Fellow Taoist, Would You Like to Buy a Gatling?

The title and introduction of the book all contain the content of cultivating immortals, but in fact this article belittles cultivators to the point of being useless. Whether it is the description of cultivators, or the concept, connotation, and dependence on the environment of cultivating immortals, it belittles cultivators at all times and everywhere! Coupled with his rigid character, the author is still suitable for writing novels about Western culture. Don't involve things with Eastern content. You will be tired of being criticized, and others will be tired of watching.

I read about twenty chapters. I thought it was a real businessman who opened a store to sell things. When I walked in, it seemed risky. I was okay with it at first, but suddenly a character from a previous book appeared and I felt uncomfortable. I feel that the plot of this book is too taken for granted. Although the reasons are explained, the actual reality is not necessarily based on the author's explanation. This makes what I thought was a risky thing feel very safe for the protagonist. There is also a feeling that there is a lot of nonsense. The "nonsense" here means that there are too many explanations in the article. When the readers feel that these explanations are wrong or they are common sense, it is very boring. Those who have liked the plot can watch it. I thought it was a cool novel, but found that there are not many cheats, it is just a simple journey through the world. But I can't stand such a rustic style, because I like reading science fiction.

This work is actually quite good, but I don't know why the subscription volume is so poor?

The story becomes interesting in the latest chapter. Tell me how you feel. Judging from the current feeling, this book is still a wonderful book, even better than the author's previous books. Especially after the preliminary preparations, the mystery has now been revealed. It gives people a refreshing feeling. It is recommended to read the latest chapter from the beginning at once, but we still cannot deny the early shortcomings of this book. Kaiji is quite satisfactory, and the behavior in the mid-term is unclear. Especially with a lot of foreshadowing set up in the mid-term, the purposes of the various riddlers and protagonists are unclear. As a result, the comments made by readers who saw it at the time were that they had a poor sense of reading and did not understand the power system. Coupled with the misleading title and a large number of bad reviews, it may not be possible to retain new users. To summarize, the beginning is mediocre, the middle story is too scattered, the main theme is unclear, and there is no climax of three-dimensional decline. Although it performed well in the later stage and the various legions were assembled perfectly, it still cannot save the early stage. If this was a procedural game or a movie or TV series, it would definitely be beautiful and perfect. A summary of the clues of various map switching branch tasks, and finally the truth is discovered at the end, with a classic streamlined structure design. But this is a novel that has been serialized and updated every day and has more than 2 million words, so the structure is quite bad. The early and short climax design is insufficient, and the protagonist's behavior is not clear enough. Coupled with the loss of the audience caused by the previous fans, this is obviously a very exciting book, but it is not even a high-quality book It can only be said to be a pity I hope the author will work hard!

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The title of this book... Ye Qingjie, in my opinion, should have more of an internal flavor than "Traces of Arms in the Worlds"

