Things About Life in Marvel

I started reading it since Fenggegetui. When I saw the author complaining about why he subscribed, I did some self-analysis. There are probably several reasons. 1. There are very few fans of the original Marvel comics. Nine out of ten Qidian readers are the same people who watch Marvel movies, so they are unfamiliar with many characters and do not have a sense of empathy. If they do not follow the animated plots, they will not have a sense of empathy if they are purely original plots. 2. So far, it's not exciting or arresting. To be honest, even comics will have some exciting moments. It's okay to dig holes, but there are no small climaxes with constant ups and downs. In the early stage, the big boss caught the plot laid by the protagonist and the plot of capturing the protagonist did not set off a climax, and it felt like it passed by indifferently. 3. The setting that the protagonist is a time-traveler is a bit of a failure. The protagonist is not familiar enough with the comic characters. It would be better to directly set the native indigenous people and supplement it with exploration. Of course, I think the author set this setting so that he does not add character introductions in the text and avoids the verbosity of hydrology. Let's take a look at these two points. 4. The protagonist is too weak, and his abilities have not changed qualitatively since it was released. The author positions the protagonist as an intellectual player, but there are few highlights in a purely intellectual novel. This is why the plot is unflattering, and there is no battle planned by the two parties, or the battle shown is too bland. The discussion surrounding Hell's Kitchen, especially the Kingpin, between the people and the heroes, this plot is too aggrieved, a typical setting of the Marvel world, and does not conform to the usual setting of online novels. That's probably it. The audience is small, the plot is bland, the protagonist is mediocre, it doesn't fit the gameplay of the novel, and it limits itself to death.

After reading so many books, I feel that the author's books are quite good in the area of ​​Marvel fan fiction. Compared with other fan fiction's inexplicable world view and inexplicable character creation, the author can vividly portray the characters in the book, which I think surpasses many authors. As for the story plot in the book, the arrangement and improvement of the characters' combat effectiveness are very reasonable. Although the writing style is still a little short of perfection, it can continue to improve. Of course, the most important thing to me is that the author is a very diligent author who does what he says, and he will be able to do it if he says more chapters 😏😏

Actually, I just read this book because it was recommended by the system, probably because I read more Marvel fans. When it came to the free chapters, I felt that the writing was okay, and the description of the psychological changes in the stage from ordinary people to heroes was very good. From self-confidence and arrogance to self-deprecation, and then to self-awakening, the description is very delicate, and I was very engaged in reading it, so when it came to the paid chapters, I did not follow the custom of starting with 20 chapters, but directly ordered 100 chapters. As a result, I feel like many authors, it was good when it was free, but it became traditional Chinese medicine when it was put on the shelves 😥😥 Let me talk about my feelings about the chapters after it was released. The development period of the protagonist is too long, and after more than 70 chapters, it is still a failure. I didn't see the super brainpower that the author wanted to express. The advantage of a time traveler seems to be that he is a "collector of Marvel character business cards", which means that I know everyone, and then there is no more. My impression of the protagonist is that he has a high IQ but does not show off. The reason why he is able to study the big brother's thesis is because he had a Ph. D. In physics before time travel, and he was a fresh graduate with no research topic. In other words, the protagonist's IQ is in the range of academic masters, so he can rest on his laurels through time travel. To be able to obtain the wisdom valued by the great leader, Lord Doom, I think it should be at the level of Colonel Chu in Infinite Horror, right? Or some people say that I am biased by comparing people from other worlds with people from the Marvel Universe. But in terms of the title "wise man", I feel that in so many novels, only the son-in-law Ning Rentu and the infinite Colonel Chu can be expressed. In Marvel, apart from expressing their scientific research capabilities, every so-called wise man just rolls up his sleeves and gets it done. Plan? On-the-spot command? Sorry, fists are better. Therefore, the author positioned the protagonist as a super brain power, but instead gave the protagonist a long period of development. This is a setting that eats your own. Until now, Soy Sauce's scientific research strength has not been reflected, nor has the analytical and commanding ability that Luodan favored. The protagonist's super intelligence is probably reflected in the big boss's optimism, or Reed's forced mystery? Maybe author you want to write an original Marvel story of your own, that's fine. But your positioning of the protagonist is too high, and your ability to tell stories is very limited. There were too many people involved in the story, and the events were too chaotic. As a result, the supporting characters were all business cards, and they were just as they were in the comics, without writing your own characteristics. The protagonist is submerged in a sea of ​​supporting characters, drifting with the current, like a school of sardines in the sea. Wherever the incident develops, everyone goes there. It does not reflect the protagonist's overall control of the incident investigation, handling of details, and preparation for emergencies. It just relies on the self-ability of each hero. Everyone does their own thing. If something unexpected happens, it's over. So what's the use of your position as a wise man as the protagonist? I said before that I was favored by Nick to command his men, so why not take command of SHIELD? How many people in the field must die to complete the mission?

