Huashan Wusheng

In fact, I didn't have high hopes when I first came across this book. I just didn't have much to read, so I was just looking for a book to pass the time. I just happened to come across a book that I could read without scolding me. The three worlds in the first two volumes cannot be said to be very good or bad. I can only say that they are above average. I may even read the updates and this book will be slow to put on the bookshelf. I can't even remember reading it, but the wonderful story written by the author only really begins when the author opens the third volume and starts writing about Shushan. If I only read the first two volumes, I can only say that this book is just like licorice, which can quench hunger and thirst, but it is not necessary for daily needs. Starting from Shushan is considered as food and grass, so I started to update it every day. I hope that the author's imagination will become bigger and better, and his results will get better and better!

The foreshadowing of the transformation into a fairy tale by the author is not good, and it is not half as good as his writing about martial arts. The level of emotional drama is less than a quarter of the level of fighting drama, so it is better not to write it. The chapter reading experience has declined seriously during this period. If you couldn't do it, I wouldn't post a special post here to talk about it. The key is that the writing was good at first, but the quality has declined. (Considering the author's recent state of mind, some sharp content has been deleted)

Support the author, the story is truly written without a once-in-a-thousand-year martial arts prodigy, a grandfather, or cheats. The clear stream passing through.

It's a fast-moving martial arts story, and although it's not a stud, it's still a good read. The women in Yitian World all belong to the original owner. There are occasional ambiguities but they are not written in depth. But in terms of martial arts, he was average in the early stage, but in the later stage, he almost defeated all the martial arts in one go. The author tried not to be brainless. The plot started from preventing Zhang Cuishan from committing suicide and has been greatly changed. But when it comes to plot correction, it falls short. Then many plots ended without unfolding. Zhang Wuji became emperor. The protagonist abandoned his body and went to Tianlong. You can take a look.

Support the author, it is a good book.

I can't help but want to comment. From the first world to now, the author has been praised (reviled) every day, especially since the second world. I was a little confused at the time until I saw it later and felt enlightened. The author is also a strong man in terms of writing skills. He has been controversial and calmed down to write his own book. He does not blindly cater to the readers' unreasonable demands. He only writes his own book about the martial arts in his heart. Unlike most novels nowadays, they are enjoyable for a while and then forgotten. Support the author

Author: How come you are so fat in the hundreds of chapters you have written recently? It feels like there is no sense of substitution and it tastes like nothing. There is even a feeling that the two texts are not written by the same person.

How to ascend to the world of Chinese martial arts? What about Lord of the Rings?

Chapter 79: Persuading him to quit, first of all, this monk is a pig's trotter, right? He fights Ouyang Zhuang, and his skills improve to a level every three months. From the first 30 moves to make him vomit blood and escape, to the end he almost killed Ouyang. Second, we know from the previous article that Pig's Foot was a little stronger than Ouyang many years ago. Ouyang and Fan Sengda were able to suppress Fan Seng. After so many years, Pig's Foot achieved the Ziyang Magic Skill but was almost killed? Look at the original text where Monk pulled out the sword from his chest and grabbed a boulder and threw it at Pig's Foot's son. What was Pig's Foot doing? While meditating to suppress the injury, if it was 1V1, wouldn't it mean that the pig's feet were already dead? Third, Sakyamuni Elephant Throwing Kung Fu is an external Kung Fu that trains strength and physical fitness. Should such a person be bad at Qing Kung Fu, right? And what about Fan Monk? After throwing the stone, he had already moved more than ten feet away. In the blink of an eye, the figure was gone. He had all the strength, physique, and agility. This was a perfect template for the protagonist! Fourth, Pig's Foot has accomplished his magic by traveling through time for more than ten years. He was just about to show off, but he was almost beaten to death by a sidekick. Are you trying to trick the readers? Sorry, refuse, feed whoever likes to eat!

I can't understand the plot after The Condor, it's like a big pot dish, all the ingredients are thrown into the pot

The first story is not very good, overall it is mediocre, like a narrative, not like an online novel.

The writing in the first world is still very good, covering all the secrets in the world, and it is unique in its own way, but in the second world it is really poisonous. It's fine to just start over, a lot of Tenten-ryu are like this, but the way of writing has really changed too much. First: The protagonist just throws away the martial arts that he has worked so hard to create. Although the author explains that practice is too slow, isn't it that you have summarized countless martial arts to best suit you? Other people's things are better than your own? This is not the way to advocate Tianlong martial arts. To be honest, Jin Yong's fifteen novels are about different dynasties in a timeline, and they are all connected. The author himself also wrote about discovering the martial arts of the Tianlong era at the end of the first volume. This is digging a hole for himself. Second: The problem of the protagonist's character. Has the protagonist been promoted rather than changed? He has lived to be over sixty years old in Yitian. He is the best master in the world, the head of Huashan, and has two children and four grandchildren. Why did he become like a young boy who just came out of the martial arts world when he arrived at Tianlong? He was capable of stealing, robbing, and kidnapping people. Even though he was getting younger and younger, he still couldn't do this.

