The Pokémon Tomb Raider

This woman is disgusting. She's the protagonist, right? She finds a top-tier Pokémon at the start, and then that Pokémon becomes her master. What makes her different from everyone else? So many people can't do it, but she can. It's understandable for the protagonist to have cheat codes, connect with different legendary Pokémon, and have a Pokémon become her master, but what does she have?

I've really had enough. I subscribed to the entire book, and honestly, I regret it. First of all, this author is too ambitious. Why should so many people support a new novelist? Is your book a hit? Is your writing exceptionally good? Or is your subject matter novel? Ask yourself those questions instead of constantly complaining about a lack of subscribers.

Please recommend elves. Forget it if you look like the leader or something.

I like the setting of this novel. What I hate most now is the ranking of Pokémon's potential. The idea that potential is what allows a Pokémon to reach Elite Four status and then the League to have its potential determined by a simple scan is disgusting. It completely ignores the role of the trainer and only focuses on the Pokémon's potential. Pokémon have infinite potential!

I have a feeling that the later part of this book will not match the title. It will either become like Battle Through the Heavens, where the school becomes dispensable, and then you go through a few tombs and level up with many adventures. It's not easy to explore the map in Pokémon novels, so I feel that this book is entering its middle stage around chapter 200.

At the beginning, it is clear that your good brother and your neighbors are planning to give you an elf. For your ridiculous self-esteem, you let your father risk his life to go to the mountains to catch you, and he almost died. How can I put it, this beginning is very poisonous

Young people, you have no sportsmanship! Only one chapter updated per day! Is this okay? No, this is not good! Look at that young man sitting in front of the computer typing away. I'm going to give it four recommendations and two monthly tickets as an incentive! Hey! That was fast! You've got them all out of the way. Looks like you came prepared!

Just wondering, how much of the female lead's storyline is she? I find her disgusting; what kind of "female boss" is she, always trying to ride on the protagonist's coattails? Ugh, if she has a lot of screen time, I'm dropping this. If the author can't write well, why not just write it at all? Just make it a serious tomb-raiding elf story. Look at the neighboring novel, *The Elf Master*, it avoids the main issues but is very exciting and immersive.

Everything else was fine, I can handle it, but I really couldn't get into that fox girl part. The elf fanfiction I was reading, which wasn't just another elf fanfiction turned fantasy, was all good so far. But with the fox girl part, I didn't touch the book for three days, and suddenly I was cured. The fox girl was truly a failure.

The more I write, the worse it gets; that's the feeling.