There Is a Cave in the Hut

The author of this book is a typical example of someone who reached the peak of his career when he debuted, and became increasingly miserable as he got worse. The first book "Becoming a Magic Stick in the Late Northern Song Dynasty" can only be said to be dry food with some characteristics, but the second book "The Legend of the Immortals of Time and Space in Six Dynasties" is well written, at least more than dry food, and for readers who suit the taste, it is just food. With a very good start and accumulation, according to this trend, there is a chance to become a god. At least in the Xianxia zone, becoming a mid-god is not a big problem. But with such a good foundation, the author never knows how to cherish it, and never knows how to correct his attitude - there are various typos in every book, and what's more, the protagonist's name is often wrong, and some problems in plot and character creation are not corrected. In addition, the author repeats that he has little innovation in every book, and the protagonist has not grown much. To make matters worse, Qidian has deleted several of his books. It has been suspected that this book has been sold out. It's really a pity. It can be seen as a typical example of how a professional/semi-professional Internet author fails.

When the author is developing in the early stage, he always hits the south wall with a confident face. It's not that you shouldn't fail in the early stage, but why you are so confident. Look at the early stage of the leader. He opens such a big golden finger, and he is absolutely sluggish before he develops.

It made me laugh. After a long time, I looked back and realized that the author finally couldn't bear to switch to his old profession. It was good to switch to my old profession and write about what I was good at, but I ended up making the same old mistakes again. A majestic true king, with so many disciples in his main field in Dongtian, was shot to death by random arrows from the imperial army. Hahahahahaha, what on earth do you, an immortal, have to do to cultivate your hair? It is better to become a high official, an emperor, and become a god after death. You are no better than the shameful true king you shot to death with a few arrows. I have read seven or eight books on Dragon Qi Liu Cultivation. Even if Jing Keshou admires the way of the emperor, in his setting, true kings and true immortals can still restrain each other from the imperial court. Otherwise, would this immortal cultivator come to be treated like a pig to be killed? He casually made up the evil spirits of human beings and the evil spirits of heaven, and the immortals would die with pus on their soles, sores on their brains, and no complete corpses?

Humanity comes first. I can't bear it. Your sister's master who has cultivated to become a human immortal can actually be killed by several muskets. I still won't read this book. Is this called cultivating immortals? This is called the Boxer Rebellion!

I have written fifteen or sixteen books for more than ten years, and only one of them is barely perfect. If you say it is underestimated, by whom? The market for readers is the fairest, and whoever writes well will be popular. The level of writing that has remained constant for more than ten years has become rigid and solidified. Now even Platinum is changing his writing style to keep up with the new era. As for his everlasting writing style, he can't write upgrading monster-killing novels, and he can't write classic ancient-style cultivation novels at this level. He will always write This kind of novel does not look like a novel about cultivating immortals. It is a disgusting person with a low force system. The immortal will be beaten to death by a few firearms. The character description is not full and no protagonist or supporting role can be remembered by the readers. If you don't pounce on it, who will pounce on it? I am confused. Anyone with a little brain will calm down and learn some new knowledge and open up new ideas to write in a different writing style, right?

The author's ideas are really different, and his concepts are really unconventional Volume 2 Chapter 42 The official selection of disciples, without screening, only selects problem children. This operation is 6 And don't warn me before giving it to the protagonist. There are so many good children. I chose this because I feel that their country is too united and there are too few bad people. The protagonist doesn't care about Zhang Mao's arrogance, "What can the Taoist teach them?" Repaying evil with kindness, a real talent. Today I ate heartbroken grass, future generations should not forget me

This book is hopeless. It was a little poisonous before, but the last two chapters where orphans take in disciples are extremely poisonous. The editor had better not recommend this book to me again. I'm sorry.

Does it feel like there are gods in the ruined temple in front?

No, is this author disgusting? Don't insult the word immortal when writing novels. Just change your so-called immortal realm to the bone refining realm. After all, you can be shot to death. Isn't it a good idea to make up your own realm? I'm not very good at it, and I insist on using the word porcelain fairy.

In mainstream novels, all kinds of gods can move mountains and fill seas, and they are omnipotent, but in the end, you are jumped to death by a gun. How about telling a joke? If you insist on going against the mainstream, no wonder your novel is so popular.

