The Time-Traveling Fairy Is Not Easy to Mess With

The author's writing is getting better and better than the first one. Great.

The more I write, the better it gets, absolutely amazing! The strong always stay strong

I discovered that in novels about cultivating immortals, relatives who are good to the heroine will always die in shame. What is this to highlight? Grandpa Silly Ya doesn't want to read it even after the patriarch is dead. There are too many such novels about cultivating immortals without family affection, so I don't want to read this type anymore.

If you don't have CP, just look at which ones are cultivating immortals and needing to take care of their families! . Speechless.

I can't practice properly, I'm always fighting with the Nascent Soul Spirit Transformation, and there's no one else who can't get past this level.

After reading more than 20 chapters, it didn't feel like a fairy tale as I imagined. It felt like a daily house fight. I felt that the protagonist's speech and style were a bit childish. The pace in the early stages was too slow, and it was hard to watch when the main text started. 😭😭😭

The content of this chapter is a bit too watery, which is unnecessary. The little girls who were trafficked have too much inner drama. They are only six years old. The protagonist is written to be more mature and excusable. Those few may not appear again and the supporting characters should not have so many scenes. The plot should be speeded up as soon as possible. Their backers are the Yun family. So-and-so, and then use power for personal gain, and then come out to fight, it is much more exciting than this. In the end, it can't be solved, and then the old man comes out to solve it, and then the protagonist becomes disappointed with the Yun family. Don't approach Lao Yun so early. After all, according to the paper strength you wrote, the protagonist is fifth in the Yun family. Okay, let's talk about so many problems. You can see for yourself.

Stunning, generous, motivated

Self-reliant, decisive, fearless of hardships, beautiful and kind.

This weird family still kills each other. The six-year-old child fights and kills each other. The clan rules are unity and friendship. Who are you laughing at? The clan leader is also a novice in terms of management skills. It's so fake that the clan leader's order can be stolen by a child. . . . . A lot of this book has no logic, it's written too casually, and it doesn't work without worldview and plot logic. Does the author know what a noble family is? It's still a family with inheritance, but they don't have basic etiquette and virtues.

Is the heroine a rat spirit? I hope it's a powerful rat, like the Void Rat God Horse

Don't let the trolls mislead you. It may be a little unsatisfactory in the early stage, but it will definitely be awesome in the later stage. I am here to show off my skills and I will never lie to you. Wangjiajing

After reading Chapter 50, I wonder if the heroine's mind has degenerated along with her six-year-old body? He talks, acts and thinks like a real child. This is the author's writing style. He won't wait for the protagonist to grow up and the character will still be like this.

It's a pity to be raised by this grandpa. Geniuses should have a genius' way of growing up, instead of hanging among ordinary people and comparing their cultivation speed with ordinary people every day.

It's very interesting, I like it, but the number of words is too few.

Watching a female video for the first time. . . Is this a young adult novel? It's too cliche. . .

The setting of this novel is quite good, and the heroine is very talented, but it's not suitable for me who likes to read cool novels. Goodbye👋🏻

It looks good, and it's getting better and better. When the fox comes out and the Yun family prospers, does it start from taking it back from Yuncheng?

Can the conflict between the female supporting character and the female protagonist not be caused by jealousy of a male supporting character? The situation is too small. It cannot be caused by a dispute between Dao, Dao and Demon, a struggle for interests, etc.

I think the story is pretty good. I've read some of it and it's quite interesting.

It looks good. Can anyone recommend a similar book?

Can you give Shaya a normal name? Even though she is stupid, don't call her Silly Ya directly. If others laugh at her and call her Silly Ya, forget it. The heroine and her grandfather are so good to her, so it's not appropriate to call her Silly Ya! Even when the heroine couldn't speak, she resisted and didn't want to be called Chunhua. Didn't she ever think that it was weird for her to call her Silly Sister here?

What type is it and has anyone tried it?

Why should I delete my book review? My book reviews have all been deleted. I didn't comment anything bad!

Can't we change the name? No matter what your personality is, people with the surname Silly are really sick (๑>؂<๑)

Very good. Why hasn't it been updated yet? ! ! ! !

Yes, I like the leader's works more and more! !

Same as above, I would like to ask, did the fox appear and the Yun family prosper when they were brought back from Yuncheng?