Xianlu Xianxiu

A Xian is so cute, I love A Xian (｡･ω･｡) The characters in this article are very plump, and have cute attributes, and their IQ is online. The heroine is big, smart and strong, and she is strong with reason and does not rely on golden fingers. The setting of Sister Ming as Goldfinger is very interesting, and A Xian's experience is also in line with the experience of normal people. In short, it makes people look relaxed and interesting. Support the author greatly ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

I have read 90 chapters and overall it is pretty good. It is a rare book about family harmony. The main family members are not frivolous, not pretentious, and not burdensome. Currently, the heroine's character is not like a virgin. I hate seeing the heroine, the virgin, looking for trouble to push the progress of the article.

Should you check it after you finish writing it? Didn't your editor check it for you if there were too many words or too few typos? Don't you check it yourself? Still have the problem of misnomer? For example, what I am reading now is "catching up with 99% of people." What you want to say is exceeding 99%. Catching up means catching up, and catching up means exceeding! I really can't distinguish these words, so I can just write "exceeded", which is better than what I am doing now. I feel like I just want to improve my literary level and the result is a mess. There is another thing that can only be described two or three times. There is really no need to say it again every time something happens. Taking a medicinal bath has been repeated countless times! {"NickName":"Ledger No. 3","UserId":227186620}

I really like this setting, please go to the author＾0＾~

It's well written and I like it very much. I hope you won't stop updating it.

I saw 142. I stayed up all night watching it and felt a little disappointed. The following is purely a reflection after reading. Maybe because the author didn't want to give the heroine too many golden fingers, he gave all the golden fingers to her relatives. But so far, I really feel that the heroine is particularly weak, both in terms of character and legal battle. Perhaps the character is intended to be a sinister one? Calm? Still? I feel that the characters are not as vivid as her sister. Secondly, in magic fighting, the swordsmanship is not good, and the physical fitness is not good. It is obviously the extremely pure fire and wood dual spiritual roots. There are two groups of fire, but it is almost impossible to use. It is obviously the wood spiritual root. At present, it does not reflect the wood spiritual roots at all, and it has no affinity with plants at all. Even in the bow and arrow she is best at, she has no clue what her strength is. Is she capable of double-shooting or what? The description of fighting scenes is indeed a weakness of many female protagonists. I didn't come here with any hope. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not waste such a good beginning.

The family setting is very warm, and other settings are normal, but the heroine is particularly fond of swordsmanship. She has been practicing physical training since she was a child, but she took the path of law cultivation and became a master of alchemy. It took her four years to learn the sword skills. I hope the author can take the main line of the heroine into consideration. She has learned everything and has everything, which will inevitably give people the feeling of cheating. Something must be given up.

So the purpose of this novel is to write that the heroine is an ordinary person cultivating immortality. She doesn't have so many golden fingers, so the heroine's opportunities and roles are given to Shi Xing? ? ? ? Even the eldest sister has a more three-dimensional image than the heroine, so what kind of heroine is she? ? ? ?

This book is quite good, but its downfall is that the heroine is too unprogressive in the early stages. She is so talented, but she thinks it would be better if she didn't have spiritual roots, so she wouldn't have to practice immortality. I read this book half a year ago and was attracted by the lack of a male protagonist. However, after reading a few chapters, I gave up because I disliked the heroine's lazy character. Recently, there was really no book to read, so I had the patience to read it again. Before The first thirty chapters are devoted to the heroine's unwillingness to make progress and fish in troubled waters, and there is a lot of procrastination and nonsense. After chapter 30, it finally gets on the right track, and the heroine's mentality begins to change. God knows how difficult it was before chapter 30. There are no male protagonists, and there are too few stories about women who don't enslave themselves as concubines, so I can only endure it. Fortunately, after chapter 30, it is still satisfactory.

I think the current literature on cultivating immortals is a bit extreme. Either the heroine is given a golden finger to make the readers doubt their life. Or no benefit will be given to the heroine at all. I'm afraid that readers will say that the heroine is given a golden finger. But isn't it just for the benefit of you to experience and hunt for treasure? Of course it will make the heroine feel aggrieved if there is no benefit at all.

It's too verbose, and there are so many typos. I tried it several times when I was short of books. The most I saw was the Ten Thousand Sects Test. Many of the settings in it were unreasonable and seemed quite awkward. The heroine's character was also lacking in a spirit of progress. Although she often said that she had thought clearly and woke up, she just set the flag and never saw her actually take action.