Other people's American comic fandoms are Chinese cool novels disguised as American comics, while yours are American comics disguised as cool novels. The core values ​​of the two are different! It seems a bit weird, so the book review was a bit controversial at first. Those who like pure American comic style will like it very much, but cloud readers who have only read American comics will feel uncomfortable.

What a pity. I feel like my favorite American TV series has been canceled... There are still many holes but I haven't had the chance to fill them in. I always feel that this book is a bit untimely. How should I put it, the quality and the results are not of the same order. There are 76 people who have subscribed. No matter what, for a novel that writes so thoroughly about the battle of wits and the nature of the hero, it is a very tragic result... My feeling is that this book The content of the book is indeed not suitable for serialization, because I only read this book two years later. The refreshing feeling of reading it in one go, the empathy for the characters and the passion for reasoning about the plot may not be felt by readers who follow the book. This also creates a huge gap between my evaluation of this book and some evaluations in the comment area. The author has a very deep understanding of comics, and his interpretation of the characters may be better than some comic editors. If I have the chance, I really hope to see a comic like this. Such a typical image of early American comics, a character that represents the struggle of human nature and the glory of heroes. I really like the author's writing attitude and how seriously he takes the plot and characters. Unfortunately, there is still no chance to see the real ending, the official backstab...

I've subscribed to all of them, and I'm a little sorry that the plot after joining v was too broken. There are many characters, but the appearance time of each character is too short. American comics are OK with group portraits, but a character appears suddenly and disappears quickly. The reader leaves before they have an impression of him. Every supporting character seems to be rushing to complete a task, and then disappears after advancing the plot. And because it is mainly based on comics, it is actually quite unfriendly to people who have not read comics. It is different from the characters seen on the screen, which is confusing. For example, Doom, the author has created him as the big boss behind the scenes to control the protagonist's life. He has super powerful magic and super brain power to suppress the existence of the big boss. For those who have no comic experience, I can only ask, who is this? Those who have not read the comics have no impression of him. Unless the author wrote his name, readers can get the idea that this villain is super powerful and he has XXX abilities to do this. For another example, Franklin's image is still vague at this point, and his occasional appearance cannot advance the plot. He is superfluous and is the person closest to the protagonist, so he can only come out regularly to make soy sauce. I originally had high expectations for this book, because it was a rare intellectual contest, there was no cheating in One Punch Man, and the characters chosen were not the protagonists of Marvel movies, but after seeing the scattered plot at the end, I really couldn't stand it.

The writing is quite good, with a strong flavor of American comics, and the description of the growth process of pig's feet is also very detailed. However, for some domestic readers, including me, it feels a bit pretentious. Maybe it is because they have watched too many superhero movies. This kind of hero's psychological journey during the growth period is a bit too much. This is not very pleasing to some readers, but it is undeniable that the book is indeed good.