I saw it before it was put on the shelves Poisoned to death Pig's feet were overturned over and over again I'm not saying that you can't go another way, but you really disgust me. Forcibly fabricating the plot

The first article kneels down and licks Lao Zhang and people related to him, the second and third articles kneel down and licks the coward, and finally complains about the biggest flaw. Whether you can ascend is controlled by what you call the spirit of the world. The peak of martial arts in this world can surpass the Lord of the World. The funniest thing is that you said that you claimed to be in retreat in Huashan, but actually went to Taixuan Island, and the Lord of the World couldn't find you? Are you kidding me?

I have read the first few chapters and it is very good. It has the same feeling as when I read the martial arts world adventure before. I hope the author will not change the body of the protagonist when changing the world.

The idea of ​​traveling through time and space is very unique, and there is nothing wrong with it. The highlight is that I didn't pick up the Nine Yang Magic! In fact, for me, if I traveled through the past, I would actually find nothing! People who often go to the mountains will know that looking for a book in a mountain that they have never been to is undoubtedly like looking for a needle in a haystack, which is not realistic at all! As for the character of the protagonist, it is indeed a bit bad, but the author's creative point is that it is OK to start with a small character! The only drawback is that the character's characteristics are not outstanding enough! This cannot be too realistic, the protagonist must have at least one point that can attract people! Even if he is successful, there is a reason for success, but it is not highlighted from this point of view! Come on, author!

The author has unique ideas based on the classics, and it is most rare to write a story in a down-to-earth manner.

Most Yitian fan fiction likes to whitewash Yin Susu and Xie Xun, which makes me wonder. Yin Susu is always killing people, and Xie Xun is even more stupid. He kills people indiscriminately in an attempt to force Cheng Kun out. I really don't understand what these two people have to whitewash. Is it possible that just to build a good relationship with Lao Zhang and take care of Xiao Zhang's emotions, they don't even know the basics of right and wrong?

He is handsome and handsome, strong in martial arts, both good and evil, romantic but not obscene, and decisive in killing. I hope the author can consider it. Lu Xiaofeng, the peerless twins, the Moon Sword in the End of the World, the best in the world, Fengyun (1.2), The Divine Eagle, Tianlong, Tang Dynasty, turning the rain and turning the clouds, romantic and romantic stories are indispensable! ! ! , I hope this book can become a high-quality product and describe the charm of martial arts and the hateful five elements.

Based on the current content, it is speculated that: the world has existences such as world will, but there is no fixed destiny (fixed plot). There are children of destiny in the world, and the world will will prefer children of destiny. The world will will provide a certain degree of "monitoring" to outsiders, but will generally not interfere with the behavior of outsiders unless it has a greater impact on the children of destiny. The above is just personal speculation, it depends on how the author writes it.

I think the Thousand Faces setting is a complete failure. To be fair, do you like the story of Simple Xianyu Tong? Do you like Zhuo Bufan's story? He is indifferent to fame and fortune, because he is greedy for life and afraid of death, so his body is committed to the great road and his heart is committed to immortality. That's it. You have to follow the routine and set up a mastermind. The handwriting of the mastermind is very bad. It requires IQ but not IQ, moral integrity but not moral integrity. It is not good to be strong. According to the setting, this is the Alaya Consciousness of all living beings! Do you know what he thinks? Practice? So I don't think there is any need to write about the mastermind behind the scenes. I just follow the nature of the first-generation protagonist and appreciate the elegance of different martial arts worlds. If I want to clear up the protagonist's cultivation, I can write that this is the price to pay for reincarnation. Why does the protagonist want to be reincarnated? It can be martial arts, heart, body, qi, etc. You want to perfect them one by one. The purpose can be changed by the author at will, but there is no need to set up a mastermind behind the scenes. There can be opponents, but there is no need to have enemies. If you must write about enemies, I hope you can make the enemies stronger. Take a look at the thoughts of the Thousand-Faced Man, the logic behind his difficulty with the protagonist, the difficulty with which he was defeated by the protagonist, and his performance after being defeated. Is it worthy of his identity? In short, the author writes about an ordinary person who seeks the truth, which is great! It's very immersive. I don't have enough skills to write about the conspiracy layout and the mastermind behind the scenes, so please use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. It's also interesting for everyone to watch along the way. Forcibly writing a villain who lacks both ability and intelligence looks like the next year, and the enemy reflects his own level, which also lowers the image of the protagonist. There is nothing that can be changed at present, and I hope these problems can be avoided in the future.

I sincerely give some advice to the author. It is okay to write about Tianlong. You are already the king in Yitian. When you reach Tianlong, it is just to seek the Tao. You completely gave up what you have learned from Quan and chose Beiming Shengong. You are really inferior. It should be because there were too many people who chose Beiming Shengong in the past, and readers are tired of reading it.