When I see it now, I feel that Shi Xing is more like the heroine. Mu Xin and the Snow Demon are all hers. There is a person who seems to be reborn and knows her but not Shi Xian. That is, there was no such person as Shi Xian in the previous life, and Shi Xing is in the same situation as the heroine. Although I also like family harmony, Shi Xing has too many scenes. Now I see Shi Xing fall into the ancient demon, and then want to transform into a demon cultivator, what do I think? ? ? Isn't this usually the heroine's role?

The author's writing style and conception are very good, but when writing a novel, there must be priorities and priorities, and there must be trade-offs. Describing everything in detail without priorities makes the reader very tired. Although the lengthy description is still better than many hydrology, I hope it can be improved and a lot of unnecessary descriptions will be deleted.

As an old bookworm, I give this work a thumbs up. I have read a lot of books on cultivating immortality and cultivating the truth. After reading too many books, I will never leave them. There are all kinds of adventures, all kinds of cheats, and after one map is finished, another map is opened, a bit like an old lady's foot wrap. Although this work is indispensable for various routines and cheats, the heroine has an independent personality. From being too lazy to practice at the beginning, to being moved by her family to practice; she cooperates with the tsundere second sister, and the sisterly love is deep, until the second sister is murdered, the heroine strives for revenge; from the excitement of apprenticeship to the daily life of master and disciple despising each other, practicing separately with the eldest sister, caring for each other and supporting each other, it is really a good work worth watching.

I have read more than 200 chapters, and the plot is not compact and a bit repetitive. The heroine is still drifting in the Qi training period. She is still eight or nine years old. She rarely writes about training. After gaining the power of the sword, she ignores the battlefield and writes about the rights and wrongs caused by various conflicts. The heroine is currently very obsessed with the character, she may want to take advantage of everything, but she can't express it! Come on!

Xiantu has been publishing books for a while, and Benzi first helped his friends to get rid of the poison. ①The front of this book is a bit long-winded, with a lot of background and foreshadowing. Some cuties suggest reading it in a hurry (◔◡◔). There is also the fact that the heroine does not want to become an immortal. For some readers, it is more discouraging because the heroine seems pretentious, so you can choose to ignore it. After all... This is a novel about cultivating immortality. If you don't cultivate... This article is over. ʘᴗʘ ② Regarding the age issue, please don't worry about it anymore! When the heroine was a few months old, the eldest sister Shilou left the sect when she was seven years old, and then (almost five years) did not come back until five years later! ! ! ! There is an interval of four years and a few months in between (it is difficult to write four years and a few months in the book. Five years are summarized, but the date or time is added. The setting is like this, please don't worry about it anymore●^●.) Back at Shi's house, the heroine still has a few days to turn five years old, (the spiritual root is measured at the age of five), so it is called under five years old. ③Because the heroine is a time traveler, there will be some complaints about the past life in the early stage. It is just a setting and will have little impact on the later stage. If you don't accept it, you can skip it directly. General: The author has limited writing and brainpower, so he cannot do it perfectly, he can only write as well as possible. Thank you to the readers who have been following the update for their tolerance and support. This book will learn, revise, improve and improve. Stay updated and see you next time on Detox.

It's so long-winded. An entry exam requires fifty or sixty chapters.

It's an advantage that the author writes the female protagonists of the heroine's family well. After all, the good friends in other heroine novels are all men, and the women are basically all against the heroine. But why did the level of female cultivators in the outside world drop so much all of a sudden? Either he is stupid or Bai Lianhua, but I haven't seen the author lower the quality of the male supporting actor? People of the same age, such as the son of the clan leader named Xing, and the second son of the city lord from another state, are all described in a positive light, but as for the female supporting characters, the daughter of Elder Jindan of the sect, and the two daughters of the Yu family, these are all standard templates for female villain villains, right? Willfulness, stupidity plus white lotus

To be honest, every time this heroine makes herself greedy, she relies on various chances and coincidences to survive instead of relying on herself. She feels too weak and has no bright spots compared with some of the proud women of the same period.

The beginning is indeed unusually long-winded, with a lot of explanations and a lot of reflections. Almost three-quarters of it is just like this. I quickly flipped through it to see how the story progressed. . I hope there will be a distinction between priorities later and it won't be so hard to read. I'll comment later. .