Look what treasure I found ଘ(੭ˊ꒳​ˋ)੭✧ I have never read Marvel comics, but it does not affect my reading. I like this fanfic from the writing to the plot. It has a sense of substitution that is different from typical online novels, and it has a sense of picture like a movie and TV series After reading more than ten chapters, there are no dramatic lines or too poisonous points. It is awesome👏🏻

Ready to fully subscribe and give me some opinions In general, articles written with heart are worth subscribing, and articles written with brains are worthy of praise The hero always slows down, is led by the villain, and is passively involved in various problems. This is a beautiful comic, but the reading experience will be very poor No problem with dog food, do you want to add some Shura fields, it feels very interesting

A very beautiful comic novel, and one that is very different from other Marvel fan fiction. It's really boring to read some of the routines in other Marvel novels, such as looking for Tony in the desert, buying stocks, Tony is the leader of the newcomer village, the characters are always the same, and the main events are also the same. The protagonist is very strong, and there are various high-level settings, but it is inseparable from the earth and the things in the Avengers. The protagonist is not allowed to suffer, nor is he allowed to grow. His character must be perfect and mature as soon as he appears. Is the protagonist a character from Marvel? Every hero in Marvel, from Tony to Bugs, has not gone from imperfection to greatness. The protagonist of this novel has shortcomings, immaturity, and will suffer disadvantages, but experiencing one incident continues to make him grow. Isn't this a typical American comic protagonist? People who want to read Marvel don't like such a protagonist? Or do you just want to read cool articles? The interaction between the protagonist and the characters in Marvel is not as flat as the characters in other novels. They all have IQs, and they won't be purely good to the protagonist, nor will they be purely bad to him. They all have reasons and purposes, and the protagonist also has his own bond, which is very well written. Moreover, the main character's outlook on life is also very to my liking. The most basic moral concept is to help others to the best of your ability. Isn't that what normal people are like? Don't be too neutral. What kind of laws only restrain the weak, and those who don't do it for themselves will be punished by heaven and earth. If you don't agree with someone, you will kill someone. If you save someone, you will talk about the Holy Mother. Are you normal people with such extravagant views? All in all, I really like the main character's perspective. But there are indeed not many exciting points in the article. After all, novels are novels, unlike comics and movies that have direct visual impact. Even some small plots can also make people feel happy on the screen. But novels can't do that, and even some of the cool moments won't be as fun in the form of novels, especially the struggle scenes.

1. Marvel comics often restart, and the plot is too confusing to draw anymore, so they restart. 2. There are many different versions of Marvel comics. Well, this is also the reason why Marvel often restarts as mentioned above. Okay, everyone can start laughing. If I know any new and fun jokes, I will add them at the back of this floor (≧∇≦)

After reading dozens of chapters, tell me your feelings. It's a group drama, and the protagonist's presence is low. The protagonist has a high IQ, no plug-ins, and is capable of fighting wits, but it is hard to tell because of the long foreshadowing, and it is not intuitive enough to feel the protagonist's abilities. The layout is not too big, novice village Hell's Kitchen. The male protagonist is not like a time traveler, but like an aboriginal, with American thinking, adhering to the rule of law and the concept of no killing, and I prefer the spirit of a chivalrous man who eliminates evil and does his best. Generally speaking, novels are the same as American comics. Those who love them will definitely be die-hard fans, while those who don't love them will be the majority of online readers.

There is no dramatic conflict, to be precise, there is no dramatic conflict with the protagonist as the core. The scene between the big boss and the purple man is the protagonist's most glorious moment, and then it is basically written as a group portrait. The protagonist is like a high-profile Sheldon who works part-time to complain about Yi. His combat power is too low, so in big events, he can only be a soy sauce and a small follower. I don't feel the cleverness at all. Intelligence has no wisdom. To put it bluntly, the battle of wits against the Kingpin was purely about spending money. If you really want to win, you can do it, but why don't you spend money to collect all the goods from the other party to engage in malicious competition? There are also top thugs like Spider-Man and Daredevil, who can crush them with both force and financial resources. Moreover, the money does not belong to the protagonist, and there is no sense of participation at all. It doesn't matter if you are engaged in inner growth or something like that. It doesn't matter if your values ​​are too Western + inference of guilt + overly exaggerated emotional ups and downs. But there are always ups and downs. It seems that the protagonist is at a loss and forcing others to pretend. I can't say that the writing is not good. The lines and settings are much better than the popular garbage, but it is too bland and falls into the category that once you put it down, you will probably not be able to remember to watch it.

