Contract a Group of Players

The writing style is quite relaxed, and the worldview setting is also good, so stay tuned.

The subject matter is good, but the author doesn't know how to write it, and the content is confusing. Can't it be simpler and directly contract with players and push into other worlds? I also want to talk about this and that, dozens of chapters, I don't know what I am doing.

Great author, come on, it's very good, the creativity is great

Author, I am really unhappy with your boos. Shouldn't it be the boss? 😥 I saw the Spider Queen, and then I burst into tears with all the boos in the chapter. I kept thinking about what the boos was, even though I knew it was the boss 🤐

Eight pokes, it's just that the players want to oppose the protagonist and it's very uncomfortable. It's a bit difficult for the players to believe in the protagonist. I read two similar novels before, and the protagonists relied on their appearance to make the players never turn back.

If you have any comments on the book, settings, or any poisonous points you find, please provide them. (•̀⌄•́) I know how to optimize it. (•̀⌄•́)

This first chapter is very vicious, making me dizzy every time I read it, but it makes me want to continue reading unconsciously. It is worthy of a contracted writer. If you write it like this, a writer with a lower level will probably be able to write more than 10 mistakes, but you can connect the whole story smoothly. (But to be honest, I like to read things that are easy to understand. I don't think I said this. Personal preferences are different.)

If anyone reads it, I hope you can give me some comments, and it would be great if you can cast a vote.

To be honest, this subscription is a bit overwhelming

I applied to join the group twice, why was it never approved? QAQ

Chapter 100 is coming soon, you can kill it

Don't follow the old path of dungeon players. Try to simplify the characters and don't write too many people. Otherwise, if you don't write enough, you won't be able to write. Don't exploit players. You can suppress it appropriately, but don't make people think that your protagonist is a capitalist. Everyone is so tired. Why bother in the novel? This is also the reason why dungeons explode.

The sense of immersion is poor, others are average

Well written, keep at it and keep working!

Okay, okay, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch, keep writing it down, come on. This setting is quite good and very creative.