I saw the book review of Chapter 176 As for this book, I don't think his writing is bad. The logic is self-consistent and the writing is pretty good. But I really can't read it. I read Chapter 176 and then threw it aside. I was lying on the bed today and suddenly thought of this book. I wanted to write a book review First of all, let me talk about my expectations for this book after reading the title and introduction. I was looking forward to seeing a businessman protagonist who is smooth, easy-going, and relatively funny. In fact, after reading the third chapter of the golden chapter, I realized that the protagonist of this book is a tough guy who sells gas tanks in the Middle East. Well, if he sells gas tanks, he sells gas tanks. It's not a big problem. I read the same. Then, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I felt that the author's description of the protagonist's personality was actually very strange. Generally speaking, authors don't nail down a protagonist's character too hard, because if it's too hard, it will lead to inexplicable distortions in the later stages, which may lead to being accused of inconsistency (I didn't say that the author wrote incorrectly, don't criticize me). Second, they will screen a large number of readers, so that some readers who simply look at what the protagonist does are fine, but readers who feel uncomfortable after hearing the author's psychological description of the protagonist will run away. But this author seems to do this. He described the character of the protagonist very clearly, and the protagonist is indeed the kind of person who speaks the truth and has his own clear goals. He also retains a lot of principles on the basis of not being a good person (such as machismo, maintaining a certain affection for children and minors, and not touching the kind of good family girl, who thinks that as long as he hates his parents, he will be killed regardless of the situation) and is quite emotional (there are a hundred ways to kill the big boss in Novice Village) (The author said it himself, not me) But I just went up and broke one of my hands) And people who like to go all the way to the dark side (for example, the Bai Ze girl, people said she wanted to practice, but she was thrown to various battlefields to be trained as a warrior and then came back). How do you say this kind of people? I think the logic is definitely not problematic, but there is a certain gap between this and my favorite protagonist type, as well as my initial expectations. This kind of people are too hard or even rigid. They have their own world view and are not easy-going at all. Oh, and then there is the fact that although the author writes the protagonist's character and psychology in detail, it seems that he does not intend to write down the power system and the protagonist's choices in too detail. For example, when the protagonist goes to fight the boss of Novice Village at the beginning and loses one hand, someone plans to give him a good pill to rebuild it. I refused and replaced it with a prosthetic limb. In the context of the entire overworld cultivation background (the combat power is quite strong, Qi training can resist RPG), and the author also clearly stated in the following pictures that the lack of hands will affect the cultivation, he directly rejected the elixir for rebirth of severed limbs, and without giving any reason, he simply said, "I have already found this thing unpleasant, so I changed to a prosthetic limb." In the later stage, he solved this problem by cheating (meaning that the boss gave him a book of exercises that did not require physical fitness). And it was not solved proactively. It was picked by a boss. In the early stage, I remember it looked like thirty or forty cards. I got a book of exercises, which was also given to him by a boss. Then without giving any reason why he didn't practice it, he got more than a hundred and one hundred and four? It was only when we were told that it was useless to practice without spiritual energy. It was a combat skill (to be honest, I thought at first that the technique had its own spiritual energy cultivation method) In one sense, the feeling of exchanging various fresh items in multiple worlds in the introduction was not felt. When describing, the author directly reduced the spiritual energy weapons in the wasteland world to nothing. The medieval apocalyptic world directly used a template with the main world to cultivate immortality. They are all spiritual energy worlds. There is no novelty of different worlds exchanging each other Last point, I feel that the author also likes the feeling that the technological world suppresses the high-energy world of immortality to a certain extent. For example, the protagonist once said something in the article. He said, "The production of those magic weapons is extremely conservative. Why don't you tie the spirit stones to wooden sticks to hit people?" But in the author's article, I can't actually see where the magic weapons of the world of immortality are stretched. How awesome is the protagonist's research? The protagonist's psionic firearms and the psionic exoskeleton mecha that is about to be completed (why do you say it will be done soon? Because I didn't read it later) feel that they are of the enchantment type. That is to say, the mechanical structure is basically unchanged, and the aura is just the last-minute enchantment, or the aura is directly used as energy. It feels that the actual power of his various things is still the mechanical power itself, while psychic energy is only used as an enchantment to break defense or provide energy. However, the magic weapons in the world of immortality are all just a little bit of material. They can be directly added with a bunch of ink talismans (that is, runes and the like) to turn decay into magic. A large number of runes can be used to perform various operations. Doesn't this feel higher? You can still play mechanically in the early stage, but if you want to fight immortal cultivators in the later stage, how big can you make your cannon? Do you still have to go back to the old rules of the world of immortality, that is, add runes to optimize runes Of course, the complaints are not to say how bad this book is. In order to prevent some people from reading such a long article of mine and being confused and not knowing what I said at the beginning, I will emphasize again. I think this book is logically self-consistent and the writing is okay. It is a very good book. Ok Maybe some people will say that what I am talking about is what I don't like about a book review. If a person can be directly affected by a book review, he will not even think about clicking on the first chapter from the beginning. I can only say that such people are either busy and busy, or they are stupid. 90% Are not the kind of people who can think independently. And even if you don't want to read the book, wouldn't it be a good idea to read other people's book reviews if you want to find the advantages?

? ? ? Starting with seven different worlds → Fellow Taoist, do you want Gatling? What the hell is this book title😰

I feel like Lao Lu has finished writing the book

The key is that modern weapons cannot deal with immortal ducks... No matter how good your weapons are, you can deal with immortal cultivators at the level of foundation building, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul. However, even if you have a nuclear bomb, you can't kill the immortal cultivator with the level of spiritual transformation or above...

There are hundreds of updates on the shelves, the plot is online, very unique, and a self-created copy. Why do you let a nonsense talker say that the book has nothing to do with the title? Add more cum and squeeze him down!

This author specializes in writing green articles. If the author wants to live a decent life, he must wear a little green on his head. I wish everyone a happy reading and don't be too green. 🤫🤫

I am really speechless. When I am not strong enough and can only rely on my subordinates, I still refuse to use the ashes of the monsters I killed. But to the Countess, what else is there to say about the businessman?

Author, your last book was uploaded to Bilibili via screen recording. This is one of the video numbers: BV1Ua411V77Z

People who look down on the scientific side are speechless. Those who have the ability to comment on the mysterious side, hold the scientific side of their mobile phones, but look down on the scientific side are all fools. Science is methodology. As long as there is something in the universe, science can be verified in practice. There are always some fools who regard technological objects as the whole of science. According to scientific methodology, God The mystical side is also part of science. Immortals should also practice and verify their enlightenment. The end of the mystical side is called Tao, and the end of the scientific side is called information, the basic information of the universe. Therefore, the end of science is Tao, and the end of Tao is also science. There is no difference between the two. Looking down on the technological side means looking down on the mysterious side, and vice versa.

Pan World Travel Company is recruiting 3,000 world pioneers online. Wholesale system, after completing the world reclamation, 80% of the world origin will be reclaimed in the Shanghai Stock Exchange. Interested parties will reply "I voluntarily sign the contract".

The first few chapters are too boring. Shouldn't the beginning of an online novel get to the point as quickly as possible? Otherwise, impatient people like me won't be able to watch it. I believe there are many such people.