There is a high probability that I will rush to the street. There are so many chapters, and I am still not happy. The essence of Marvel writing is to be happy. No matter how bad your writing is, you can still have a full stomach. Spend a lot of energy to pave the way for the plot and create new plots, but if you are not happy, you will lose a lot of readers.

I saw this book again on Daily Guide...

I really can't stand it any longer, and I don't have any fault with it. I just feel uncomfortable watching it, maybe because I'm not used to it. Wish this book a big hit

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The protagonist's three views are similar to those of American white leftists, and are a bit different from those of the Chinese public. Therefore, it is difficult for me to understand the protagonist's psychological thoughts. It feels a bit pretentious! The author wants to trace the process of the protagonist slowly becoming a superhero, but IMHO, even if he does, he won't be that likable!

Author, can you control the Marvel Universe? I bet you will collapse before writing more than a hundred chapters. Who can bet against me?

After reading Chapter 82, I couldn't stand it any longer. How can I say, author, you have successfully written a non-mainstream novel. I didn't see the protagonist's high IQ performance (except for scientific research and technology), the plot was too pretentious and the literary youth was serious.

No, today's trolls are too unprofessional. Those who troll the protagonist don't remember the future plot, those who troll the author will only follow the plot and copy the book, and those who troll have no own style at all. This is not acceptable. Forget it, I'll come here in person. Just wait and see, this book is going to be like this. The main character is like an idiot, licking the heroine and her father without any thought, and the emotional lines are written like shit, I vomited🤮. Got it? Have you learned?

Please don't post other books in the comment area of ​​this book, and please don't teach authors to write books. You haven't read my outline, so how do you know what I want to write? As for those "xx is written very well, the author, please go check it out and imitate it", "The protagonist of xx has xx ability, it looks very cool, author, you should also create one", etc. If they appear in the future, they will be deleted directly. You are disrespecting me and the author of that book. There are too many people who have written better books than me. I understand that myself. However, when you ask me to learn and imitate, do you think that if I imitate and learn, I can surpass him? Does it mean that you think I am better than others? Do you look down on the original author? Oh, you think my imitation is not as good as the original author, so why should I imitate? So, please respect all creators and thank you for your cooperation

It might be a good comic, but I couldn't stand it anymore. I thought the main character was a hero or something like a vigilante.

After reading the beginning, this book is a Marvel fan novel in the true sense. Don't compare it to all the Marvel novels before Qidian, because it is different. In the past, those were just Marvel movie fan novels. Their content was limited to the content of one movie or multiple sequels. There is really not much that can be written. The characters that rely on the movie universe to be continued are because of the world view. It's incomplete and somewhat incomplete, but the starting point of this book is the complete Marvel universe. Each character has his own timeline and is full of flesh. Although I have only read the beginning, this book gives me a very amazing feeling. The author's writing style is sophisticated enough and the writing is wonderful. The other book that gave me this feeling is the one written by Chaos Art Group.

The author has completely given up on this book. After reading his testimonials, although I understand his sentiment that "it was the official who stabbed me in the back, and it was you who betrayed an old fan like me first", as a reader, it is inevitable that I still feel a little pity. However, as an ordinary book lover of this book and a non-fan of Marvel (I haven't even watched all the movies), I can't say anything. Let's say something. Thanks to this book, I learned that the Fantastic Four are so awesome, and they are not the bastards I saw in other fandoms. It was also the first time I learned about the setting of "super intelligence" when I read this book. The author is very careful in setting up the plot. I hope you can write good results and write content that the author and readers will like.