Xue Manlinzhong is one of the few writers who still writes about the flow of luck. The books he writes contain some disgusting plots, are not big in scope, and are seriously anti-intellectual. He always likes to compare monastics with technology, which is disgusting. I hope Qi Lunliu can still read books, it's not easy

The beginning is okay, but I hope the protagonist doesn't accept an apprentice. In this kind of novel, once you accept an apprentice, it is poisonous.

Directly persuade him to quit from the one who accepted the disciple. To be honest, I am considered a long-time reader of the author. Every time the author opens a book, I collect it and read it. The results are getting worse and worse. This time, it was a complete disappointment... I will never read another book by this author. Of course, the author definitely doesn't care about me as a reader, but I really want to advise the author. If you want to continue in this industry for a long time to support your family, you should reflect on it...

Hello everyone! I am a human being, and I was kidnapped by kidnappers at gunpoint. Whoever pays the kidnapper a ransom, I will teach him how to become an immortal. The kidnapper's Alipay: Dongguai Dongguai Dongdongguai

I have read too many of the author's books Personally I think there is a reason for the lack of popularity The hostility is getting stronger and stronger, and I am getting further and further away from the so-called Tao, and there are too many private goods It is natural to not be able to follow the Tao in all aspects Everyone takes the side door If you really follow your heart and have a less violent temper, you would have become a god long ago

You immortal is so worthless, you can even be killed by a musket! At any rate, if you use the word "fairy", just don't write about this realm! It's so embarrassing to watch😓!

At the beginning, it was said that the Age of Ending Dharma, the protagonist is a large sect with inheritance, the righteous path cannot be cultivated, and the left path still relied on luck to get a soul-nurturing jade. Then, all kinds of cows, ghosts and snakes appeared, bloodlines of gods and demons, human demons, isn't it the Age of Ending Dharma? Anyway, as long as the protagonist is practicing, all other great immortals will jump out. If you really want to persuade people to quit, you might as well concentrate on developing other worlds.

No wonder the results of so many novels are poor. It's not without reason. It's taken too much for granted. The author's knowledge is low and his vision is not good. He just insists on justifying himself. He is wrong and forced to explain. It is normal that he can't understand it.

I feel that the world of the Song Dynasty is no match for the modern world. The power system is too low. Ghosts, immortals and immortals can be killed with fire blunderbuss, and modern firearms are much stronger than in modern times. According to the combat effectiveness of real immortals in the book, an infantry squad armed with large-caliber firearms can kill real immortals without defense. The spirit fairy opens a cave and is attached to the spirit vein. An artillery battery can come over and blast it once to kill the spirit fairy. The cave heaven and blessed land of earth immortals and heavenly immortals cannot be moved, just like Zhenjun Qinghua, who was shot to death by an arrow. Under such circumstances, if a nuclear bomb is dropped on the earth and heaven, it will only lead to death. It can be said that there is no soil for cultivating immortals in the modern world. Without spiritual energy, immortals can only kneel in front of technology, because without spiritual energy, they cannot even replenish their mana. The spiritual energy is revived. According to the author's dragon energy theory, even the dragon energy of the Song Dynasty can defeat the immortals. The modern population and wealth far exceed those in ancient times. The dragon energy is at least dozens of times that of the Song Dynasty. Killing the immortals is like killing a pig. The modern plane government relies on the protagonist to deal with demonic disasters. I just want to laugh. Not even immortals can change a plane. If the demonic disaster is man-made, then the mastermind behind it must be far superior to the immortals. If it is not man-made, what can a mere fairy do as the protagonist? The most ridiculous thing is to teach martial arts to official personnel. Even ghosts and immortals can't stop a shot, let alone the so-called martial arts. Are guns useful? There is also the so-called Demon Hunter Guild. What kind of tricks are their powers? They are actually promoted as the vanguard to deal with demonic disasters. It is hard to say whether the demon hunters from all over the world can fight against a brigade of regular troops. This is not a world of high demons. How can such a weak group of superpowers unite and still want to perform government functions? To be honest, if the government wants to deal with the protagonist, it should not be too easy. Any battalion with heavy weapons can easily kill the protagonist. And the blessed land is connected to the earth. Even if the protagonist escapes to the Qinghua world, he has to rely on Maoshan to come back. If the troops surround Maoshan, the protagonist cannot even return to the modern world. The protagonist also looks down on technology and boasts about the ancient ways of cultivating immortals. To be honest, if cultivating immortals in other worlds represents advanced productivity, the protagonist's cultivating immortals represents backward productivity and can achieve nothing but immortality. In the modern world, what a large engineering team of several hundred people can do, whether the protagonist's earthly and heavenly beings can do it is a question.

