A Certain Unscientific, Peaceful Life

Personally, I think this book is the best among the Demon Forbidden fanfics. Why do you say that? Because this book is basically an original plot and does not completely follow the story of the Forbidden City. The reason why we want to read the works of the same people is that we want to see different stories and plots. And what are most doujins? All kinds of pretense and slaps in the face, showing off in front of girls, and forcibly plundering the bond that should belong to Kamijou Touma according to the original plot. Some even directly replaced Kamijou Touma's name with the name of the protagonist in his own book, and copied the original work exactly as a fan. On the surface, the book "Magic Forbidden" seems to be talking about battles and daily life, but in fact it always highlights two words - bond Every character in it is not a god who can fly in the air every second. There are also times when they encounter powerful enemies. But this kind of helplessness does not mean that you need protection from others, and use that pitiful attitude to gain sympathy and help from others. On the contrary, in order not to harm the people around them, they chose to bear it silently alone. Misaka Mikoto's determination to die and Kamijou Touma's determination to save others are both their respective charms. Even the protagonist of this book resigned from the disciplinary committee in order not to injure others, and even said many unpleasant words to Uiharu, trying to cut off all the pain. It can be said that the bond between the two protagonists and those female characters is not accidental, but a friendship that can be formed through various methods and at the right time. Otherwise, we will always stop at a certain stage. Most fans didn't understand this meaning at all, so they wrote it awkwardly, and even changed the female character's character into a character from a Chinese novel, which is very embarrassing to watch. Copying, not changing anything, forcing himself to show off in front of Accelerator, using Kamijou Touma, and turning the bond that should belong to Kamijou into his own, what else is there to do with such a fan? I think this fan novel is better written because although the author still relies on the original plot development, he has made many changes to make it look more interesting. For example, the void explosion case directly killed the protagonist, and the criminal felt very guilty towards the protagonist. After all, the only disciplinary committee member who helped him in time was the protagonist. After that, it is more of my own originality, with a strong sense of suspense. Finally, I hope the author can enhance the feeling of bondage and salvation more, and create a dream linkage. Strongly recommend everyone to check it out, it's a very good work.

Just like the author's ability to set the protagonist, the shortcomings and advantages of this book are obvious. The protagonist is inaction. Maybe it's out of salty fish thinking, trying to escape from everything. Soft-tempered. This is understandable in reality, and it's also written like this in novels emmm. Whether the protagonist is a time traveler or not. If you are not a time traveler, you cannot explain the changes to the original plot, but if you say you are a time traveler, you know nothing about the plot. Advantages: Some original plots. Disadvantages: I have been messed with by the mini-BOSS many times. I can almost say that I am at the mercy of others. My character and ability development are very weak. . Uncomfortable.

Although I have only read the first five chapters, what are the protagonist's abilities?

The ability is transferable. I feel that the upper limit is very high. As long as you can understand it, it is not impossible to transfer concepts. For example, transfer what is about to happen from a to b. For example, if Tsuchimikado uses magic to produce a debuff of heavy blood, then if the debuff is transferred to someone, then Tsuchimikado will avoid the debuff caused by the ability user's use of magic.

Brother, is the timeline you wrote messed up? On the front foot, he even said that I had lost my memory. On the back foot, Sister Pao just met Leizi.

The handsome man has woken up ∩∩ (´･ω･) ＿|⊃／(＿＿_ ／ └-(＿＿＿_／ ￣￣￣￣￣￣￣ Hurry up and update.

This is for the writer's assistant, I've already commented! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is a newcomer's work, purely for entertainment, please bear with me.

Having read about ten chapters, it seems that the author's writing style is still a bit green. Some places that should be described are mentioned in one stroke, making it look more streamlined or like an outline. Then there is the need to pay attention to the details. The plot of the Disciplinary Committee is rather far-fetched. Academy City's Disciplinary Committee must at least undergo strict training and training. It is impossible to join just by saying to join, and it is only a phone call. The plot of a bad boy reforming his evil ways is unreasonable. First of all, bad guys are the ones that the disciplinary committee should be wary of. It is unreasonable for you to directly bring a bad boy to join the disciplinary committee. Heizi's character is not handled well. It is impossible for her to directly invite ordinary citizens to join the disciplinary committee. After all, this is dangerous. Onee-sama, sometimes Kuroko will stop her. She is level 5. Why doesn't Kuroko just ask Mikoto to join the branch? Therefore this plot is not very reasonable. Although it may be necessary to promote plot development, it is best for the author to consider logic and rationality when presenting the outline.                                               The protagonist's abilities are quite interesting. Some details are not handled well, maybe because of the lack of writing at the beginning. I hope the author can write better works in the future.

Has the author seen Yan Fist...