The Female Partner Said She Was Very Innocent

I think this book is very good, but the ranking doesn't seem to be very good... I have read a lot of them at Qidian, but abandoned them all. This is the only one I have finished recently.

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The writing is actually very good and the story line is good, but I always felt that after the male protagonist appeared, I really didn't want to read it. The author has said who the male protagonist is before. I feel that the relationship between the heroine and the hero is unfair. You obviously cannot feel feelings. Although I feel that there will be feelings later, I just feel very weird and feel distressed about this emotional line.

I have read this article for a few days. Let me talk about my feelings about it. I can only say that this article is very simple, not that profound, and not too winding. There are many things wrong with this article written by the author. It is understandable if you are writing an article for the first time. If you have read more complicated immortal cultivation articles, you may not think it is very powerful. However, I like the setting of this article very much. I still prefer July. This article is the kind of article with two female protagonists, which is better. There are also Taoist companions in the book, but this article is not very detailed about fighting. There are only a few sword moves and spells. It is not dazzling at all, wonderful, and does not have that immersive, grand and majestic feeling. The description of this article is really a bit brief. I read it because I like the setting of this article. Sword cultivation is not the old routine of useless spiritual roots and house fights. The biggest shortcoming is that the writing is not very mature. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on! ! !

It's really well written. The author should be the kind of person with a simple mind. Simple.

This movie was recommended to me by others. I saw that many people's reviews said it wasn't very good. I don't know why, but I've already finished the second review! I think it's very good among the novels about cultivating immortals. The sense of CP is not very strong, and the overall heroine is still very good.

I haven't used the Qidian APP for a long time, and the book coins are all gone I can only buy three chapters by saving coins every day (´;ω;｀) Come on, author! (≧∇≦)B

It's pretty cool, keep updating, thank you so much

The following are the comments of some Baidu netizens (of course I agree with them): I am really too bookish to hold back my discomfort while reading this. I really can't stand it anymore and I'll be so angry that I'll vomit blood if I watch it again. After all, she is a female major studying fairy literature. It is written as if the male cultivator would die without the male cultivator, and every time there is trouble, the male cultivator comes to the rescue. There was also a little girl who was rubbing her head with one hand and I looked really irritable. Even good men find this girl interesting and lovable, and want to protect her. The descriptions of every male character in the scene are very ambiguous, and there is a sense of déjà vu that the emotional line will develop at any time.       ，，，，500，， . I couldn't stand it after reading more than 20 chapters. They said it was fetal transfusion and she was a second-generation cultivator, but she turned out not to be a second-generation cultivator at all and had no common sense about cultivation. Could it be that her Nascent Soul parents were just showing off? I really can't stand raising him like a normal child before he is five years old. Fortunately, there are so many people recommending it 😪 The heroine's character is so thin, it goes back and forth like, I don't know that I am the most beautiful in the world, I practice hard, I was rescued when something happened, and you all like me, but now it's gone, it's like she was carved from a mold, and the sense of empathy is really low I feel that the author's writing style is not very good, and the description is too thin. I read this novel mainly for the heroine Fuguhara. The beginning of the novel starts from a young age. She has a superior family background and high talent. It suits my taste in reading novels. But later, when I entered the sect, I had to go to a declining Wanjian Sect... I actually found it quite confusing. Afterwards, the heroine realized what kind of Tao and various sword intentions after just building a foundation~? But these can be ignored. Before the heroine Jindan Lei Jie, this novel was still okay. But later on, it was written that the heroine was the heroine of the senior brother's calamity, and then passed it inexplicably. Anyway, I didn't understand this mysterious plot. Secondly, I personally think that this novel is like a chronicle, and the description of fighting is almost meager... I also thought it was quite embarrassing, but the plot was quite interesting, so I continued reading. What I am most confused about is that you know that the opponent is so much better than you, but you still want to go up? Especially the ending of the main text. I jumped to read it. Isn't that why I'm looking for death?

I think you should do some repairs in the early stage if you have time... First, the protagonist is the legitimate daughter of the Ye family. Even if her father is worried that she will be coveted by giving too many resources, she shouldn't give it to her to save her life. If she does, I think the heroine will be useless when facing monsters and evil cultivators... If it is to lure Luo Chuan or understand the sword's intention, it is really too abrupt. The second point is to understand the sword intention and break through the eighth level of Qi training. It describes very palely that I don't want to die and then breaks through... The writing here is weak. I think it is difficult for readers to empathize with just these few sentences. It is too weak.

I read it because the author's rating was high. As a result, whether the writing is good or not seems to have nothing to do with the rating. I'm so disappointed.

