Onmyoji's Life Starting in Tokyo

I saw the recommendations in the comment area on Chi🐔 and have kept up to date (fully subscribed). One-sentence review: This is a Japanese youth campus + Onmyoji training light novel, recommended to readers who like campus love and urban training. But both labels have obvious flaws (only for the current progress). 1. Japanese Youth Campus: Too few supporting roles! It's a quick show, but there are too few peripheral supporting characters, few interactions on campus, and no campus activities (the three treasures of Japanese campus dramas: clubs, campus festivals, and sports meets). However, considering that the logic of ghosts is similar to that of anime spell battles, which are caused by the fear and resentment of social groups, and there is a corresponding Onmyoji University, it should be improved in the future. The author recommends adding some interactions between other onmyojis of the same age and the male and female protagonist in the early stage~ (I thought it was strange that the family would conduct apprenticeship training in the early stage, but the male protagonist had no contact with other onmyojis in the same area... There are apps but no WeChat group?) In addition, I look forward to the roles of teachers and students in the university. The heroine's character issue, this is the most complained about or scolded part. Typical avoidant attachment personality! In fact, the audience is very wide, but since I have observed that most of the readers currently follow the male protagonist to travel through time and practice, and the supporting characters rarely have scenes that highlight the cuteness or appearance of the female protagonist, it is also difficult, so there are too many people scolding... Poor author, half of the problem can be solved if the female protagonist in the anime draws nice white hair or red twin ponytails. The other adopted heroine, Yuki, is too out-of-the-box. Maybe because she has few roles in the early stage, Yuki obviously has a lot of hidden plots to explore, so I want her to be more multi-faceted, which leads to a big difference between her and the nanny/bodyguard identity. I personally recommend a character named Misato Katsuragi in "eva". Her character has a deep side and a free and easy cynical part, and she is very lovable.

I posted about my work. In order to prevent some people from skipping it and being poisoned by this book, I will save everyone's time myself. The following are the poisonous points summarized by the boss in the comment area of ​​this book: 1 The female protagonist is so strong that she can actually defeat monsters without relying on the male protagonist and not fall over! 2 The system is useless, it cannot send tasks or click, and it may even become invisible! 3 The male protagonist is too weak. He will not become stronger except for learning new skills. The most important thing is that he will not make a ding-dong sound when he upgrades! 4 The character design is plagiarized (the heroine comes from a big family, and she brings someone who may be a bodyguard) 5 I have written more than 100,000 words, and the plot is still at the beginning! After all, Qidian's online articles only have a maximum of 600,000 words, and they will definitely collapse later! If you don't finish the book within one million words, you will be the successor of the mermaid! The word count is messed up! 6 The male protagonist is trash. According to the current plot development, corresponding to reality, he is just a mediocre person who can easily go to Qingbei after graduating from high school. 7 The male protagonist's mental age is not a direct sum of his previous life's age and his present life! 8 The male protagonist does not have paranoia about being persecuted, and does not feel that he will die at any time! How dare you salt fish! 9 To be determined, I will come back to make up for it when the comment section summarizes it. In conclusion, it is too poisonous and this book cannot be helped at all.

