Grandmaster Tongtian

Why are there so many good reviews? I don't understand the plot! Sha Tongtian's IQ is absolutely nonsense! As a result, once the modern people in the first life are merged, the little beggar in the third life is gone, and only Laosha is left! I also want to carry forward the Yellow River Sect! Relying on the support of 30 beggars to practice martial arts! It's better to just go hunting in the mountains or catch fish in the water! The plot is toxic and I have to say goodbye 😤. See you again when we have the chance!

I was persuaded to quit after the first 2 chapters! The writing is okay, but the setting is too poor. After traveling through three lifetimes, Hou Tonghai finally becomes a dirtbag who just lives his life. Who would like to read it? You know, time travel, you have to have an accent, your words and deeds must win honor for the people on earth, make people feel refreshed and refreshed, and make readers' eyes light up and say: This protagonist is awesome. Those who are unable to survive, those who face pain every day, those who are of low status, those who have a wretched nature, those who are called "Brother" by everyone, are not qualified to be the protagonists! The author forced him to take the role, and he was scolded to death! Therefore, setting is the key to the longevity of Bai Wen!

The author's writing style is really good. It's not the kind of cool writing that novices like to read. It's very interesting to read. Come on. I hope your work can be seen by more people who understand you😁

The foreshadowing is steady and fast, the rhythm is well grasped, and conflicts are constant. There is no water-filled plot, but there are still twists and turns, making people look forward to the subsequent development.

If you often call yourself "Lao Hou", which is strange to others, don't you know how to call yourself "Hou" or "I"?

The protagonist is a time traveler. Why does it feel like he has been taken away by Hou Tongtian? This fused memory is a big poison. What we want to see is the time traveler pretending to be slapped in the face, not the rise of a second-rate villain...

The author couldn't resist the name Tongtian.

I'm optimistic about your next book. Actually, it's not too bad in all aspects.

I have read your first book Huashan, and I actually like your writing style. It is simple and unpretentious, with a sense of old-school martial arts. Although it has never been popular in Qidian, you still insist on writing. I really think it is not easy. Please give me a reward.

The protagonist relies on the treasure map to find the place, but others can find it without the treasure map 😥

The book is good, but why are there so few people?

The author does not have a good grasp of people's hearts. Think about what would happen if a father knew that his child had been taken away from him? Therefore, it is better for the protagonist not to have any emotional entanglements with people who have traveled through time. This is in line with human nature and should not be affected by the original. No one is willing to give up his own. Therefore, we must avoid being influenced by the original.

Why bother with the whole time travel? Just write Hou Tongtian to get the system. It's not that interesting, so it's better to watch an orthodox martial arts show

It's been a long time since I updated. You don't know how to be a eunuch, do you?

Arrogant and arrogant, the most annoying thing is that he accepts disciples at every turn

It's another system stream. Are there any similar recommendations without system poison?

It is better to continue writing about the gods, which is a pity for such a good writing style.

The writing is very good, why are the grades not good?

It was put on the shelves quietly. If it weren't for the investment tips, I made 66 points. I wouldn't have known it.

When I saw the name of the protagonist in "Understanding", I immediately thought of Sha Tongtian from "The Four Ghosts of the Yellow River" in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

One soul and one name use three lives? Author, you are so awesome! I don't even support the wall, I will obey you

The author's last book was gone after he had raised it, I hope this one can help him grow up 😅

Forgive me, I only read five chapters and couldn't stand it anymore.

I also stopped reading after reading less than five chapters.

Suddenly found that it was updated 🙂

I suggest the author take a good look at "The True Martial Emperor of All Realms" to see how other people's novels are written. The writing style is really bad.