On from Genius to Power

Generally speaking, the golden finger of the heroine is too big and unreasonable. When she first enters the Mortal Realm, she has surpassed two levels and killed half a step of golden elixir. It is quite ridiculous. It feels a bit plot-heavy from the beginning. As soon as she reaches the Mortal Realm, she can see the heroine's powerful growth experience that has surpassed n levels in the long river of time. The writing style is quite immature and not very good. It is a very old Golden Finger. It is about a female protagonist who is able to block the killing of gods and Buddhas and kill Buddhas at the beginning. It is quite vulgar. When I looked at the title, I thought it was going against the routine 😂️😂️😂️. The plots of modern and ancient immortality writing are not clearly divided. It is neither modern nor ancient, which makes it awkward to read. It is said that the adventure experiences in modern novels are all based on ancient methods, and it is said that the ancient heroine is in junior high school again. The name of the realm of cultivating immortals is quite ridiculous. It makes people feel like they have eaten a fat man in one bite. The connection between realms is quite weak. Don't fight me, I'll fight you

I finished reading it. It's really good. Yaoyao is great. How come so few people have read such a good book?

The writing is really great. I can only read it in one word: refreshing - the logic is smooth, the world view is complete, the characters are rich, and the writing is smooth. These advantages are combined to form this really excellent and beautiful book. The author is great, and the female channel is amazing because of you.

I can't figure it out. This novel is better than many male videos. Why is the score so poor? ? ?

I wanted to ramble on again, but in order not to take up the space for everyone to read the book, I won't write it in the author's words. I have received a lot of encouragement from my children when I wrote the book, and my support to this day is inseparable from all of you little cuties. I would like to give you a thank you first~ In fact, what inspired me today was when I saw an author being sprayed with blood when he asked for advice, but he still said thank you. I may be more emotional, so I feel emotional easily. A big taboo in writing cool articles is that the author is enjoying himself when writing cool articles, but the readers have no idea what they mean. I am also afraid of encountering this, so I posted a comment today as a long-term opinion collection post. Everyone can comment below and provide opinions (it can also be regarded as learning from the author and gradually throwing away the glass heart) Everyone can comment on the smoothness of the article, the speed of the pacing, and the plot and characters. If you have any suggestions that can be learned, I will study hard! Thank you to every baby who has accompanied and supported me~ Looking forward to growing up together~

It's really super pretty! ! I searched for a lot of stories about strong women and finally found one that I like! Love it so much!

This, this, this kid is so powerful, his thinking and writing skills are so sophisticated. Looking forward to your next book, All roads lead to Rome. Such a powerful kid will succeed no matter what, come on💪💪💪!

It is recommended that the label should be written as modern cultivation. If I saw modern cultivation, I would definitely not waste my time. It took me reading a few chapters to realize that it was modern cultivation. It was a waste of time.

The textual expressions written by modern cultivators range from ancient to modern, nondescript... And every time I see various psychological descriptions, I'm like, give it to me, damn it! Give it to me, town! I was so embarrassed that I wanted to ask Mr. Lu Xun to scream and wash my eyes. The setting is good, but the writing and character design are really... Ah. The female protagonist is too pretentious, and she has not mastered the degree of pretentiousness and slaps in the face. It feels like too much is too much, and the psychological description also has a feeling of the ancient male protagonist killing Matt... Who can tell me whether the author's character writing has improved after writing it? It's over a hundred chapters... Otherwise I wouldn't be able to keep going...

Shui, tell me, if you remove the female protagonist, would it be a novel full of men? There aren't many female supporting characters like that, and some of them are vicious, isn't it?

All races, cultivating immortals, quickly passing through the elements, love it, love it. Male videos like Ten Thousand Races, female videos like From Genius to Might 👍

Written by a high school student? Are children so powerful now?

I have a bold idea. Author, are you going to participate in the Tokyo Olympics😂

I just discovered this novel recently and have just read more than 200 chapters. As a young author's first novel, I feel that it has surpassed the level of most online articles I don't know how the follow-up development will be. From the chapters I have read so far, I feel that the author is very diligent in completing the creation and can also be very active in facing readers' suggestions. I hope the author will work hard to write better works.

This book is really great! I finally found a heroine who is more passionate than Wei Zi. This is the real female channel for cultivating immortals! Love it! ! ! Come on Ning Yao

Damn, I don't like Xia Xinzhou very much. . .

