Konoha's Free Life

How to say it? Overall it's pretty good to watch, but I can't understand the protagonist's behavior. Not even the Holy Mother, but she likes to forcefully tie herself down. Almost all the people I wanted to protect were killed, and I also had a falling out with the higher-ups. I thought I would leave Konoha, but what happened? What the hell? Does the protagonist really need to lick Konoha like this with his strength? Yes, although it is not written like this in the book, what I saw is - "I am in Konoha. Although the roots and Uchiha clan members want to kill me, and Danzo did kill the people I wanted to protect, I still want to stay here inexplicably."

The protagonist keeps shouting for freedom, but from the beginning to the end he is wallowing in the quagmire of Konoha! You have no family, no deep feelings for your classmates, no friends, and no bonds. Why do you stick to Konoha and never leave? The more I look at it, the more frustrated I feel. I have potential and strength, and there is no reason to stay in Konoha. Why should I stay and be targeted and plotted against again and again!

Starting from the moment when the protagonist lets go of Orochimaru who threatens him, the plot becomes more and more confusing, and it feels like the protagonist is getting stupider and stupider! The protagonist has such a character and IQ, but he still pursues the freedom of being a fool! It would be great to serve Orochimaru as the reincarnation container and Orochimaru as the protagonist!

Yeah, well written. I would like to ask the author if he wants to write an emotional line? If you don't grasp it well. I recommend not writing it (just a suggestion). If you write, I think original ones are better. (Although there is no profit to be gained from female pig feet). I personally think the women in the Naruto anime are poorly written. Among the Naruto fics I read, eight out of ten include Tsunade, Sakura, Hinata, Kurenai, Anko, and Karin. Anyway, as long as they are good-looking. Have been written about. As a time-traveler, don't you know that there are thousands of time-travelers, and half of them are in the Naruto world. I think people in the same genre suck at the women in anime (I'm talking about the writing, of course you can also ghs). Having read many Naruto fanfics, I was very interested in it at first. Now? I'm almost mysophobic. Of course, everything is up to you. Not even a reference. This is just what I wish for. After all, there are many readers requesting books without female protagonists (I'm not talking about this book). Also. . . . You must persist! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! No more eunuchs! ! ! !

After writing two chapters of my relationship, I realized that many people were embarrassed and walked away. I would like to open a forum for everyone to complain about it, and let me know where the awkwardness is and pay attention to it in the future.

It's all kaleidoscope. You wrote that he has become Kage level in both Taijutsu and Swordsmanship, and he also has innate vitality. Now A-level Ninjutsu no longer requires seals. Now he is still threatened by Orochimaru and team battles. The rats hiding in the ditch are free, but I don't notice it either.

Why is the protagonist so useless? He has the Eternal Sharingan, the aura of cultivating immortals, and strong physical skills, yet he is ordered by Nabe Kage and tricked by Orochimaru. So what if you kill him? He is also framed by his family, rubbish.

A coward and holy bitch who has activated the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan

I felt that the main character Bai became stronger in the middle. When he became stronger, it was so exciting that he thought he was going to rise to the ninja world! When he rebelled against Konoha, he was so good that no one dared to stop him. However, in the past few chapters, he was beaten up by the anger of the genocide and returned to Ryūchi Cave with serious injuries. This angry revenge is weak by more than three points? I can do it with nine points 😅

Don't write that pig's feet are a high-intelligence setting, it's too dramatic. As we all know, the highest IQ in novels is the author's IQ.

It is recommended that the author re-read what he has written and sort out the clues. The plot is getting more and more confusing, and I have no desire to continue reading. The protagonist's free life is like a joke...

The Holy Mother forced wisdom! There are so many enemies and you still act like a holy mother bitch. Are you saving people or harming them?

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that the narrative was a bit confusing.

The front part is pretty good, although the ink is a little blurred, but the back part is very speechless and too confusing.

This is another novel written by a very self-absorbed author, and the writing techniques are not good enough. It looks nondescript and almost

I really don't see where freedom is anymore.

You are so strong, yet you still have to compromise like this with Danzo? ? ?

Travel across Uchiha and start practicing Tai Chi! Did Madara Uchiha be beaten to death with one move of Wild Horse Parting Mane later? If Tai Chi is so awesome, why don't we see someone breaking through the void and ascending in the daytime? It would be excusable if you were wearing Hinata and doing Tai Chi. Uchiha rely on their eyes, right?

It's obviously called a free life, but the protagonist forcibly puts restraints on himself

I don't know what the author wants to express! Very baffling plot and setting!

I really can't stand it anymore, the main character is a loser.

This motherfucker is not a normal person. The book written by Daoist Xuan Gong is acceptable and unacceptable. The main character is a smart person, and you are forced to write it as a psycho. As a result, the reader makes you inexplicable and neurotic. It is so rubbish.

Come on, it's finally over😭

The previous part about normal life in Konoha is very good. Goldfinger is also okay and can be read. After I started communicating with Orochimaru, I felt a bit broken. It can be seen that the author wanted to express the power system in his mind, but his writing skills began to be erratic. Two souls and two personalities can easily lead readers into a ditch, leaving people mentally and physically exhausted.

The author himself may not be able to figure out what the specific goal is, but he still has to write it, so the cleverness is all about maintaining the original plot line. There is no need to talk about the specific details. It is not a problem to be familiar with Naruto's ten and twenty shortcomings. This is not to say that the quality of Naruto fanfics that change the plot route is good, but the Naruto fanfics that dare not deduce the plot changes are really not good.

What does it mean to update once a day?

The first part feels okay, but what exactly did you write about the plot after meeting Orochimaru? I can't see what you want to write at all, it's so baffling!

As a smart man, Pigfoot didn't plan his future route after being able to practice after traveling through time, and kept hanging out in Konoha. Throughout the entire story of Naruto, Konoha is not a place to live and settle down. There were three generations of hypocrites in the past and a true villain Danzo in the past. Being a ninja in Konoha and wanting to live a free life is simply delusional. It's better to fake death and defect during the Third War. The world can always be set up.

The emotional scenes are a little less interesting and very embarrassing.

The first part is okay, but from the main text onward, life becomes incomprehensible.