I Was Reborn After Reaching the Full Level of Cultivation

I'll tell you my opinions after reading it in one go, and some personal suggestions haha First of all, the setting of this article is very good, and each character is full and distinct. The world structure is also very large, and the reverse-thinking writing interface is rich in ancient times, which is very attractive to me who is very picky about fairy tales. The protagonist's character is tough and relatively indifferent, which is cool and doesn't involve those mother-in-law and mother-in-law things. But too much emphasis on experience is also very dull. This dullness refers to the control of the atmosphere. People live not only for profit but also for fame. The protagonist is an immortal and can wholeheartedly pursue the Tao, but the reader is not. Where are the flowers and applause that the protagonist deserves after she achieves success again and again? Without the sect competition, the competition between the various forces, and the various competitions and honors to back off the success, it would be like a night walk in brocade. The readers would also lack a lot of resonance, and lack the sense of being happy and angry for the protagonist. Also, the protagonist is either training or on the road to training. It is really tiring to watch. In practice, you must pay attention to the balance between work and rest. Moreover, although the protagonist has experienced life and death again and again and suffered a lot of irreversible injuries, they were all inexplicably resolved by the protagonist's various opportunities. Without Xinlu Licheng who worked hard to repair her injuries, readers would feel less worried about her. Finally, I want to talk about Feng Chuxi. She should be the biggest failure of this article. She is just a clown and too much is given to her. She can jump around in various ways, but her strength is not enough to cause great harm to the protagonist. At most, she only relies on external forces. She can be written as a hidden thread, but her weight in this article is almost equal to that of the protagonist's lifelong enemy. The protagonist is probably the reincarnation of a great god from the past life. This setting is actually very bad. Personally, I think it is more interesting to work hard to welcome the unknown future than to move towards the life of the previous life no matter how hard you work. But since I wrote it like this, I also hope that it will be less involved with the previous life, and wouldn't it be more interesting to be more unknown? The author is really lacking in writing about fighting techniques. You can refer to "Only My Freedom" and "The Best Female Fairy". These two books have the most magnificent and colorful fighting scenes in the female fairy tales I have read 😜😜

I haven't read the novel yet, and judging from the introduction, there is a high probability that this book will have a male protagonist. But I feel very unhappy when I read the comments. What does it mean to be bored and have to have a male protagonist to accompany you to become an immortal? How can you cultivate to immortality like this? What avenue do you seek? The road is inherently lonely, so you might as well go home and farm. Really disgusting and uncomfortable comments😒

The author is great. I feel that this book is not as good as the "Female Supporting Girl" one. Is it because some people are clamoring not to have a male protagonist? I feel that the author has cut out a lot of relevant plots, and it seems that there is only the main line, and the branch lines are not expanded too much. It is in a hurry, and it is done after doing what needs to be done. Actually, I think the author is pretty good at writing emotional dramas, so there is no need not to write a male protagonist. The male protagonist of this article was also well written. It's a pity that such a good framework was torn down. Every time an article about cultivating immortality comes out, there are so many people making trouble, which is quite annoying. Some authors will be affected by these arguments. I personally accept it with or without a male protagonist. Some authors are not good at writing emotional dramas, so they don't need male protagonists. Some authors have no problem writing emotional dramas, so why not want male protagonists? Emotions are also life experiences. So I don't want the author to be affected, but to affect us from reading good articles and seeing the complete story in the author's mind. In addition, I found that the results of novels without male protagonists were not as good as those with male protagonists. There are only a few authors who write articles about cultivating immortals. No matter how bad the results are, it will affect the author's writing even more! Therefore, I feel that whether or not there is a male protagonist should be determined by the author's writing situation and plot, and should not be threatened by readers. If there is a male protagonist, then you will not read it. There are fewer people than normal people who won't watch a movie if there is a male protagonist. After all, men and women eat and drink. . . Don't like to quarrel. If you don't like it, please don't leave a message. .

Ask, is there a cp? (If it's ambiguous, don't dare to read it)

Let's have a male protagonist. It's a long road to immortality. What's the point of practicing alone all day long? Wouldn't it be better to have a teammate who can support you and a lover who can trust each other? Wouldn't it be much more interesting to have a male protagonist, a strong man and a strong woman, to explore and hunt for treasure together, to experience and upgrade? Anyway, in my opinion, the female protagonists in fairy tales have never been alone. They either have friends or spiritual pets around them. These male protagonists can all work part-time, and they can be just tools with no affection! There are so many beautiful articles like Mengshi! ! !