If you don't have the ability, why should you be self-reliant in the extraordinary world? Waiting for that finger snap? Life or death? I have read at least 800 novels in the past ten years. In the past, there were no obvious cheats, or there were not many time-travel novels. More than ten years have passed now. Time travel or fan fiction. Everyone is finished. Do we have to follow the plot? Don't say that you can do what you want. The current routine or this method is the outline, the story is not important. Take Naruto fans as an example. The protagonist travels through time and follows the three apprentices of Class 7 to become the fourth apprentice. Then just follow the plot without any additional plot. It's already a few million words long before the fourth battle. For example, in One Piece, in the first chapter of time travel, an outsider joins Straw Hat, and then follows the plot, without any additional plot. Is it easy to write fan fiction? Very well written, stay tuned

If you haven't read comics, is it really difficult to read? Some people say that they have not read the comics and it does not affect their reading at all, while others say that they cannot read them at all. I think it is necessary to ask. Let me first state that I have absolutely no idea that I am not worthy of reading this book if I don't read the comics. I hope this book can be opened to all readers who are interested in Marvel. Of course, for those who insist that "Marvel is popcorn, you are not Marvel if you are so serious, what? You mean comics? Comics are not Marvel, MCU is" then I really can only say sorry. If you really have dyslexia, please tell me about it in this post, because I do read a lot of comics, so sometimes it may happen. I think this is not a problem, but in fact it will become a problem when writing. Please be a little more specific when talking about it. Please explain the specific plot and what you don't understand. In addition, if there are characters who need additional science popularization, you can also name them. There are a lot of characters appearing now. Sometimes I can't remember which ones have been popularized and which ones have not. After all, this is not a plot. There is an outline that can be checked.

I spent the whole morning reading the updated part. Well, the author has his own ideas. Then just leave it to those pure novice readers who want to read the book with no brainers and pretend to be slapped in the face. This book is not for you. There is no need to create a sense of presence in the book review area. As far as the current plot is concerned, although there are some flaws in the transitions and transitions, the flaws are not concealed. The mode of life + major events randomly unfolding is very comfortable to watch. I have never read American comics, but this book gave me a very visual sense. The progress of recommending the heroine is a bit fast, which makes me feel like I am not reading a novel, but this is a very American drama 23333. I think this part can actually be reshaped, and it may be better. My own feeling is that I just had expectations and then pushed it away. Although it was quite fun, I always felt like something was missing. Due to the timeline of this article, many well-known plots are missing. This is both an advantage and a disadvantage. For many book friends who have never seen the original plot, how to tell a story well is very crucial. For now, although I don't know most of the plot, the reading experience is pretty good because familiar characters appear. It is also worth mentioning the chapter of Purple Man. In fact, most of this chapter is good, especially in the end when the protagonist finally uses super mental calculations to catch the Purple Man. Because it suppressed hundreds of thousands of words, it is really refreshing to read this. The problem is that at the end of the chapter, because the protagonist must have a correct outlook on life, it is very forced to arrange for the girl in the prison to die suddenly and then have the protagonist collapse. The transition in this part is too fast, the girl's own character is not developed, and the reader has no emotional shock when telling the truth about the girl's death, which makes the reading feel very deliberate. The author probably wanted to let the protagonist really grow up in the second volume, so he slowed down the pace, which made the protagonist look weak. Of course, it is normal for someone to collapse because of their own death. But it looks very strange in such a scene. Generally speaking, the logic is barely clear (quietly). Well, in the end it's the author who cheers up. Let's keep it up for now. Let's make a blind guess. Will there be a battle with the Purple Sweet Potato Spirit in this timeline? How will the great powers of the universe such as Gao Tianzun and Collector appear on the scene? What is the main character's hangup? Emmmm, he shouldn't have super brainpower until the later stages, right? What abilities will be gained due to the mutation of solar wind? Quite looking forward to it.

After reading a few chapters, I realized that superhero books were not for me, because my instinctive reaction when encountering difficulties was to go to the police or the government. Rather than relying on a specific person.

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