I patiently and calmly explained several "irrationalities" that appeared in the comment area, and I will patiently explain them to you once, and only this time. If you still have the attitude of "I don't listen, I don't listen, and I say there is a problem with your setting, you have a problem", or "Other books are not set up like this, it's just you, so you have a problem", delete the post and ban you permanently, there is nothing to say. (Spoiler Alert) First of all, there is the issue of the protagonist's level and the level of his parents. When his father died, he was 29 years old, grade B, close to A. My mother is in her early 40s now, C. The protagonist is 15 or less than 16 years old at the beginning, E. I have already explained before which academic qualifications and diplomas each level corresponds to, so I won't go into details here. It's probably from compulsory education to doctorate and field authority, you can correspond by yourself. So, when his father died, he was 29 years old. In reality, he was like a doctoral student in Qingbei who was about to complete his thesis. Putting aside the mediocre theory of Qingbei in the comment area, from classic to unique, to be fair, compared to the top executives, he was not particularly talented, but he was definitely first-rate. However, this has nothing to do with the fact that the protagonist is 15 years old and rated E. Even if he is the son of a genius like Einstein, he has to be a high school student at the age of 15, so there is no problem. As for whether practice is getting faster or slower, I think this thing is what I have the final say. I set it up so that practitioners aged 15 to 30 will experience a knowledge explosion similar to that in the real world. During this period, you have the strongest learning ability and the strongest practice ability, so your magic power will undergo an adolescent-style explosive growth like your physical fitness. Your talent and understanding will all develop during this period. After this golden period, people who are not talented enough will start to get stuck. For example, if you were in your twenties, you were a C, and you are still a C now. Don't get stuck. This setting can be found everywhere. Only those who have reached the highest level during this period, began to understand their own way of cultivation, and walked on the road from A to S, can get rid of the limitations of ordinary physical talents and pursue a higher realm. To sum up, the protagonist has no problem with E now. Second, why do people seek help from Onmyoji and conceal the existence of ghosts? I have explained in the chapter that the root of most ghosts is human fear. If it is made public, it will definitely cause large-scale fear. If it causes fear, it will have a chain reaction and bring the world back to the environment of the Heian era where hundreds of ghosts roamed at night. On this point, whether it is the upper management of Onnyangliao or the The currently unknown mysterious organization has been mentioned, and in the latest Yan Yanluo and Sadako incident, it has been clearly shown that the mysterious organization is consciously lowering the threshold of human fear of the birth of monsters by weakening the strength of monsters, so that the number of monsters begins to rise. This is why Yin Yang Liao cannot disclose the existence of ghosts on a large scale. As for those who go to Yin Yang Liao for help, I have also written. Yin Yang Liao has peripheral organizations, similar to shrines and temples. Some people who believe in it will ask for help when encountering problems. However, they are only a minority and cannot shake the mainstream thinking of society. Even if they go out to promote it, they will only be treated as a laughing stock. As long as the mainstream believes that ghosts do not exist, there will be no return to Hyakki Night Walk, so there is no setting problem here. Third, why didn't the heroine go to the apartment to check in advance? Because she didn't think there would really be a big problem there. In her opinion, they were just some little ghosts. Before she saw the resentful ghost, she only thought there was a simple little problem. It was like a group of little kids going to set off firecrackers. The heroine was worried that they would injure herself, so she went there herself as a surgeon and found a colleague she knew (the protagonist) ), by the way, the ambulance and the first aid team (Haruko) were waiting outside the park. In her opinion, this was already safe enough to avoid over-stress, and she also hoped to use this incident to make those little brats improve their memories. However, in view of the second article mentioned, the existence of ghosts cannot be disclosed casually, so she could only make a detour like this. Unexpectedly, the place where the firecrackers were set off not only leaked underground natural gas pipelines (hiding a mass grave), but also encountered a landslide that blocked the ambulance's way in (the mass grave delayed communications, so Xuexi could not receive the message) If you still think she is not cautious enough and should check it out first when something happens, I have nothing to say. Fourth, the protagonist's family economic status. I never said that his family was poor. Onmyoji's income is very generous, but this does not mean that his family is rich. I mentioned in the article that the Onmyoji has high income, but also consumes a lot of money in training and combat. If you can't understand it intuitively, for example, the Onmyoji is similar to the special forces in reality. However, they have to pay for the live-fire training they usually conduct and the weapons they consume on duty. The salary is high and the expenses are high. In fact, they don't earn as much as you see. As for the protagonist's family, there are three people and three cats, and the main income comes from Haruko's C-level character. The three cats need special food. Haruko's missions are costly, and the protagonist and his sister need materials for practice, so their family is not rich, so the protagonist takes on missions as much as possible to ease the family's financial pressure. No problem. Last point, why should you go to an ordinary school? Because mathematics, physics and chemistry are very important for removing spirits, it's that simple. For the basic teaching of Onmyoji, each family has its own enlightenment education. There is no need to set up special courses, so there is no need for special Onmyoji elementary, middle, and high schools. I have never thought that Onmyoji is easy to learn, so I wrote that when they enter college, they not only have to take the cultural course, but also the Onmyoji exam. The Onmyoji grade needs to reach D level before you can enter the university on the prerequisite of meeting the cultural class scores. Otherwise, you can only go home and practice on your own, and you are not qualified to study the advanced courses offered by Onmyoji. Here you can see again that for the elite juniors that Yin Yang Lao focuses on cultivating, the conditions for high school graduation are only D. From the side, it shows that the protagonist is already E close to D in his freshman year of high school, and he is actually very talented. As for why mathematics, physics and chemistry are important, do you think the description of the forensic identification of monsters in my article was just a joke?