This is the first time I've seen a triple-open one, nb

To be honest, the author's books have always been pretty good. Many people are criticizing how this setting is not good. In fact, this setting is much better than those fabricated Nascent Soul and Foundation Establishment. At least the author has a deep Taoist foundation. I also write fairy tale books, and many of the settings are based on Lin Zhongda's. In fact, according to the reality of ancient times, if there were real immortals, Lin Zhongda's settings are actually the most consistent. The Immortal, who gained immortality by eating his breath, shed his body, wandered towards the golden palace in the sky, and showed his diligence in the wonderful way. A bit of soul rested on the cave for immortality. This setting is also the closest to the immortal arts before the Southern and Northern Dynasties. When writing about ancient immortals, the most important thing is the ethereal fairy spirit. Lin Zhong also has all these things. Since I started writing, I have often read Lin Zhong's works. Many settings are inspiring to me. Until now, many of my readers have said that the books I wrote have a fairy spirit. In fact, they all draw on the settings of ancient books such as Lin Zhongda, Taoist Tiger, and Four Books. Moreover, I have always thought that most of today's immortal heroes are too impetuous, and rarely have the fairy style in Lin Zhongshu. Taoists and immortals should go deep into the mountains with gourds to pick Huangjing in spring and pine nuts in winter. Shi Fu Shui, Hong Taishang's orthodox teaching, saves the world.

In fact, I quite like the author's novels. Immortals have extraordinary power but are suppressed by human nature. Among the three realms of gods and immortals, human nature is the most critical and the most powerful. It is very consistent with reality. Throughout history, there are immortal kings who recruit "celestial soldiers and generals" to use magical powers to conquer the imperial army. In addition to the emperor of heaven, there are gods that the emperor cannot seal ( Even the Emperor of Heaven cannot be replaced), besides, immortals with powerful power are unstable factors. If no one can control it, the social order will not be chaotic. I am considered an old bookworm. In the novels I have read, the power of immortals is not proportional to their moral character and quality at all. Not to mention immortality, they don't even have basic qualities. Yes, they are all slaves of power, and the protagonists are even more outrageous. While reading "Morality", understanding "Huang Ting", and watching "Xiaoyao", they can't even see any morals, can't realize any happiness, and can't see any ideological realm. Compared with the above novels, the setting of the author's novel is reasonable, and it is more in line with the ancients' conception of immortals, alchemy, etc. Be convinced, summon gods and exorcise ghosts, the protagonist is devoted to the Tao, both magical powers and magic are all things to protect the Tao, gold and silver treasures, lovely wives and concubines are just looking for the scenery on the road, you can appreciate it but not get lost, the character is decisive and decisive, and he makes a decision before acting (except Wen Tianshi), If you can take a closer look at the author's works, you will find a different fairy spirit

A Xiantian Mirror warrior can defeat hundreds of people, and if he cultivates to the point of becoming an immortal, he can kill anyone with a musket 🙂

I went and followed it for several years, and the writing was pretty good. Why is this book over? ? ? The plot has just begun!

How can I put it, the strength of the protagonist in the author's novel is getting lower and lower! The systems are all the same and nothing new. They are all immortals. Why can't you believe in becoming a god and then become an immortal, or an earthly immortal, or practice Qi to become an immortal, a conjoined immortal, a heavenly secret to become an immortal, a ghost to become a Taoist, etc. Hey, it's all the same routine, and there is no heroine yet. Please, can't there be multiple heroines?

You're going to end the novel right now, and the plot feels like it's just begun.

It takes hundreds of years for an immortal to achieve enlightenment, only to be killed by hundreds of mortals. It would be reasonable to use dragon energy to kill each other with the immortals and then kill the immortals. The immortals can be killed, but part of the court's energy will be consumed forever, instead of being killed by hundreds of mortals just by the court's order.

The six dynasties of time and space are here, it feels like a long time ago.

