi, the earth comes into being with Qi, Yin and Yang relax with Qi, wind and thunder are turbulent with Qi, the human body breathes with Qi, and Taoism uses Qi to sense." "Qi Ben Lun", which is composed of the only Qi of heaven and earth, is the basic theory of the Taoist worldview. Why are there so many monks practicing qi in the world of martial arts and immortals? Just weird. The basic theory of Mingming's Buddhist worldview is: "All actions are impermanent, all dharmas have no self, and Nirvana is silent." However, in martial arts and fairy novels, they still do whatever they want by refining their Qi, just like Shaolin monks cultivating their inner strength 🙂