To be honest, the Yitian chapter is much better than the Tianlong chapter. The writing style is simply not on the same level. The protagonist of the Tianlong chapter is just like the one at the beginning of the Yitian chapter. Except for his different personality, everything else feels almost the same. It feels even worse than the beginning of the Yitian chapter. It feels like the protagonist has completely lost the mentality of the protagonist in the later stage of Yitian after traveling to Tianlong. I hope the author can finish the Tianlong chapter as soon as possible, and then make adjustments to write the next volume.

Great post, the characterization is very good and I love it 😁. The post I just created was illegal and I asked for modification 😥, 100 on the first floor.

In a martial arts world, there are a lot of f*cks about fate and protagonists. From a general perspective, are the emperors and powerful ministers the protagonists at the same time? Zhu Yuanzhang, the founding emperor of the Ming Dynasty, generals Xu Da and Liu Bowen, etc., Aren't these powerful officials who can become emperors much more aura than the protagonist Zhang Wuji? This is just China, there are so many countries around the world? There is a protagonist named P who just happened to encounter this. You might as well just wait to die. After all, you are destined to die.

I originally thought it was a rough stone that would reveal its true nature after some carving, but after holding it for a long time, I realized that it was just a piece of frozen shit in the snow, and it melted in my hands!

The author's writing style is quite good, but it's full of logic. I have been emphasizing the halo of the protagonist of the original work, and then worrying about this and that. From the time Zhang Wuji was born until Zhang Wuji grew up, he has been worried that the protagonist's aura will kill him, and then he has been cowardly licking the characters related to Zhang Wuji. But the problem is that this worry is unreasonable according to normal logic, and the author did not explain the protagonist's worry in a convincing manner in the end. There is nothing wrong with the fact that the protagonist wants to kneel down and lick Zhang Wuji, but there must be a reasonable and convincing reason.

The feeling of reading this book is very real. 1. When a person travels through time and finds that there is no "golden finger", he must be very panicked and has no confidence. Compared with other protagonists who have golden fingers: full of confidence, "I am definitely the protagonist, and opportunities and other opportunities will definitely come to me.", Xian Yutong knows more clearly that he needs to improve himself bit by bit through his own efforts. 2. If you want to improve yourself, you need to take the initiative to look for opportunities. Whether he went to the Kunlun Mountains to search for the Nine Yang Manual, or he originally had a small plan to go to the Ancient Tomb Sect to steal the Nine Sun Manual volumes (I was too scared to go), it is actually understandable. Although in the end we failed to obtain Jiuyang through speculation through the above two ways, these psychology are the thinking of normal people. Who else, knowing the approximate location of the treasure and its authenticity, would risk their lives to find it? 3. The change in mentality is just like traveling to Tianlong, and Xian Yutong recalls his experience in Yitian. The first half of my life was filled with trepidation, but the next twenty years were extremely prosperous. When you are scared, you are courteous to everyone because you are afraid of offending others and causing death. After achieving great power, he was no longer so humble, because his strength was already at the pinnacle of the martial arts world at that time, and no one could limit him. His heart was extremely inflated, and he could even slap the emperor in the face without any hesitation. Do you think he is crazy? No, this is the attitude that a powerful person should have. Even if he offended the emperor, he could not push his daughter into the fire (Xian Yutong subjectively believed that life would not be easy if he married Zhang Wuji). In fact, he did not fully take care of his daughter's thoughts. In the end, my daughter was forced to go to Lily, probably for this reason. 4. The development of the story is not entirely written according to the direction of the original version. Befriending Ouyang Mo, mutual benefit (Ouyang Mo failed to ascend in the end, which is reasonable, but still a bit regretful); Ji Xiaofu was rescued and got together with Yin Liuxia; Zhujiazhuang treated Zhang Wuji with more courtesy due to the change in his fate; Wei Yixiao was not cleared, but was still shot to death by Xian Yutong ; After the Guangming Dynasty War, the six major sects were not wiped out and retained most of their strength; Zhang Wuji eventually became the Ming Emperor; ———————————————— To sum up, Xian Yutong is a relatively selfish ordinary person, but has a bottom line and is willing to be cowardly.

The protagonist is possessed and has always been afraid of Xiao Zhang. Now that the Qingniu and Qingyang are following you, you are still scared. Otherwise, if you had gone to find Jiuyang first, Xiao Zhang would be useless. Twenty years later, you are not making fast progress in Hunyuan Gong, and your taste is not good (you have said many times in the article that Hunyuan Gong cannot compare with those magical arts, and even Zixia Gong cannot compare with those). Why don't you Jiuyang take it?

I just wrote a few sentences, and I don't know if the author will read it. In fact, what I read when I read the book is still human nature. No matter how the world view is designed, as long as it is self-justifying, it is reasonable. On the contrary, the human nature presented by the characters created by the author needs to be in line with common sense or in line with public expectations. The author's protagonist and supporting characters are very up to standard. Recommended