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Give the author a suggestion, of course this is just a suggestion. My personal opinion is whether the description of the famous sects and righteous forces is too strong? It was described earlier that the chief escort of the escort agency wanted to kill people and seize the treasure when he saw the wealth. I can understand it. After all, in an environment where the jungle is like a jungle, the so-called right path may not be that bad. But when it comes to the plot of the internal fighting within the Xiaoxiang Sword Sect, I think Lin Wandong, as the leader of a local powerful force, her operations are simply incredible based on the author's description.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       being being taught only to the younger junior sisters and not to the eldest senior brothers. This practice can be said to be biased, but it is normal or barely acceptable.                                                  But to teach the martial arts and mental skills of the other sects to the junior sister and also let her be the leader, this kind of operation is simply ridiculous. Even when the protagonist asked her, she said, "Senior brother learns the authentic internal skills and mental methods of our sect." Have the master and the disciple ever considered the meaning of the word "authentic"? Even she herself felt that her senior brother was authentic, which meant that the Xueji Heart Technique she practiced was not the authentic martial arts of the sect. So how could she think she was qualified to be the leader? Do you still want to run for President of the United States without American citizenship? Especially when it comes to the core interests of a sect such as the inheritance of martial arts (here specifically refers to the famous sects of the righteous way, and does not discuss the magic sects, gangs and court forces), fellow disciples cannot even hear a word of truth from her and her master's mouths. I can't say anything about the reputation of the master. It turns out that you also know what it means to eat and look ugly, and to say that it is easy to do but not easy to say. As the heir to the sect and the next generation leader, she actually has such a big stain on her body. The operations of the current head of the company have simply put the King of Understanding at a disadvantage.                                                                To give an inappropriate example, as a disciple of the Wudang sect, I am practicing Wudang Changquan hard in preparation for the next step of practicing Wudang Cotton Palm, and then the master will use Shaolin Dragon Claw Hand, Vajra Indestructible Magic and so on. In this case, if the leader fights against others, it seems to have nothing to do with me if he wins, and it has nothing to do with the Wu-Tang Clan, and it doesn't even matter if he loses. Even if the senior brother does not rebel, as long as this hidden danger continues to exist, more management costs will continue to be paid to guard against others. Then create a deeper rift within the sect that is not united enough. In comparison, whether Lin Huiyin's own ability is sufficient to serve as the leader is secondary. After all, you are not even qualified to take the college entrance examination, so discussing how many points you can get is redundant. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to the author.

I am also a long-time reader of the author, and this book made me feel very special. If reading Locus before satisfied the YY idea of ​​playing World of Warcraft and reading comics when I was a student, this book gives people the feeling of being want to travel around the world, which is very enjoyable. Who doesn't have a "chivalrous" dream in their hearts? But I have to say that it is really easy to fall into the routine of Internet writing when the subject matter is changed. There are many books about martial arts and there are many routines. I hope the road will be greatly improved. I would also like to mention a shortcoming that I feel is the Japanese language of the Japanese. As a person who understands Japanese, it seems a bit embarrassing. Not to mention the serious traces of computer translation, it is really inappropriate in terms of meaning and wording. The people in the article use polite language, but it is like an illiterate bandit speaking in scholarly language, which is very unpleasant. The author is also requested to pay attention to this.

In my eyes, the name of this book automatically changed to "The Trajectory of the Righteous Paths in the World of Jianghu"

You Wu Ming is the main character, I guess. I particularly hate the countless coincidences where the villain and the supporting character just can't die, and when they are about to kill him, something suddenly happens. I was furious when I saw it. I was finally intercepted, and there was an accident again. It's so depressing to watch.

People are stupid, what does it mean to eat Haagen-Dazs, wear princess dresses, and be taken care of by others at this age? Generally speaking, in this era and background, when the protagonist laments the life of modern people, shouldn't he praise them for studying in clear classrooms at this time? Why are you so social here?

Can you kill a villain properly? Why, there are too few characters? At least go away and kill the villains every time. Do you think you are Gul'dan? Blz is indeed a character who is constantly killing people. How come you can't kill people through various coincidences?

I have a question. The people in the Kendama Dream are real, right? Then if you put a bunch of girls in it, and they can't beat you, and then you practice a picking skill, can you soar into the sky? Find a better cauldron to take with you, and you will be a virgin Yuanyin every time.

The writing is good, but the worldview of the people in it is far different from that of modern people. Even the protagonist's world view has become that of an ancient person, and his brain circuit is very awkward. He has just worshiped the boss and pledged his blood to protect him. If he really values ​​​​that much, he offered a gold finger to meet his junior sister but immediately refused; he saved the Xiaoxiang faction for profit and suddenly became friends of life and death... There are too many, and the protagonist is a bit fragmented. If writing about time-travelers has lost the vision of transcending the times, it would be better to write about indigenous people.

