Immortality Begins with Jin Yiwei

Putting the cart before the horse, I really can't pursue it anymore. It doesn't matter if Zhu Tianwen is written as a struggle for hegemony, or it is written as a historical text, but the key point is that the protagonist is too boring. What on earth does the author want to express? Brother, are your golden fingers used for eating dry food? This book was absolutely perfect before Chongzhen's death. After Chongzhen's death, the main plot became more and more biased, the protagonist became more and more indecisive, and the plot kept repeating. I sincerely recommend that you don't subscribe to the following content. Apart from wasting book money and making me angry and not knowing how to express myself, I really can't think of any other adjectives.

The title of the novel is Martial Arts and Fairy Tales, but it is written as a plot of war and ancient style. They don't match each other, so there's no need to watch them!

Modern people have golden fingers and are not weak in mind! As a result, all kinds of things were done! Waste of time

As a free prostitute, I rarely spend money to read e-books. Perhaps it was the plot after the enlightenment of Yangming's philosophy that moved me, and I decided to reward the author. The goals of life always change with the enrichment of life experience. The essence of the protagonist from the initial struggle to survive to the pursuit of immortality has not changed, but as Chongzhen came to power, he gained a series of: friends, trust, and feelings of family and country. With the death of Chongzhen, the righteousness of friends, the kindness of superiors, and the love of family and country were sublimated. Chongzhen's death kept these feelings at their most beautiful, just like the artificial love in the senior year of high school. This nihilistic emotion gives the protagonist the weight of life. After completing the path of fulfilling his friends and his own ideals, it will provide spiritual support on the road to eternal life.

When the author can't stand it, you can read it

When I saw Chapter 384 I didn't understand it very much. There are more than 200 astronomical pictures in one world. More than 80% collapsed. I really can't keep up with it. Two hundred pages ago, it was still a good book. Let's go to bed in the back.

The writing is good, it's rare that I can wait for updates every day!

I really can't get it right. I don't even know what the author is doing over and over again. Who has the word count? The world was once again peaceful for Chongzhen, and then Chongzhen died, and the world was in turmoil again, and the little emperor was trying to bring peace to him, and then the Queen Mother forced the protagonist to take the throne, and then the world was in turmoil again, and the protagonist was trying to level the world for himself, are you tired of chasing it? I don't care about the classification of the heavens, I just read it as a historical text, but why do I keep repeating it? Slipped away

It is impossible for Jinyiwei selection to kill each other. Don't forget where Zhu Yuanzhang was born. His birth would have made it impossible to set such cannibalistic selection criteria.

When Hong Kong directors and screenwriters make movies with historical attributes, it feels like they have never read the book. Whatever I shoot, I feel like I'm going shopping with Young and Dangerous!

What you want to see is cultivation and immortality, but you end up fighting lowly in court.