I looked at the first 20 or so pictures and it really made me feel aggrieved. As the legitimate daughter of two high-level monks and a big family, no matter how much her father reduced her resources, I didn't see what her father gave her at all. The early training resources did not show that she had to fight for what her father gave her. As the legitimate daughter of a big family, she needs life-saving means but not life-saving means, and a protector without a protector. Even if you are a big family, there is no support point there. However, if your child wants to go home, and you are a legitimate daughter of a big family, a big family of cultivators, you have to rush back when you go home. There is no support at all, and no money. Your big family is just a decoration, and you, the patriarch, are useless. I originally read the book quite mindlessly, but the more I read, the more frustrated I became. The more I read, the more frustrated I became. You might as well just dress up as an orphan.

I wish all the cuties a happy Dragon Boat Festival, and all the cuties in the college entrance examination can achieve good results! Come on! Remember to eat rice dumplings (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و

Apart from the fact that the title of the book is tasteless and irrelevant, the more I read, the more exciting it becomes. Regardless of friendship or family, there is love. The plot is also very compact. Love it, love it.

Emm, this is the only one I saw at that time that got along well with the heroine. The comment section used to be like this.

The setting is very attractive, but there are also a lot of bugs. The heroine is the fairy N generation of a big family, but the family seems to have never taught the heroine anything, not even basic common sense. The heroine is very talented, so it doesn't matter if she goes to Wanjian Sect to learn swordsmanship, but what is the setting of this sect? It's good to treat everyone equally and start from the outer sect, but when a five- or six-year-old child is recruited, he doesn't teach anything about throwing away the Qi Entrainment Technique and just ignores it?

Help, I read this book in the second grade of junior high school. I still like it now that I am in the second grade of high school. I originally read it on QQ Reading and I really liked it. I read more than 1,700 chapters six times without skipping. Then when I downloaded the book review from the starting point, no one liked it. Please, what's going on?

It takes two years to practice one level of Qi in one night and four in two years? What are you doing? When did Tianlinggen advance so slowly?

It's really unreasonable, you're a genius girl from everyone! At the very least, you need to have a strong character, right? Moreover, it is untenable to say that you are afraid of being remembered after revealing your wealth. Who is short-sighted and dares to kill the genius descendant of a cultivator for a little entry-level gadget? Aren't you afraid of being hunted down by Nascent Soul Overhaul? Are there really any Nascent Souls and Transformation Gods that care about things during the Qi Refining Period? 🤔🤔

I like the books written by Wandou Da very much. I have read every book. This book is the best. It is a traditional fairy tale, one step at a time. The female protagonist also grows up slowly, and the male protagonist has very little space.

A novice cultivator from a big family, she has the aura of being a heroine. . . Invincible, not good-looking

The characters are okay and the story is good, but the layout is too small and the writing is poor.

It feels like a child playing house, the logic is a little confusing, the plot is a bit taken for granted, it vomits blood at every turn, is teased at every turn, and encounters scumbags at every turn. It is like a campus ethics drama in the skin of a fairy, which is a bit childish, but it is still okay to watch to kill time. The only thing about the whole film is that it cannot delve into various relationships and rationality, and the rest is gone.

The best cultivator I have ever seen in a female video. Although there are many shortcomings, there are no big peeing spots in the whole process. It's just that the progress of the plot and the strength of the heroine are too confusing. The heroine's cultivation is sometimes fast and sometimes slow, and her strength is high and low. Also, in the recent plot, the Sword Sect disciples were a little too forceful and stupid! At any rate, he is hundreds or thousands of years old.

Guys, this is the author's early work. Whose early work will be perfect? ? ? ? ?

I think Ye Zhiyao is the legitimate daughter of the Ye family, so there's no need to look like this, right? I always feel like she is an orphan, and Yejia and his wife are just foils, come on, author! 😊😄

This book is actually quite good. Although it is the author's first book, it is a bit immature and some pitfalls have not been filled in yet. However, the imagination and writing style are not bad. I especially like the heroine's character. She is neither stupid nor a virgin nor a nymphomaniac. She has a positive outlook on things and silently works hard to fight against fate. It is quite good.

How should I put it? I randomly searched it on the website and thought it looked very good when I looked at it. Now it looks a bit unsatisfactory. This book is really like Bai Yueguang in my memory. I will never forget that the heroine is very tough and not shady. At that time, female videos were like a breath of fresh air. I was really shocked when I read it. This type of writing will never go out of style, but if you look closely now, you will find that there are some loopholes in the logic of the worldview. If there were no such problems, I would definitely regard this book as a classic in my mind. Although there are more or less problems, I will never stop being a fan of it. After all, this is a huge progress in my reading of literature. It has built up my three views to a certain extent and allows me to continue to make progress. I hope the author can also write better works, my Bai Yueguang! ! !

It's really good to read. I liked this book when I was in elementary school, and I still like it in middle school. It can be said that this is the first enlightenment book for me to read about female supporting characters cultivating immortality. And the writing is super beautiful. I don't know why so many people commented that they don't like it, but I still hope that those who want to read it will continue to read it 😭😭

The main characters were all matched up in the end. High-end version of romance novels.