Is it unfair to use honorifics when speaking to elders? Even using honorifics when speaking to elders seems alienating. Even if you haven't studied Japanese, you haven't read novels translated from Japanese, and you haven't read any of them? Apart from selling fish, how many people feel like speaking to their parents without honorifics? Feeling alienated? I'm afraid you don't want to be slapped. In addition, if you ask me about Ouni-chan and Ocasan, no one will bully me, but if I use any honorific, I will be bullied? Someone else's book friend explained it to you kindly, but you still want to come? What's wrong, am I easily bullied?

No one is prohibited from saying that this book is not good, but there are certain types of posts that will definitely be deleted and banned: those that are political, insulting to the country, alluding to reality, those that are witch-hunting, personal attacks, those that are nominally talking about the book but are actually not good for the author. No matter where you post these types of posts, I found that the post will be deleted and permanently blocked. There is nothing to say about these. Then, it is normal for online articles to be like each other. Some people like and dislike the characters. It is normal. It is a mental age issue. You can think that re-living will add up. I can also think that what he lives again is a repeated life. There will be no growth after repeated experiences ten thousand times. No one can convince anyone, so you can argue, but there is a condition. I have built the Poison Point Building. Whatever I have compiled into it, do not post it outside. If I have compiled it into it, I will delete what is outside. If you want to argue, you can go to the Poison Point Building to argue. No matter how fierce the quarrel is inside, as long as it does not involve the first principle issue, I will not care about it. That's it. I think it is not too much to do so, right?

The protagonist does have a youthful feel, but it's hard to judge whether this is good or bad from the perspective of today's online novels attracting readers; but creating a growing protagonist is obviously not a bad thing for novels.

After reading the free chapter, I really like the plot and the character of the male protagonist. But the female protagonist who is reckless in order to advance the plot is very poisonous, and the male protagonist who chases the female protagonist everywhere in order to let the male protagonist follow the plot is very vicious. I don't plan to read it myself. If you can accept the above two points, this book is very good. Well, that's it.

What can I say about this book? Seriously speaking, it is a good book. The subject matter is also my favorite type. I recommend everyone to read it. However, the author has written too much about his mental journey. It does not mean that he cannot write it, but the author basically writes about every chapter, and it accounts for a relatively large proportion. I personally feel very uncomfortable about this, so I can only say, come on, author, I will withdraw first! Goodbye👋🏻

I'm speechless. Internet writing has become like this now. I just want to have fun without thinking. Except for the emotional scenes that are a little awkward, this book is still good in all other aspects. It also has some cool points, but it's not that outrageous. It's a good book.

Well-written emotional drama can indeed attract readers

This is purely a personal opinion and does not represent anyone else's... This book is indeed a good book, but it makes me very tired. I can only read it during my vacation. I usually come home from get off work after a tired day and want to read something lighthearted and relaxing, so this book is not suitable. It was okay at the beginning, but the plot became more and more intense as it progressed, with conspiracies one after another. In the first year, the protagonist died once and was brought back, and not long after that, he was hospitalized again because of a curse. Can you occasionally intersperse some daily life to relax the rhythm? Speaking of which, there is another book in which the heroine is a miko (I won't mention the title), which is completely opposite to this one. After reading more than a hundred chapters, they are all cute and cute. The "extermination of demons" mentioned in the title only happens once and is resolved quickly. The plot is too loose... It would be great if the two books could be combined 😅

Give it a half year, I can't stand it anymore

First of all, the author's writing style is very good, but to be honest, the heroine's character is really unlikable, and can even be said to be poisonous. You can call it tsundere, but according to the situation described in the article, there are only arrogance and tsundere. Then who will save you when you are in danger, the heroine? When encountering monsters that may not be dealt with, instead of being cautious, you become reckless. Just because Onmyoji is a dangerous profession, you can't just not do it just because it's dangerous? In my opinion, it's sophistry. Doing something when you know it's not possible is not what the heroine does.

Because the author said it would be cut, I didn't dare to order it. It has been updated for several days now, so I want to give you an accurate message. Will the update be completed? If I can, I'll order them all. If not, I'm sorry.

How to say this? To be honest, I didn't feel bad after reading it, but it wasn't very good either. The main reason is that after more than 60 chapters, there was nothing exciting and it was too bland. The same goes for fighting monsters and practicing. The protagonist has no very outstanding points, so it just feels bland. There is no particularly eye-catching plot (whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist), which cannot attract more people to read. I hope the author will write better and better in the future, come on (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

Chi Ji, who saw this book, felt pretty good.