The writing of this book is excellent and the author is very progressive, but the problem is that the overall tone is too depressing. I don't know what the author is thinking. Basically, the protagonist is not given any time to level up. The main plot is just like a machine gun. Although the protagonist is a weak chicken, he has been getting stronger, but he can't keep up with the speed of map upgrades. I don't know what other people think, but anyway, I abandoned the book when it broke out. The update broke out during Overlord's Tracks. It was Cyber ​​who killed everyone in Gotham City, hacked to death a group of gangsters, and sent the Joker to hell. During Shadow Tracks, a hundred chapters broke out. It was Merlin who declared war on the gods in a rage, and his SHIELD department swept away the demons. Now hundreds of updates are breaking out here. The protagonist withered after killing some soldiers, was defeated by a magic sword master, lost the golden finger kendama, and was captured by a puppet controller... You can't keep suppressing it, why don't you show me some praise? The whole volume is suppressed, but the protagonist becomes more powerful after one or two chapters, and then another master comes out to suppress the protagonist? I find this disturbing.

The climax of this book is always frustrating. It was as if a man and a woman were having fun, and the woman suddenly said, "Have you eaten?" The man replied that he was eating noodles. It would be too disappointing to add a routine when writing a climax or setting up the climax. The author himself likes to build up the story for a long time and spoil the story in advance. Adding a routine to the climax will wear away the passion. And can you please not spoil the story in advance? There is no twist at all.

Generally speaking, this is a transformational book by Lulu. The Internet is very divided. The book is a good book. I feel that regardless of the plot, tightness and logic of the plot, it can be regarded as an excellent work in this era of online writing. But I feel that it lacks the flavor of martial arts in it, the flavor of martial arts. This is not an excellent martial arts novel. You can put him in a worldview like Western Fantasy and Dou Po, but it will still be like this. How to say martial arts? Martial arts is a flavorful rush. It's hard to say clearly. The knife is a knife with flavor, the sword is a sword with flavor, fast is fast with flavor, and slow is slow with flavor. The war is like thunder and drums, and the calm breeze is blowing on the face. It is to drink a pot of wine and give it to someone. Personally, I feel that the novel with the most Jianghu flavor is the first and middle period of Cuttlefish's The Lord of the World, when Xiao Meng walks to the end of the world with his sword. After reading it for many years, I still remember it freshly. One book and one sword smoothed the business, and he lived up to his reputation for fifty years!

Liu Zhuoran couldn't bear to see Shen Lan sleeping. Shen Lan was desperate to keep her virginity at first, and then desperate to avenge Ji You. Why was she suddenly willing to sacrifice her life for her enemy?

I don't know why, but I don't want to watch it anymore.

The writing in the first forty chapters was really good, but it got worse and worse after returning to Suzhou. How long has the protagonist been looking for people to kill as a talent on earth? It is even more funny to make an inexplicable oath when taking the fluctuating light. If the junior sister dies, will the protagonist commit suicide immediately? Are you now living for your junior sister? The plot is also forced. A big chamber of commerce can't find anyone who is better than the protagonist, a rookie who has just practiced martial arts. How can he survive all these years? Others clearly say that the protagonist will die if he holds it now. I don't know where Yaoqin and the protagonist get the confidence to take it. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, wouldn't he die immediately? The personality switch is even more baffling. Discourage them directly

The writing is good, no, it should be said that the author's writing skills are very good, and he can make some garbage plots very attractive, but this book is almost pure martial arts style. . . It really limits the performance. After all, the martial arts style couldn't attract people anymore. He couldn't have more gorgeous imaginations, and there was only so much content he could expand on. The other one is the word I just used, "garbage plot". I really want to use this word to complain about this. . . . This plot always makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. If it weren't for the really good writing, I really wouldn't be able to stand it. For example, in the Suzhou War, no one died! ! ! ! ! Don't say that you are like passerby A. It's enough for you to kill all the big names on the list! Then the plot between Qingyang and Tiezi's father. . . . This was simply an explosion for people to watch. No matter what you say, it is absolutely an unpardonable crime for Qingyang Demon Lord to kill someone and use him as a puppet. Then after he broke his arm, he deliberately arranged for him to use his old enemy as a puppet. . . . The old enemy let him off the hook! It's not heart-breaking, but I really didn't kill him! The plot arrangement was unpleasant from beginning to end, maybe I was a little impetuous. I can no longer stand any analysis of human nature. But, but, a novel cannot be used to entertain and vent after this depressing reality, really. . . . It's a bit discouraging. Then switch the map to Liaodong. . . . Brother, the main plot is that kendama! Stop arranging so many things, arrange a blank period, and use kendama to improve it is the serious thing! Has the protagonist's kung fu always been about wearing clothes? This is wrong! What a boast! This update is meaningless! ! ! ! ! It is only right to quickly reach the full level and kill talents at will! It's so cool! It's so enjoyable! Only then can we vent our feelings! If you do this again, you will suffer from depression! Just like a policeman in a movie said, people who often like to read novels are good people, because their inner emotions can be vented out with their emotions and will not accumulate sins, so Lao Lu, help us, let us be good people!

