What’s It Like to Suddenly Gain Superpowers?

What I want to read is "How I Killed in the Cyberpunk World with Super Powers" instead of "My Youthful Love Story in the Cyberpunk World"

My name is Kira Yoshikage, I am 33 years old this year I live in the villa area in the northern part of Morio Town, and I am unmarried. Working in the Guiyou chain department store, I will get home before 8 o'clock at the latest every day I don't smoke, and I only drink wine briefly. Go to bed at 11pm and make sure you sleep for 8 hours. Drink a glass of warm milk before going to bed, do stretching exercises for about 20 minutes to warm up, and then go to bed. Basically, you can sleep soundly until dawn. Like a baby, don't leave fatigue and stress until the next day, just welcome the next morning. The results of the health examination also show that I am normal. I would like to explain that I am a person who pursues inner peace at all times. Don't stick to winning or losing, don't dwell on worries, don't make enemies that will keep me awake at night. This is my attitude towards life in society, and I know very well that this is my happiness.

To be honest, your writing video has reached the level of a platinum master. However, the plot setting could use more consideration. Unless it's a female channel, romance novels will always be a niche within a niche. Fighting superpowers, cyberpunk, and even social revolution are more popular than this.

One thing I don't understand well is that the protagonist is 16 years old and has read a lot of books about ideology and oligopoly. Can he think more maturely? The protagonist's way of thinking is so awkward and weird, and he still never thinks. I have the superpower to change the world and I want to change the world, but I also want to maintain a peaceful life, and my parents' peaceful life cannot be broken. But the short film I made before Chapter 125 just showed that I am a liberal, and I also brought it with the people around me. The most fatal thing is that I used a puppeteer to perform. Does the protagonist think that Fenmao really won't see it? What would happen if I saw it, would it have any impact on my attempt to maintain a peaceful life? Has the protagonist thought about it? The protagonist who does things without considering the consequences and is ready to change the world has no charm, only pity. Note: This is just what I felt after reading these chapters. If I were a fun-loving person like The Outsider, I would have been extremely happy watching the actions of the protagonist.

The author perfectly explains what it means for a man to remain a boy until he dies. The 12-year-old me must have loved this kind of book, but I have grown up.

After reading seventy chapters, I felt that the name was really wrong. The name of this literary-oriented book greatly misled readers, which led to dissatisfaction on both sides. Those who came in did not like it, and those who liked it did not like it. There is also no connection between the introduction and the main text. I feel like I am watching the fantasy technology version of The Sorrows of Young Werther. Let's put it this way, the beginning of this book has a bit of a cyberpunk flavor, but then the youth love story of a teenager unfolds, and sometimes some dreams are mixed in. The author seems to want to write about the growth of teenagers and the troubles of youth, which leads to a small audience. The protagonist can think like an adult at first, but suddenly becomes confused and loses his outlook on life, like a complex of contradictions. The various settings added later are more like completely muddying the soup. It can only be said that it is tasteless and it would be a pity to abandon it.

Let's stop here. The writing is very good, but the content is too complicated and detailed, including the ignorant touch of campus love, the gloom and gloominess of cyberpunk, the interweaving of gray sky and pink bubbles, the entanglement of dreams and reality, mixed with the projections of countless parallel universes, and attempts to criticize society through the cyberpunk worldview. It's a pity that the above is a hammer in the east and a stick in the other. If strawberry ice cream, Mao Xuewang hot pot, durian cake, and tuna sushi are mixed together and served to the readers, I suggest that the author develops in the direction of campus love in the future. Really, don't touch the giant trust of the parallel world of cyberpunk. It is not suitable.

I will form the Tiobang Building (cross out) Question Building (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Lu Lu came out and gave me a like (๑>؂<๑) By the way, I have a few questions Why did the external demon come to this world? Is the world of the protagonist related to Folu? Don't the protagonist know the game Dishonored? How many female leads will there be, Zha Lu? What if the protagonist evolves the ability to specifically deal with technology╯╰ Does anyone else know about the external demon ? . . Okay, that's all for now

There is something so easy in the label that is so ridiculous that I almost feel depressed when I read it.

The beginning of the writing was pretty good, but the later writing was just as crazy.