How should I put it, as a bookworm for ten years, I can tell you that this is a good book, but it is slow to read and a little dark, so it is not suitable for everyone. The first book I read was Dou Po. At that time, I was following Geng Tudu's Wu Dong Qian Kun. If it were me at that time, I really thought it was a crappy book and had no interest in reading it. But in fact, if you get tired of reading Xiao Baiwen and Long Aotian, you will start to like this kind of book. A really interesting book. There is no golden finger, no vase heroine, and no mentally retarded friends or foes. Very interesting Of course, this book is not suitable for everyone, just like I can't stand my best friend. If this book is not suitable for you, I hope you will not abuse me. Thank you.

The logic of the system in this book seems to have been prepared by the author. It is not the kind of thing where a system is dropped out of thin air without explanation or it is just a gift from xx without explanation. It is a foreshadowing embedded in the main line of the plot. This feels very good. Come on, author.

It is a light-hearted article about removing ghosts, but inadvertently revealing a glimpse of the monster conspiracy behind the scenes will give people a sense of tension, and people can't help but worry about the future fate of the male and female protagonists. I feel that the author has better control over the proportion of supernatural and emotional, which is my favorite type. This book is really great! I hope more people who like this type can see it

I just read Chapter 40, and I personally feel that what the heroine said makes sense. I have also thought about this issue before when I read novels with similar backgrounds. In a generally stable world, what do ordinary Onmyoji and others rely on to maintain their motivation. Of course there was no problem in ancient times, but life was difficult for everyone. If it is an unstable society where force is very important, it is easy to understand. But in a generally stable world, why should we eliminate demons if we can't survive? Ordinary practitioners have insufficient abilities and their income may not be that high. They may be similar to social workers in large companies. The mortality rate is high. Firefighters and police officers may not be that dangerous. You also need to practice hard since childhood and prepare a lot of materials yourself. Would it be difficult for someone with such investment and good brains to get into a prestigious school? There is plenty of good work to be done. It doesn't matter if a big family has inheritance and privileges, but an ordinary Onmyoji is not cost-effective at all. Even if you are interested in helping others, why not be a good teacher or doctor, or simply make a lot of money and support families like the protagonist who have died in the service? If you want to pass on family skills, just treat it as a hobby, there is no need to work in the industry. Relying solely on family tradition or dedication, the group of ordinary practitioners will probably continue to shrink. There are also authors who try to round it off. For example, the leader's journey to stealing heaven and immortality is set so that only hereditary samurai and shrines can do this, and all have privileges. For example, Lao Laowang's book sets up temporary workers to be responsible for superpower affairs. The pay is low and you can find extra money by yourself, and you can take the blame if you take the blame; some developed countries outsource to the third world. Also, state agencies are only responsible for major matters, and most people rely on mercenaries. The strength and discipline of state personnel are good, but the level and enthusiasm of mercenaries is hard to say. To be honest, if I were put into the situation of the protagonist of this book, there are not enough plug-ins and the fourth wall is not broken, I would really have no motivation to continue working in the industry. If you're worried about your mother, you can use the time traveler's knowledge to find ways to make a fortune so that your mother doesn't have to risk her work. Finally, let me make it clear that this is not a criticism of the author, but I think the author's writing is reasonable. The heroine pointed out the inner shortcomings of the hero and wrote it in detail. I just want to complain, how can someone who is not the main character stay motivated?

I don't know if it's an illusion, but I feel like my ability to read has improved a lot recently.