Yaoyao Juejuezi, why isn't it popular? This book can be a god to me! I really praised Yaoyao, the real Juezi, whether he was decisive in killing or smiling and sinister, it really touched my heart, and the character and image were all very well created, and his IQ was online. It's rare to see a book without any surprises. It's very satisfying in every aspect, and the author's writing style is also good, and the logic is relatively rigorous. Almost all the pitfalls have been filled in. The setting of the small world in the river of time really surprised me. It's really amazing. It's really novel. The heroine has a star in her heart. Hai, the changes in the mood along the way are also very interesting. Various storylines are deeply rooted in people's hearts. Yaoyao's performance in the battlefield is really exciting. She is so sassy. She fought against all races, killed half of the geniuses of all races, and also made all races play around, fooling them into innovation. When I watched Yaoyao fooling them, I really laughed. I was moved when I rushed into the ranks of the Ten Thousand Races to save Mr. Qu. That kind of emotion touched me, and the national righteousness was also very good. The protection of the soldiers in the battlefield made the human race stable. It was also in this environment that the Taoist heart of the heroine Chen Sheng was buried in the world. The seeds have sprouted, and the heart of guardianship has been established, and she has also done a lot for the human race, playing chess for the human race, and fighting against all races for the human race. I will never forget the oath made by everyone in the Tianmen Army, "May the human race prosper and the human realm be eternal. May the fire of humanity be forever." "Burning forever" However, all this has become the past, when Xia Xinzhou pushed Ning Yao out for the sake of the human race, when Xia Xinzhou threatened Yaoyao's godfather, when Taoist Sansheng ignored her, when the people in the Holy Land whose bloodline was exposed wanted to kill her. , It all came to nothing, Ning Yao was disappointed, the guardian heart was broken, it was the human race who regarded her as an abandoned child. In fact, from the human race, Xia Xinzhou did nothing wrong, he had his own plans, but from Yaoyao's side, it was giving up, which was wrong. I really feel sorry for Yaoyao, but the author wrote it really well. I really blew this book away, Yaoyao is the eternal god! But why is it not popular?

The writing is very good and the layout is very large. It is different from other female cultivators who are too small-minded (complete book on cultivating immortals, transcending tribulations and ascending). Here is not only the world of cultivating immortals, but also the boundless sea of stars in thousands of worlds, and the heroine's long history (used for brushing copies). The heroine's ambitions and longing for the vast starry sky and the author's unique insights into the avenue are the highlights of this book. The only shortcoming is that the chapters are too short. I think the heroine's final path should be the combination of time, space, and stars (the deception in the introduction feels a bit unworthy of such a big pattern)

I also like this book very much. It is rare to encounter such a work that meets my expectations in all aspects. And I am not saying that it is plagiarism. As someone who has read The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Clans, I still want the author to explain it. From the acupoints to the ten thousand tribes to the realm battlefield to the killing of ten thousand tribes against the human race, as well as deception, smiling people and so on, they are all the same as The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Clans. Of course, I have not read many of them so far. The Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races is very popular. Many people have watched it, including girls. Naturally, those who have seen it will have some thoughts, so if there is a reason, I hope it can be explained. Well written book

En, this is a modern article about cultivating immortality. It is a modern article about cultivating immortality. It is a modern article about cultivating immortality. What I have been reading before is either the modern cultivation of immortality that few people know about, or the pure ancient cultivation of immortality. This really makes me unable to change.

Nice! Love watching! The world view is complete, the heroine is strong and cool, I support the author! There are a lot of foreshadowings, but these are all abandoned later. If you don't worry about these small foreshadowings, it looks pretty good. To be honest, this book can be written on a male channel, but such a good outline would probably be able to write 10 million words on a male channel

I like this book very much. I recommend it very much. The world view is very grand and novel. It seems to be the first book written by the author. My god, you are so talented. I, a bookworm of more than ten years, like this book very much. I feel like my eyes are shining. You must continue to write articles. I will collect all your future articles. Work hard! You are awesome!

The background of the catastrophe of all races? A plot about global martial arts?

I just read the entire book and it was very shocking. It was well written. I am a little embarrassed that I didn't read it at the starting point, so I will add 2000 points of recommendation. I hope the author will create better works.

Do any readers who have read it know what happened to the protagonist's brother? I just started watching it, but when I saw that the main character had a man in mind, I didn't want to continue watching. But the book title + introduction + chapter names are very attractive to me 😰

After reading it, I think the writing is really good. Although the dialogue is very immature in some places, most of the time it is good and the story line is very complete! And the combination of cultivating immortality and infinity is really nice!

I really liked it at first, but after joining the academy, I really couldn't understand it after a discussion. . .

I'm almost halfway through it. It's great! Come on, I like the world view very much, the characters and plot are not retarded (●'◡'●)

Now why is it so difficult to find a female protagonist with cp to practice immortal literature? I just want to see one with a male protagonist (of course it must be 1vs1), but the male protagonist has a low sense of presence! Why is it so difficult? Now I'm wondering if I should write one myself!

The previous plot of competing for spots on the Xingluo Stage was a bit broken, as the strength of this group of people differed greatly. Based on the heroine's cheating strength growth, the top-level combat power must be hundreds or thousands of times that of the bottom-level. How can such a huge gap be put into competition in the same venue? The writing of Human Race and Ten Thousand Races is also very messy. There is no causal relationship.