Nice! Nice! Good looking! Peas are still suitable for writing articles about cultivating immortals! Not enough

Currently in Chapter 33, I am a little speechless. The heroine is looking for a sword stone to enter the formation that can only be opened by the blood of her junior brother. Doesn't it mean that this thing was left to him by someone's family? Or was it caused by someone in the family running out of blood? Even if it was discovered later that it was not the case, now the heroine doesn't know, she took someone else's things and she still wants to die without saving him? What kind of cause and effect will make you unlucky and ungrateful? And with this setting, if saving people would also bring bad luck to the monks, then we can only let them die without saving them? Then if there is any disaster, should we just sit on the wall and watch mortals die? I really can't understand the rules of cause and effect in this world!

Looks great, cheers for the peas (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

So what kind of article is this? It's fine with or without CP, but I can't accept being ambiguous without CP. Is there anyone who can clear things up?

I think this book is generally passable, but I think the biggest flaw is why can I fight with monks in the integration stage by practicing qi? Is the union period fake? 😥 Everything else is okay.

I originally thought it would be worth a look, but some of the logic is confusing and I can't stand it. The logic of age is a bit confusing. Is it only a few hundred years old to cultivate into a body? There is some confusion between the level of cultivation and the level of combat effectiveness. How about a small amount of Qi training to fight against the combination? My hair was burned off by fire - is it still bald after more than a month? Wait, wait, wait, even though it's fictitious, there still needs to be some common sense and logic.

The author is probably suitable for writing about cultivating immortals. It's really beautiful

It's pretty good-looking. I like this kind of heroine who is strong in her own right. She doesn't necessarily have to be a cp practitioner. It's not a fairy romance.

Regarding cp, just don't write about it. It's totally meaningless. If you're strong, you'll be testing the male lead. If you're weak, you'll be saving the male lead all day long. It'll almost become a male lead story. It's not as good as that. Love only lasts for a moment, and there's a lot of chicken feathers behind it. Besides, cultivating immortals is a lot of seclusion.

The friendship of friends practicing together and forming a team is also quite difficult to grasp, but the writing is a bit plastic and too superficial. It's not just a matter of enthusiasm. This kind of relationship didn't last long. There were a few people who couldn't talk to each other with different personalities. There was no story background and not much writing. A very empty brotherhood suddenly appeared. Everyone went up the mountain of swords and the sea of ​​​​fire together, and I felt that my IQ also dropped. Friendship in times of need does not need to be given too much to be counted on two hands, and it also needs plot to expand and intersperse it with a steady stream of water. There is no need to write too much about this kind of plastic friendship between small characters. I think this is the failure of this article. Then it happened to be stuck here on the shelf, and I didn't really want to read it. Everything else is just floating clouds. The key is that the plot is compact and there is a story. There doesn't need to be too much emotion, but it must be interspersed (too much will be pretentious). The plot must be compact and make people anxious to read the next chapter.

The stone Buddha is so cute. Did he come out with the heroine?

Alas, looking at the back, I can't stand it anymore. . . Goodbye

The heroine likes to comment and complain in her heart and has great mood swings. She is really not like the swordsman who proved the Tao through killing in her previous life 😭

Today I saw a comment. Someone said why should I? The message in the comment circle was deleted. After that, the person said a lot of swear words and cursed people. Let me explain it to you now? ? ? ? ? Some people are really boring and have no quality. Just like I commented on a message, some people came in to take a look, like it, and then canceled it after a while. After a while, they liked it again, and canceled it again. Every time I open the starting point, when I listen to the novel, I will see someone like and comment, but when I open it and read it, they like it. After a while, they cancel it, which is really inexplicable. Then I delete the message directly. I opened Qidian today and saw that someone had sent a lot of replies and said a lot of curse words. Then they asked me why I deleted this comment. It happened to be 1:19 in the morning. Let me explain it to you? ? ? ? ? ?

This is a harem story where a bunch of men lick the heroine and I'm convinced

I feel that the heroine has an unlikable personality. I would say that she is too cold and will not save her until death. I would say that she is paralyzed and has a lot of psychological activities. She only saves people for profit. She is always inconsistent and logically confused. There is a huge contrast in personality. The character is not very likable. I think the supporting characters are more flexible.

Too broken! If you don't look at it, it's over.

A very good novel about cultivating immortals. I give it five stars.

Ah, I always feel like I missed a chapter. Qiu Yuebai also traveled through time?

Although there are some missing chapters, it's okay, it's pretty good.

I jumped to read it, but the plot is actually pretty good. The biggest surprise is probably that this is obviously a BG fairy tale, but it insists on inserting a BL plot...