Global Martial Arts

The story is not good, the main cast is brainless, and the dialogue is low-level. Those who read the story should be cautious. It is not considered a successful story. Those who are optimistic about the story can just avoid the lightning.

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Looking at the introduction, you can tell that it is a brainless and cool article... And it also rides on the popularity of Gaowu in the world.

I have seen the latest one, and I have some suggestions, I hope the author will adopt them: 1. The background is that the protagonist's brother gave up on himself, but so far he is in debt to the casino. No other places say how much gambling the brother has. After all, the casino's own debt is usurious, and the 400,000 yuan may have been doubled by borrowing about 100,000 yuan at a usurious rate. Personally, I think we should go straight to the dark side and write the brother as an unfilial and gambling scumbag. However, the latter does not show that the brother is a bad person and goes out of his way to clean it up, which makes the plot development seem very stiff. I think it can be written that the protagonist's father will be completely disabled if his leg is not cured (it is also explained later), and then the protagonist's brother went to the casino to try his luck in order to collect money and was cheated. 2. From a certain point of view, it is natural for people to ask for debts in casinos. After all, no one forces the protagonist's brother to gamble, but why does the protagonist have to act like he is filled with hatred? When the casino manager chopped off the protagonist's brother's arm, he didn't do it because the debt was due, right? Why does the protagonist act like I owe you a debt, and I won't say when I will pay it back, but if you ask me to collect the debt, you will be my enemy unless you do something drastic? And just kill the manager? This is completely unreasonable for the sake of advancing the plot. 3. The structure of the world so far seems to have the shadow of swallowing the stars in it, but it is also somewhat specious. The governance system is very confusing. I don't know whether there is a separate government agency to govern the people or whether everyone is left alone? The construction company under the jurisdiction of the martial arts school directly demolished a community, and even lowered the price to demolish it, and then blatantly demolished it without demolition? Judging from this plot, it seems that some powerful people in the martial arts school are doing whatever they want? The martial arts gym where the protagonist's master is located is not weak either. Although it is not as good as the two combined, the casino does not have the strength to destroy anyone who wants to, right? This is a community, not a small village in a remote town, just come here blatantly? Generally speaking, I feel that some plots may look okay if pushed forward ten years, but now they look a bit full of loopholes. I hope the author can make some corrections.

After eating the same food for ten years, people will get tired of it. If you eat too much at an exquisite banquet, the sight of it will make you sick to your stomach. The readers of Qidian have read all the books and have read them for more than ten years, so they are extremely difficult to maintain. As far as the quality of this book is concerned, the author is actually very sincere and has definitely put in the effort and sincerity. The plot rhythm is exquisite and clever, and the writing style is simple and efficient. The author who has been more than ten years old does have a few brushes. But as far as routines are concerned, it really lacks new ideas. There is still a market for this book, and I believe it will still produce results, but it is not popular enough at the beginning. In another two or three years, the market at the starting point will still decline. I hope that when this book is written in the middle and late stages, the author can explore new writing techniques. If you cling to the writing theory of the previous generation and do not update or even completely iterate, you will eventually be buried with the end of the previous era.

Are you sure this isn't fake?

I don't like the role of the protagonist's brother. I feel like it will be washed away later. I personally hate this kind of person.

In this book, when your enemy defeats you, he still wants to tell you where you are lacking? I just laughed (Silver League didn't dare to complain)

This book actually has no characteristics at all. The protagonist is not a time traveler, and his family is in a difficult situation, but he is extremely talented. The thing that annoys me the most is that before I have grown up, I still think about women. What kind of love stories are there to write about and read? It doesn't matter what age it is. It doesn't mean much whether there is a heroine or not.

What happened to the once great god now?