The first part is pretty good, but the latter part gets worse and worse. The first is that there are so many chapters, but they have not touched on immortality at all, and have nothing to do with the title. It is more like a historical fiction and a low-level struggle for hegemony. If you want to write about immortality, I personally think that the factors of immortality need to be ambush in advance. The only thing related to immortality in the article is just a slight mention in the exercises. There are so many chapters, and the clues to immortality have not yet come out. Judging from the latest chapters, there are external troubles outside and internal worries inside. How many chapters are needed to solve these? Two hundred? Or four hundred? I wrote hundreds of chapters just before proclaiming myself emperor. When will we get to immortality next? The second is that after there are too many characters later, the description cannot be grasped. From swearing to protect the Ming Dynasty with Chongzhen to establishing the country of Daheng, the description is not only cumbersome, but also the character of the character, such as the Queen Mother Zhou, changes too quickly. If you make up your mind to use the Queen Mother Zhou as a reason to rebel, then you will not be able to rebel from the beginning. To describe the general knowledge of Empress Dowager Zhou, when Chongzhen died, she told Empress Dowager Zhou that she would listen to Duke Qin and let him be the prince's teacher, etc. This part does not have the intention of Empress Dowager Zhou being suspicious and the protagonist will rebel in the future. Then suddenly Empress Dowager Zhou wants to kill Duke Qin. The turning point in this part is too sudden. Which parts should be emphasized and which ones can be brushed off. Personally, I think it was handled very poorly and laid a lot of groundwork for the rebellion. However, the real climax part is solved in one chapter, which ends in an anticlimactic manner. It may be that I want to give the protagonist a legitimate reason for the rebellion. However, this way of writing does not fit with the previous story line, and secondly, it does not fit with the previous description of the protagonist. Third, the protagonist is now emperor and has a child. How to write about immortality? Is it personal immortality or the establishment of an immortal dynasty? I just read the latest chapter. The meaning of the article is that it is inevitable for sons to kill each other. In this way, the protagonist is now completely the same character as the former ruthless emperor, without many of the protagonist's own characteristics. I have also read a lot of novels about immortality. If those novels start from the court, then they will definitely not become emperor, and they will definitely not have children too early, because the process of immortality in the future will be difficult to write, including some novels about emperors at the beginning, and children will not be born very early. I don't know how the author planned the outline, but I think it is necessary to sort it out. There are a lot of confusing and unclear logics in the article, but it needs to be said. I stayed up late to read the first half, and skipped to read the second half. It's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless, and it's tasteless. (Personal opinion, don't try to bully me, bully means you are right. Use your bully to disgust others, don't disgust me.)

Author, in fact, your book is quite good as an alternate history, but it has nothing to do with immortality. I recommend changing the name. . . I would like to give you a suggestion called "The End of the Ming Dynasty that saved the world".

New book friends, I would like to remind you that everyone is saying that the author's writing is off topic, but few people say that his writing is not good. Even if this book is off topic, the writing is definitely better than most of the books in the daily recommendations.

The new book is about to start, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you.

I have been reading for so long, and this is the first time that I have written a pure historical novel about traveling through time and cultivating immortality. The key point is that the writing is pretty good!

I can't stand it anymore from the first few chapters. What is Jinyiwei? It is the emperor's personal army. What does the emperor's personal army need most? It's loyalty! What did you experience? It's a training base for ruthless killers! The Ming Dynasty has never trained Jin Yiwei like this! You have been making things up from the beginning, and they are illogical, unreasonable, and unhistorical!

To be honest, a good martial arts fight turned into a palace fight drama. The title of this book says that immortality is not compatible at all. It is better to say that you will conquer the world for the Ming Dynasty and then become the emperor yourself.

It looks fine from the front, but the further back you look, the more it looks like an old lady's foot-binding cloth. The more you look at it, the more you feel it has nothing to do with longevity.

Are you from heaven? Isn't this a late-Ming Dynasty novel? There is no end to the world. The more you write, the more excited you become. The author is letting go of himself.

In the late Ming Dynasty, more than 600 pictures have been painted and it is not finished. If it is just a history, if it is really Zhu Tianwen, are you ready to compete with the school belle's personal expert to see who is better at painting?

What does it say, sell pork with a dog's head? What does it have to do with longevity? The first part was about martial arts, but the second part was almost completely scrapped and went straight to the battlefield and firearms. I'm also convinced. The author wanted to write about cultivating immortals, but the writing was not good and it turned into a historical text?

The studio has already given the money to the author, so it doesn't matter. Whether this book makes money or loses money is a matter for the studio. Nice. . . The author is indeed a right-minded person. . . Haha 😊

If it doesn't work, hurry up and become a eunuch. What the hell are you writing about?

It feels like the author is dragging out the plot just for the sake of dragging it out. I don't want to read it anymore after seeing the rebellion or something, so I say goodbye.

I thought this was a systematic martial arts... I didn't expect that it was just fighting, but in the end, I had to be held hostage by civil servants, and I was in trouble.

The protagonist promised Chongzhen to take care of the little emperor many times, and said more than once in front of Chongzhen: Mountains and rivers will always be there, and the Ming Dynasty will always be there. Later, I told the little emperor and the queen mother the same thing, This promise is like farting Later, I became a rebel and became the emperor myself. Seeing this, I felt like I was eating.

Saw it a long time ago,