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The writing is okay, there are not too many poisonous points, only the first dozen or so pictures are a bit poisonous, the rest are all good, and it's not like there is no writing style, why no one reads it 🙂

Who are you, the heroine?😥

But there is one thing to say. Dear author, your word count is too few. Not enough time to invest

Hehe 😁hehe (ºº )

There is something very important about writing a novel. Some novels have a good start and are worth following, but then they start to get stuck after chapters 50 and 80. You are guilty of this catfight. You can choose to rewrite the same topic until you are satisfied.

One thing to say, it's too late. . . We are here to see what the protagonist does, not to watch the ethical drama of the supporting characters... My feeling is that the protagonist does not have as many roles as the supporting characters, so how can I complain...

Baga Ya Road (><), come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's a pity that the poison was released in the second chapter. I want to help that girl buy more than 10,000 reagents for no reason. I haven't understood the world yet, or even myself. She can't get up even if the other person's parents do that to her. . .

After reading dozens of chapters, the most poisonous part is the direct treatment of Liu Xiaobei by Pig's Feet.

So I cut it off after I got Quanqin. . . . . . The big plot is okay, but the small plot is too overwhelming. I believe you will be able to overcome this shortcoming in your next book.

Ganba Daddy (ง •̀_•́)ง