Some people say that humans are the biggest parasites on earth. Some people say that demons are stronger than talents. Some people think that he wants to become an immortal. Once he becomes an immortal, he will be awesome and cool. It is better to wave Trump's nuclear bomb to kill him and fly back to blow himself up. But the question is, how do you think God should face these awesome superpowers? Does anyone prefer ordinary people and various governments, or do some religions like churches stand at the head of various countries? Actually, I think everyone should have no conflict with the author's work, and the protagonist doesn't want to. He keeps a low profile and worries about his master being killed. He didn't want to either. He just wants to practice Taoism, chant sutras and perform rituals. He couldn't practice before, but now he can. I can feel the protagonist's excitement. He himself is actively working hard to develop, and he is very desperate when he lacks resources during cultivation. He represents the last practitioner of the righteous path. This book looks at what he faced in this world family. What's there to scold? Some people scolded him for being willing to guard Xiaoguanzi and do things for the townspeople. I think it would be a waste for him not to stand side by side with the sun in his capacity. Why doesn't he go to the United Nations G20 Summit to be a leader? Criticizing him for being afraid of rockets and missiles🚀? Give him a shit and go back. Do you think he is not anti-human enough? Some people are not ashamed to say that if you don't enjoy the pleasure of a big glass of wine and a big piece of meat, how can you be a "fairy"? He would dare to get anyone pregnant if they dared to glare at him, and they would have twins, otherwise they would be sorry for being immortals. This kind of comment can have more than 20 likes, and there are comments below. It's all up to you, otherwise I would have opened the book in one minute. In his words, he can't collapse a continent with his ass, and he can build a fart channel. Subtext: He really wants to become an immortal, the kind to dominate everything, the kind who doesn't feel guilty about causing casualties in cities and towns. He means: Xiaoyao is not a fairy who doesn't care about things. I will scold whoever writes it, scold the author, and tell people not to read it. He is stupid because this book is not a fairy. Please come back and let no one read it. This can get twenty likes. Brother! I invested in this book. You have to force yourself to cover the sky. (Advertising for Mr. Chen) He also scolded the protagonist for being a good boy who went down to help the society maintain justice, but did not apply for the national courageous subsidy. The subtext is not vicious enough. Or should he not save people and become a super villain when he has time to satisfy some people's wishes? The funniest thing, is someone scolding the Song Dynasty-like court for destroying the rebellion of the protagonist's ancestors? comeon, even the protagonist, who was a person at the time, was not angry, so why are you angry? The protagonist's ancestors were exterminated for more than a thousand years because of rebellion. It's normal, isn't it? The failure of the rebellion led to a tragic outcome, and the protagonist accepted it. The protagonist just tells readers the deeds of his ancestors. It doesn't help that you're criticizing the protagonist and the author. Or does the author clearly mention this in the outline, but shouldn't write it out? Criticizing him for not living up to expectations? What should the protagonist do? ? ? You can earn 3,000 a month from practicing law, but you still want to buy a few Song Dynasty antiques like an idiot and break them to show to readers, so you get angry verbally? Is he worthy of the word "cultivation"? Could it be that your roommate told you that his ancestor was An Lushan who rebelled in the Tang Dynasty, and that he had been hiding from the Tang Dynasty since his rebellion failed. Are you angry with him and blame his ancestor for being a military governor of the three regions and failing to become emperor? ? ? Whether his ancestors fought against the Tang Dynasty or not is irrelevant. The most important thing is that you have to ask your roommate to copy the notes! What matters is whether he called your name today. (Whether the protagonist writes a modern story is good, and the other side of the protagonist's consciousness travels to a temple similar to the Ming Dynasty. Is it good or not?) I think it is more important to look at the plot, whether his ancestors successfully rebelled thousands of years ago. Readers who think that their ancestors must be successful are very strange. L(o)" is at least very stubborn. More than a thousand years have passed and he still laments that it is useless to criticize him. Too much. Beyond the plot. Some new book friends are led astray like this and don't know whether their ancestors' rebellion was successful or not. In fact, it is just background information, and the impact of these discussions is too redundant. Whether the protagonist's ancestor slipped on a banana peel and died, or ate tofu to death, or voyeuristically suffocated women with their underwear, can these book lovers stop being impetuous? These make me think that when I come to Li Yi, it is a non-mainstream site for ghosts and animals. The big guys hold up their hands and want Long Aotian. I don't know where there are more. There should be many suitable for Baidu Long Aotian and Li Yi's funeral family. Let book lovers who like quiet and elegant have a clean reading environment.

Why is it so poisonous? It is still developing slowly in ancient times due to lack of incense Directly in modern times, in the nearby village, just use a few spells It must be developed slowly in ancient times.