One Yuan Martial Saint

The writing is getting better and better, and I feel that the author knows a lot about the history of the Republic of China, especially the martial arts of the Republic of China. The development of the story is becoming more and more interesting. Not only the simple enhancement of force, but also the pleasure of the time traveler having foresight.

So far, it seems that the narrative is clear and the writing style is quite mature, with nothing too poisonous. I was saving the author's first book, "The Martial Saint of Huashan", but I didn't expect to finish it as I kept it, and I haven't read it yet. I saw the new book yesterday and started reading it, and found it to be really good. The opening chapter of the Republic of China is a little bit like that. The plain plot slowly unfolds into a picture of the people at the bottom of the Republic of China trying to survive. Later, the first conflict with Ma Wu and the one-on-one duel with Bai Lang. Although there is not a little ** at the beginning, I think it can attract a person who likes to read novels to continue reading. I hope the author can have mature ideas and outlines to tell this story well. That's it

The author's writing is very good. The fighting style is Jin Yong style, which is really better than other novels of the same type, including The Supreme Being. It's a pity that many people can't stand it.

His mother licking Wei Xiaobao's ass again? What is this thing? If I were the first to kill Wei Xiaobao in The Deer and the Cauldron, I would be a fucking beast

The story of The Deer and the Cauldron is really unbearable to write. It was okay at first until he took over the position of leader, but it was over when Hai Dafu appeared. The process of entering the palace was inexplicable. It was too forced. Is it impossible to write without following the plot? It's going to be really embarrassing later on, I have to wait for the next world.

I just started reading. I have read several martial arts books recently. I don't know why they all like to write the martial arts style as weaker than the new martial arts system... Shouldn't the peak of low-level martial arts be the dragon and snake martial arts style? You can do it in Jin Yong's martial arts... Beating people is like hanging pictures (standard with Huajin). One feather cannot add mosquitoes and cannot fall (Wang Chao) Performed) Crushing iron like mud (Wang Chao) Swallowing gold and eating jade (Exhibited by Tai Chi Chen... Whatever practice) Crossing the river by treading water (Exhibited by both Wang Chao and his wife) Shrinking to an inch (ten meters in one step, Wang Chao walked through the jungle with a normal walking posture) Throwing an elephant across the river (Exhibited by an Indian Danjin master) Collision Breaking dozens of tons of cement (Wang Chao) The autumn wind has not moved the cicada (Tang) The murderous sense and bomb placed on the plane halfway across the world (Tang), and even grabbed the bullet in his hand (Tang caught the rebounded bullet, limiting the resurrection (Wang Chao vs. Yan)... Finally, he faced God, The supersonic energy explosion caused by a thousand punches shook the entire ring and the audience... Why should Jin Yong's martial arts be compared with the martial arts style in terms of expressiveness... It would be fine if the soul-breaking gun did not introduce the national martial arts style. It was obviously introduced and the national martial arts style was put in front of it. This...

The book is a good book, but except for a few of the great figures in the Republic of China, I really can't believe it. If you really want to unify the country, you might as well support Yuan Shikai, who of course will not proclaim himself emperor.

I habitually clicked on Book Friends Circle first, but I haven't read the book yet. I saw a book hall master stepping on the most powerful person to praise this book, and he was even finer. Well, counting my 85 comments, no wonder it appears in Daily Guide! Tsk.

The writing is good, the writing style is good, and there are no typos. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author writes slowly to build up a reader base. . . .

Already subscribed, come on, author.

Write slowly. It is a good choice not to work full-time. If you are not above level 4 or 5, just write honestly as a hobby first. The income is too low.

Come on, author, the writing is good and I have invested in it.

Come on author, the monthly votes have been filled, write well and vote for you every month

Let me tell the author, 1: The link in your world is not handled well, it is what you learned in the previous world. Almost nothing was used. Learn boxing and spear first. As a result, the second world became a knife. I'm confused as to what's the use of your previous world. It's better to just get a novice gift pack to solve the problem. 2: Everyone blows the Star Absorbing Method and the Sunflower Book. Where did you put the Zixia magic power? I remember that Yue Buqun only practiced it to the 6th level or a few levels, I forgot. This alone is still ranked in the martial arts world. It seems like there are nine floors in total. There seems to be a Tai Chi Sutra in Heimuya. There must be some inner strength created by Zhang Sanfeng in it! It should be no worse than the Sunflower Collection.

Recently, the combat power of these pictures has been a bit low. In Swordsman, the protagonist's combat power is at the peak of the innate, equivalent to a grandmaster at most. Then in Water Margin, he immediately jumped to a high martial level like Fengyun, with hundreds of feet of ice and hundreds of feet of true energy at every turn. There is a big gap in the middle. I don't know when this protagonist became so powerful!

I would like to make a suggestion and strongly urge the author to design a portable planting space for the protagonist! ! With space for planting, this book will definitely become a hit! ! It will have the potential to become a god! I like your book very much! ! Be sure to use more space when writing about the protagonist! ! This book wouldn't be good without space! ! If I had the space, this book would be wonderful! ! !

Read a few chapters. The author's writing style is pretty good😁😁

Is the essence of martial arts in one world so weak? Then there is no need to write about the first world. Why not just start with the internal strength?

It would be much better if you choose a few better worlds. I think Yan Shuangying is better than this world.

Before I read it, I was curious about the body odor of a horse rider😃

I saw that the background was 1909, so I quit without reading...

One plot has attracted more than 70 pictures

Damn it, I don't like any of these copies, they are all disgusting,,, drunk.

I'm just curious about the use of real rewards? 😴

Haha, it turns out to be another nanny protagonist...

Wait until the end of Water Margin before booking if you don't like Water Margin

If the Ice Chi is measured by Shaolin's unique skills, which magical skill would it be similar to?