One Piece: The Void Sovereign

There's nothing wrong with the protagonist being large-sized. Since you wrote about the ability of Void Fear, couldn't you at least show it off? Actually, being large is what truly matters; things like that in anime are purely unrealistic. Of course, the protagonist in anime is a different story now. When both sides are enormous, the damage becomes incomparable.

The premise is good, here's my recommendation vote. I hope this book doesn't have a female lead, or even just one. Hopefully, the author can unleash all their creative ideas about Void Fear. Also, it would be great if the update speed were faster! Keep it up! 💪 🌹🌹🌹

The classification and analogy of Paramecia-type fruits: Creation type: String-String Fruit, Mochi-Mochi Fruit; Psychic type: Wash-Wash Fruit, Gravity Fruit, Fusion Fruit, Shadow Fruit and Slow-Slow Fruit; Local type: Stare-Stare Fruit, Paw-Paw Fruit; Modification type: Gum-Gum Fruit, Swallow-Swallow Fruit, Chop-Chop Fruit; Special type: Revival Fruit, Hobby-Hobby Fruit, Memory Fruit and Spirit-Spirit Fruit, Soul-Spirit Fruit.

I'm new to writing novels and there are many things I haven't paid attention to. If you find any flaws, please point them out in the comments so I can pay attention and make changes later. Thank you! 🙏

After reading the first few chapters, I feel the protagonist is a bit arrogant, looking down on others at the drop of a hat. He has a rich inner monologue; he learned to speak by reading a nautical book he couldn't read a single word of, but he doesn't want to. So arrogant! \(//∇//)\ There's a lot of information to explain, and it's a bit disorganized; the beginning isn't very engaging.

The logic gets messed up from the moment Garen awakens. Why should he be the one to awaken? And then they deliberately create conflict between his family and the Navy... For fame or something else? Furthermore, the handling of the pairings is sloppy.

Dear experts, I'm begging for investment. The book has been approved for signing and will be shipped out in a few days. Those who want to invest can do so with confidence. This book will be updated at least twice a day, with occasional bursts of updates. 🤭🤭🤭 If you think this book is alright, please give it some recommendation votes, thank you!

The Void Trio's talents are food and infinite growth, but the protagonist doesn't want to grow bigger, so he feels that the talents are a waste. Actually, writing about Kha'Zix's evolutionary talents would be more suitable in One Piece.

The dialogue was so out of place; it sounded like a dialogue between China and the West.

I only read 4.5 Chapters and found two major flaws: the character in chapter 4 is unlikable, and in chapter 5, it's amazing that you learned a language just by reading without anyone teaching you, especially since you weren't even using a translation.