Seeing now, I imagine what the second sister will look like when she grows up, dressed in red, holding a red whip, with a violent personality, but not reckless, arrogant, but not pampering. The author's characters are very plump so far. I couldn't stand it at first because the heroine's father had three wives. For me, if it is ancient times, I can accept it, as long as the plot is good, but for cultivating immortals, this is still the setting. I am a little uncomfortable until I see the heroine. My father was inherited from the family, and my mistress and two aunts were able to be protected and practice well. I was immediately interested. At least it wasn't some bullshit love story that I had to do with him. Under such circumstances, I stopped watching it. What I like about it is that the family atmosphere is very good, and there are no messy fights. Everyone has their own characteristics and personality. I still like the role of the second sister very much.

It's good-looking, I really like the family atmosphere of the heroine and the deep relationship between brothers and sisters. It's really hard to understand why the family is still not cool after fighting in the nest every day. I give you all the recommendation votes. Come on, keep updating. I'm so tired of chasing articles 😅 Don't you consider updating in the new year?

I don't know why the subsequent plot is not interesting to watch. I can't stand it anymore. I always thought the previous plot was quite good. Even the current plot can probably be guessed. Shi Xian saved the ancestor and then participated in the selection of the successor to Zhongtian Shenfeng. He succeeded, but now he is still far away from the latter part. Maybe it's because of this that it's not interesting to watch. , It's not that the plot set by the author is not good, it's just that the middle part feels a bit bland and even a bit delayed. 🤭 Now I am not interested in the subsequent plots, such as when to meet Shixing, when to meet the master, when to go to the outside world, and when to go to the Zhongyuan world. However, I am more interested in meeting the Shi family in the Zhongyuan world. It's also possible that I've read too many Shuang articles. These are all my personal opinions. Don't criticize me🙏🏻

I think that before the time and space fragments overlap, Shi Xian's second sister is the original heroine, Ming Shenghua is the reborn heroine, and Shi Xian is the heroine of this book.

None of the villains in this book stand up, they all have no brains and are not interesting to watch.

The setting is quite good, but don't keep talking about how the heroine traveled through time... It feels like the characters are not integrated with the world in the book. There are also some things that are not good to reveal too early, such as the heroine's family. It would be boring to reveal too much. You have to take your time so that the growth of the woman and her family is interesting... But the whole book is still very good, otherwise I would not say this. . Come on, author!

I want to know if the heroine's weapon is a bow and arrow? That person has so many tricks on her but is still aiming at the useless thing of drawing the bow? I can understand the author's desire not to follow the popular trend, but we must also consider the actual situation. If you shoot an arrow, others can use it dozens of times. The higher the level of cultivation, the more emphasis is on speed, and the attack range of arrows is a point, which is particularly easy to avoid. The attack range of other weapons is a line, which can be fired many times instantaneously. The aura of the immortal world can be released, so there is no long-range attack weakness, so it makes sense for the sword to be the king of weapons. . .

Because of the limited exemption, I entered the pit early and started reading. The progress is almost 200 chapters, and I have just entered the sect and became a disciple. So far, the protagonist's driving force for cultivating immortality is very vague. It is neither looking for his own path, thinking about the big issues of spirituality in life, nor digging for clues along the "truth" that must be explored. Let's talk about the current main and branch lines: returning to the family is a bit far away for the time being. In addition, there are the lines of the Demon Emperor, the line of Life Fire, and the lines of the lost ancestors - in fact, there are many long-term goals, but there are almost no short-term goals. Cultivation is more like a natural thing given to the protagonist by the environment. The protagonist looks like a little lamb raised by exam-oriented education. He answers the questions blankly, and even if he gets into a good school, he doesn't know what to do after he gets in. I think it is a pity that the biological mother's illness did not make her determined to study alchemy from the beginning. In contrast, the eldest sister is more subjective and proactive. Finally, I would like to praise the author. He put a lot of effort into the creation and wrote a lot about the settings. It is relatively large and detailed, and the environmental imagination is quite good.

I like this book. This makes me want to read it in one breath. I hope the author can update it more. 🙂

I don't know when I will be able to write about the battlefield outside the territory. It feels like it has been laying the groundwork for a long time... And that extremely cold place is really suitable for Shilou to go to.