The old road hasn't been updated for 13 hours, and the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this🐶🐶🐶

I really misread you, author, the plot after chapter 170 is like shit. Plot arrangement: Originally, the character you gave Jiang Xia was calm and calm, doing everything for profit. But what did you do after 170 photos? The contrast between forcibly inserting a woman into the plot and beating up the wise and invincible protagonist is a huge poisonous point, and there is no excess in between. It just grosses me out. When I first watched it, I thought it was a masterpiece. As a result, the more I look at it, the more watery it becomes, and the more I look at it, the more watery it becomes. I voted twice, giving you my monthly vote. Really disappointed.

It seems quite tiring, doing everything halfway and always getting stuck in the middle. Sometimes the game is very difficult, and sometimes the writing is very ambitious In the first copy, I wanted to find cooperation, not a big partner, but a revolutionary army who would hold me back, but the protagonist seemed to be very serious. Pretending to be serious under the aura of the protagonist.

Who says technology cannot live forever? What do you understand by immortality? The will relies on the body So as long as the will is still there, can a body that can be replaced be considered eternal life? Even if you are cultivating immortals, in the later stages of becoming a Taoist, everything is a usable body

Chapter 60: The heroine makes people kiss her face, touch her legs, touch her breasts and pat her butt. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

Nearly 3 million words written in 7 months? What kind of human coding machine is this?

The original world is very good, even if it is imitated, at least the plot is original. However, the pace is too slow, there are too many psychological descriptions of critical plot dialogue, and there are very few enjoyable moments. Every time you enter a new world, you can finish it in ten chapters without any pretense, including establishing a branch. And from time to time, a woman is added to the story. The character of the protagonist is also unpleasant. He treats women well and helps poor people in various ways. Perhaps the author feels that he has "three correct views", but when we read the novel, we feel "at a loss", even disgusting. Where is the businessman I agreed with? . . . Profit comes first And there is no main storyline. If you don't work hard to become stronger, you are like a salted fish. There seems to be no ambition to develop your power. In short, it seems boring and not exciting, and I am always being led around by various characters. There are too many plots in the main world, and they are extremely cliche and uninteresting. You might as well spend most of your time writing copies and showing off in various ways. The above views may not be what the author feels after seeing them, but from our point of view, this is what you wrote. Fortunately, that crow always feels like a peacekeeper, and Grandpa Goldfinger is especially the protagonist of the previous book. Looks weird. Personally, you can read this book and give it a Samsung rating.

I can't see any desire in the pig's feet in the early stage. I don't know what the motivation is for making transactions and buying things, cultivating immortality? Immortality? Rich as a country? A superior person? Revenge? Upgrade? Save your life? You look the same! Why else would the pig's feet act? So, I have no expectations for the plot at all!

Ahhhhh, author, why did your Yilujilv Sand Sculpture Book Club deactivate? I have been diving for two years, and my happiness is just gone.

After reading the beginning, you understand what I mean.

Namo Gatling Bodhisattva has six pure depleted uranium bullets that rotate 3,600 times in one second, and his merits are immeasurable to the world. Namo Gatlin Bodhisattva was born in 1860 AD. He saw the war coming and survived all the hardships. Depleted uranium bullets, uranium 238, synthetic bullets, ultra-high rate of fire, 3,600, can penetrate tanks, no problem. Depleted uranium bombs are radioactive, neither alive nor dead, neither dirty nor pure, neither increasing nor decreasing. That's why there is no one who survives from radiation in the air, no eyes, ears, nose, tongue, body or mind, no color, sound, fragrance or touch, no vision, even the unconscious realm, no ignorance, no end of ignorance, no old age and death, no end of old age and death... So we know that the Gatling gun in the south is a great magic gun, a great bright gun, a supreme gun, an incomparable gun, it can eliminate all suffering, it is true and true. Therefore, the mantra of Namo Gatling Gun is said to be: Namo Gatling Bodhisattva, six pure depleted uranium bullets. One breath lasts 3,600 revolutions, bringing great mercy and compassion to the world. Praise to Gatling Bodhisattva, who has been practicing deep Prajna Honey for a long time, holding six tubes, and transforming into a supreme holy vessel. One tube, one sound, six-character mantra, no other mantra, the mantra says: Om Mani Padme Hum. Compassion is like the sea, which can save all living beings, far away from the world, eliminate the karma of the five gatherings, escape from the six paths of reincarnation, escape the disasters of the eight sufferings, eliminate the path of suffering, and go to the bliss of the west. Six pipes and one breath, three signs and sixty thousand revolutions, can save all sentient beings without ever resting. How great is Gatling Bodhisattva; how great is Gatling Bodhisattva. Gatlin Bodhisattva Mahasattva. So I mentioned the words of praise: "Praise to you! Gatling Bodhisattva, who has been practicing deep Prajna Honey for a long time, holding six pipes, turned into a supreme holy instrument." "One pipe, one sound, six-character mantra, no other mantra, Om! Napa Mi Hum!" "Gatling Bodhisattva, with six breaths and three signs, can save all sentient beings without stopping!" "Praise you, Namo Gatling Bodhisattva!"

I can't understand the main character's operation, I feel like I have a big cake

When will it end? I'm waiting for you to open the next book.