I don't understand why so many people jump out to say that the author level setting is unreasonable. You said that the plot is slow and the style of painting is too daily. If you don't like it, I'll leave it alone. Everyone has their own preferences, but you said that the plot setting is unreasonable and the protagonist's upgrade is too slow. I can't stand it anymore. I summarized it, when the protagonist's father died, B was close to A, the protagonist was in the first year of high school, and E was more than halfway through, so I concluded that the author's setting was unreasonable and the protagonist was too rubbish. I don't understand, how did you come up with this setting? I was just worried that there was something wrong with the level I set, so I just faced reality. In this world, the levels of Onmyoji are as follows: The lowest level has no rank and is represented by the younger sister. This corresponds to children who are still receiving compulsory education in reality. Level E means high school students who have completed compulsory education and have a junior high school diploma, that is, the protagonist. Grade D, high school diploma. C level, undergraduate diploma, and since Onmyoji universities are only offered in top universities like Dongda University, a C level graduate from such a university is equivalent to an undergraduate diploma from Qingbei in China. B level, postgraduate diploma, here is the talented elite after C level graduation. A-level, doctoral diploma, B-level particularly talented elites. S level, authority in the field. So, if the protagonist's father died when he was three years old, and he got married according to the twenty-four-five rule, then his father would probably be a third-year student when he died. Isn't it outrageous that a person who was a third-year student would almost get a doctorate? Comparing this with a fifteen-year-old who has graduated from compulsory education, can you conclude which one is a waste? I just can't figure it out. If there is a problem, you probably think that our real world is not normal. Then you may have abnormal inspiration and accidentally discovered the real world. Also, you can actually calculate the average experience gained by the protagonist, and then conclude that it will take another three years for the protagonist to level up, so he is a waste! Then I am really convinced. Is your learning ability from elementary school to high school average? The faster you learn, the faster you don't understand? Even if you say average, what does that mean? In reality, this means that you only need to maintain the intensity of studying in elementary and junior high school, and you can be admitted to Qingbei after graduating from high school. Isn't this called a genius or a waste? Then I really want to be a waste.

I read the Golden Three Chapters and I feel pretty good. Come on, author Support the author in the comment area to increase his popularity It stands to reason that the performance of a novel of this quality is a bit poor Is the promotion not good enough

The next step is to restore the protagonist's family heirloom, the Four Directions Seal? Will you use it to fight against black spiritual power later? After repairing the Sifang Seal, can the protagonist kill the Sifang?

After looking at the introduction, it's really an unconventional start, and there's even a mother! ! !

After taking a look, if I don't like it later, I'll book it all.

There are several forces now. I'm confused.

Personally, I feel this novel is good, I have ordered it all, I hope the author will not give up!

Summoning the author @skavenfries Well, let me first say that we are all brothers in the nine groups. (Don't call me a boss, you are still a boss in my eyes. I am more aggressive than you) After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the writing was very good and I felt that the results should be better, so I scrolled through the comment area and was shocked 🥵 Brother, you have lost your mentality because of the trolls. Actually, it's quite normal. I often crash, but don't confront readers, it's meaningless; brother, listen to my advice. Since writing the book, I have learned that some readers will criticize from unexpected angles or angles that the author did not expect. It cannot be said to be the reader's fault (except for a few people who criticize for the sake of criticizing), because everyone has different views on knowledge, and everyone sees the same thing from a different angle, a thousand Hamlets. If there are any, correct them and encourage them if they don't. It's okay to be angry, but if you are in the nine groups, try not to end the match. Actually, great masters have also gone through this stage, and it will be fine as long as they survive it. Crow's love game started to be scolded badly, and his grades were also poor, so he gave up. There are also many people who complain about the newspaper books. Not everyone likes to read the cuttlefish because it is so awesome. No one's book is liked by everyone. If what the reader says makes sense, let's change the outline ourselves. If we think it doesn't make sense, ignore it. If we really don't like it, we'll delete it. If it doesn't work, we can set a fan value to speak, say a thousand words and ten thousand, and don't end up in the line. Keep your attitude, I am definitely not making sarcastic remarks. Writing books and reading books are completely different perspectives. We are criticized a lot. From the side, it is because we are not good enough and we have not written the stories that everyone wants to see. I will say whatever comes to my mind. I feel that your mentality is a bit broken, so I will say a few more words. I hope brothers will not blame you🙏🙏🙏 Finally, I wish Ershu can become a god✊✊✊

To be honest, the author has his own writing style, which is normal. The author's slow writing method will also have his own favorite audience. But there are gains and losses, and this way of writing will lose most of the audience. After all, life is already very frustrating in real life, and most people don't want to be so miserable in a fantasy world. The author said that the protagonist is actually very strong, and then gave many examples, but whether he is strong or not needs to be compared. The author could actually arrange a comparison between the protagonist and his peers to illustrate the protagonist's genius. Rather than the protagonist shown in a large amount of space in the early stage can only be compared with the heroine, this can only show that the protagonist is far worse than the heroine, but it cannot show that the protagonist is actually better than 90% of his peers in the world. I hope the author will get better results in the future.