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The protagonist is very uninvolving! Even if he looks ordinary, the key point is that he is a bit silly. He seems to be cautious and brave, but in fact he is extremely nervous 1 Playing in deep sleep in a place that is not completely safe 2 I have never read the novel. To kill someone, you must be prepared to be killed. The other party has no clue about anything and just goes up with a frizzy python. Don't you understand the importance of reuniting the enemy's family? 3 As for that jade, I suggest that the protagonist keep it on his chest and not hang it casually on his body. 4 I just saw the pig-legged junior sister being tied up and said anything. Fortunately, the person tied up was not a flower-picking alliance, so the protagonist had a chance to rescue it. Well, above, the dog's head saves his life Chapter 8 of Xiao Xiangqu, the protagonist has schizophrenia? Or do you think Junior Sister is just an NPC and you never care? I was so anxious that I couldn't sleep, and I was very tormented because of my own reasons. Then I went to flirt with a girl right away? ? ? ? The protagonist is split

I just finished reading it. Is this book an invincible book? There is no him in the world, but there are legends about him everywhere. His extraordinary talent has dominated the martial arts world for thirteen years. His subordinates, his son, and everyone around him are evil people, but he is not. He can still hold a cat out with compassion and act cool, but it is so interesting that I can't explain it at all. A certain fool's brain was not working well and he used intelligence manipulation from time to time. He didn't look very good. He used a second-hand gold finger that he forced the king to refuse, and he was beaten to death by his son and snatched the gold finger. He quickly let the father-enemy alliance ambushing around him kill him and finish the job. It was too boring to give up.

It feels really annoying. Not everyone wants to read another book by the author, not to mention that it is a Marvel theme that I don't like. Every time I click on the post, they all say that there are reminders in the previous book that you should read by yourself, and they are also those that are equivalent to the plot of the later part of the book, directly spoiling you, you are drunk.

I've basically ordered all of Death, half of Shadows, and half of this one. I don't know why, but I can't read Lao Lu's books less and less. After reading them, I feel like I'm forcing myself to read them. I wonder if Lao Lu can work harder. I'm also a long-time fan of Light Rail.

Maybe it's because I fight too many wolves, but I think samurai and ninjas are more handsome than immortals.

The author likes to create a hodgepodge of setting systems in everything he writes, which is a new system where various forces fight against each other and become a new system. Of course, not many can write well, and the author should be considered one, but what I don't want to see is that no matter which of your works the male supporting actor and the protagonist act like they are trying to level up, it can easily cause discomfort, and I feel that the author is good It seems like there is a brother plot, so I always like to include these private things in the book, but I don't know if you write it poorly or if you write it on purpose. In the end, you often end up feeling giddy and a little nauseous. To be honest, I hope the author can pay attention to it. This is feedback. If the author feels uncomfortable after seeing it, just pretend that he has not seen it and delete it.

"Left Road" is finished so soon. I don't know what the author will do next, but I am still looking forward to it. I had an inspiration before. Now the cyberpunk theme is very popular. I wonder if the author will watch Kamen Rider. Among them, all members of the Showa Knights were transformed into human beings, and the concept of transforming humans is now the cyberpunk version of cyberpunk. Although the leather case of Showa Kamen Rider is very old-fashioned in terms of current aesthetics, the settings are still very trendy even today. (Besides, the knights in the SIC series are all very handsome.) It would be interesting if we could use the concept of cyberpunk, combine prosthetics and Kamen Rider to transform people, and design a system that takes the sci-fi route and serves as the protagonist's power system.

Generally speaking, a good book makes people unable to guess the follow-up. If you guess it, it will always make people feel boring. I look forward to the following series.

I was stupid, I kept raising it and finished it. It is indeed the old way, yes! Let's kill!

It can only be said that the old road is really stupid, and the new book is less than 2 million words in half a year. . .

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Subscribe just to speak, Ever since the last book "Shadow Trail" was delayed and delayed, causing my investment to fail, I became a fan and became a stranger, and I have been feeling uncomfortable until now. I didn't expect the new book to be finished so soon, time flies by so fast

I can't stand watching "The Soul in a Deserted Village", it feels too disconnected.

I saw the Half-Step Heaven Ranking, where I was chasing myself, and I couldn't stand it anymore. It feels like there is something missing compared to some books that I read with gusto. It just leaves too little space for the reader's imagination, or the reader is bored and doesn't want to think about it.