Stars, Players and Immortals

As far as the content is concerned, there are currently less than 30 chapters. After so many years, I finally saw a book that fills the gap left after the completion of "The Super Mechanic". Some people have been waiting for it.

Live broadcast article, the protagonist is an NPC guiding the live broadcast players

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The overall style is serious, and there are many plots without players. What are the players doing in a serious farming story? Players and indigenous people develop together, which is neither fish nor fowl. While initiating action seriously, at the same time attacking playfully...

As a fourth-day disaster novel, this book is well written. It avoids the biggest problem of the fourth-day disaster novel and balances the three aspects of the player, the natives, and the protagonist very well in the plot. There is no situation where one party is too strong and no one else affects the plot, and there is no situation where one party is just working for others, making people wonder why they want to participate in the plot. However, this book has a shortcoming, that is, the author likes to use a set word count. It is free now, but if it is still like this on the shelves, it will easily make people feel like they are losing money.

A lot of vests Including Ben Ben Pigeon Songjuke Piece on the Pillow Waiting for Eggs Old Man in Mountain Dwelling Wandering in the Sea of ​​Books Phantom of the Galaxy Galaxy Fairy Tales White Spirit Writer Sword Master Bard Galaxy Evening Boat Galaxy Storyteller Mountain Dwelling Midsummer Night Burning Galaxy

The previous writing was okay, but the part about preparing for the rebellion was too confusing, with long paragraphs of nouns and explanations, as well as long procedures for activating various equipment, and the breakdown of each unit and squad. . . There isn't much actual plot in one chapter. . . . It reminds me of a person who cultivated immortality last year. At that time, there were relatively few AI articles. The first twenty chapters were well written. The protagonist's sect is a cosmic holy land with extremely rich resources. . . .

I hope to pay more attention to plot advancement, pure data system prompts, upgrade experience, etc. If I write too much, I feel like I haven't read it after reading a chapter. The actual plot is too little.

So far we have reached chapter 41 The fourth natural disaster article is a super god mechanic type The theme background is stars (yes, the stars themselves have war hammers sewn on them, so it can be regarded as a pure background of stars) Overall it is not bad, 7.5 Food and grass level So far we have chapter 41 , the progress of background import is basically completed The advantages are 1. Starry background, fourth natural disaster story, excellent setting 2. Cool writing, the plot is not uncomfortable at the moment The shortcomings also include a common problem with the fourth natural disaster type, panel problems. What I feel about this book is that the attributes and expertise of the protagonist have no real sense, and the combination of the panel and the actual expressiveness has no sense. There are a lot of player perspectives. Although the protagonist is the commander behind the scenes, there is still too little shaping of the protagonist's image.

There is a book about the Fourth Natural Disaster next to it. You can't win against the native army in a battle for supremacy. Meat is needed for resurrection. The fourth natural disaster army is the weakest among the three major forces in the battle for hegemony. The first major force is a brutal army that eats human flesh. They are not afraid of death. If they win, they will eat the corpses on the battlefield.

I'm not even in the mood to subscribe. If it's so slow, I'll have to wait for 50 chapters before reading.

I feel that the author's writing is pretty good. The biggest problem is that there are too few novels. The author's grades are not good enough. I feel that I have chosen the wrong division. The science fiction and game divisions are already complete divisions. It may be better to go to light novels. Is it because the grades are not good enough that the grades are less, or is the grade not good enough because the grades are not good enough~ It's all the fault of the general environment!

I feel like online game writing is becoming less and less popular nowadays.

My understanding of the author: Mars wants to change, Terra wants to change, change is right, change is necessary

There are stories about players and ✍🏻protagonists. I thought most of the protagonists in stories about the fourth natural disaster were transparent people.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The setting is very rigorous and the plan is very thorough. What about the disadvantages? Talking about setting and planning will take up most of a chapter. I feel like I have been listening to the protagonist talk about the future and past for a long time. But the story is not advanced at all? ? ? When I read a novel, I read it for the story, not for you to ramble on. The excellence of the plot determines the novel, not the setting.

It's okay, but too little and a little watery

The author can publish a copy of the memoir, for example, so that the player can tell what the protagonist is doing and why he is doing it.

It's okay, but the number of updates is a bit small When will the update be released? It's quite enjoyable to watch. If it doesn't explode some poison, it's probably a good food. I can only say that the quality is not too high, but the setting is quite attractive and the plot is quite enjoyable to watch. If it doesn't work, hurry up and post ten updates in a row

Author author, what about the A follow-up I on the moon and on the moon? Just leave it like that?

I've only read two chapters, and the protagonist, an NPC, is so awesome. Are you not afraid that the game official will forcefully close the game? Perform maintenance? It's possible to just remake the game directly.

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Will there be little gray? 🙂

Version 1.0: Colorful Galaxy Test, update is about to be completed! Colorful Galaxy dlc is released in this update! ! ! 😁

It's a pity that the development time of the main line is still too short, otherwise we could film a lot of big projects in the solar system 😚

Come on, you who work hard to write a book

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