There Are Gods in the Ruined Temple

The writing is weak, the plot is stiff, and there are many contradictions. It is only about self-pleasure, poisonous, and uncomfortable.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I was already poisoned and died.

Without the female protagonist, this book would definitely do well. The author has written so many books over the years but they are still not popular. The problem lies with women. Damn it, what age are you in, and you still write such a silly, sweet, and mentally retarded heroine. It makes you want to vomit. How many people have died from the poison in the woman in this book?

.... It's too poisonous. In front of me, Taoist Master Lu gave me the grace to save my life and light the lamp. The protagonist always thinks highly of himself and gloats over misfortune. Earlier he described how valuable the century-old ginseng and the exclusive quiet room were. However, the protagonist walked away, thinking that the Taoist priest would be unlucky sooner or later. Fortunately, I ran fast. In comparison, the protagonist looked even more glaring.

This is a book where the main character's IQ is off the mark when he meets a girl. He loves to show off, which makes him lose the game in a disgraceful way, and he suddenly loses the connection with his opponent. He obviously has a golden finger and doesn't practice well, but he keeps emphasizing how difficult it is. It's a hundred times better than his own world. Even if he doesn't develop properly, he doesn't learn the Taoist dharma, and he just pretends to be cool and gets beaten up when he learns some evil ways from the outer sect. It's inexplicable to win.

Why doesn't the author change it? The protagonist in his books always loses his IQ when he encounters a woman. I read every book by the author, and every time I see one or two female characters appear, I give up. As soon as a female character appears, the protagonist kneels down and licks her with no bottom line, as if he has been single all his life. He is insulted by the hungry ghost ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ), and I am speechless! Look how many people are complaining about this in the book review section! In fact, the author's writing style and creativity are quite good. However, the protagonist's character of licking girls whenever he sees them has never changed. Every book has the same look of disdain. It's really hard to resist iron! So angry!

At first I read the first few chapters and thought they were pretty good. But then this Ling or something girl came out. Sorry, I asked her to leave. Please say goodbye!

Let's build a Tao. Fighting and killing gods and ghosts can't shake the protagonist's mind and heart. If a female protagonist comes randomly, he can't mess up his mind and heart. People say what it is and still make fun of others. It's a shameful thing.

Everyone, please stop arguing. The story has not yet reached its climax, but the book review has put a lot of pressure on the author. Please be patient and read on.

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After seeing the plot after going abroad, I really can't stand it anymore. 1. Why did the pig's feet go abroad to find a mirror? What use is it to him who is so weak now? Second, in this Dharma-ending era, instead of going to the immortal world to practice, are you always making trouble in reality? The author is talking about the theory that mind is useless! That pig's feet have spiritual energy, tmd, let me practice it first, not to mention becoming an immortal, how about you help me reach a more powerful level first! Anyway, there is no need for xinxing, if you have spiritual energy, just breathe it in! Third, there is too much water. For example, in the first scene of going down the river, there are always descriptions of how afraid some people are of Jiangjun Temple. Does this description make sense? The previous writing was pretty good. I thought I had found another good book, but the more I wrote, the worse it got.

I haven't seen much, I think, the creativity is good, but the preface and the follow are inconsistent. In the last chapter, the small mirror used for time travel can also absorb 👻 and increase energy. In the next chapter, I am chased by a group of 👻 and I don't even take the small mirror. Then I don't practice well and have to pretend to be with mortals. A practitioner shouldn't look at a mortal covered with potholes, mites, dandruff, and odor. Can this still make mortals look good?

After reading Chapter 32, things were fine up to this point, but as soon as the woman appeared, the protagonist immediately turned into an idiot, speaking inconsistently, and coupled with the poisonous old routine of being charming and charming... It was foreseeable that the woman would bring endless trouble to the protagonist in the future, and the protagonist would always be duplicitous and talk about trouble, but he would obediently help her deal with the trouble and give her opportunities every time. . Anyway, I don't dare to watch it anymore.

I have added this book to my bookshelf several times, and then I throw it out every time. It is actually quite well written, the subject matter is my favorite, and the writing is first-rate, but this cannot hide the fact that he fed me poison. Every time I saw the woman in the previous chapters... I gave up. , It's not that I can't accept novels with female protagonists, but I can't accept writing such a murderous and decisive character, but always tolerate women... It's very poisonous to me, I really want to see the protagonist kill the girl~ Everyone's views are different, maybe some people like this kind of plot.

It's really cracking. How can there be such a shameless person in life who begs others to teach him his own craft? The protagonist can still have a good impression of this woman and a person who threatens him? ? ! If you really teach, those craftsmen have to think twice about accepting disciples. You practice the law and just teach it casually, without considering the consequences? What impact would it have if a person with this kind of character had power? Author, I'm not belittling your creativity. If you don't write about women, even if you create a perfect woman for the public, the reviews will definitely be twice as good. If I really want to see beauty, why don't I read Huang Wen?

It was okay at first, but after the two beauties came out, those few chapters were completely skip-reading. It was really poisonous. The protagonist practiced Taoism alone in the mountains, acting like a lecherous devil. He had the training conditions but showed no effort. The bottom line rules were lost in front of beauties. Other chapters without "beauties" can still be read. Chapters with beauties are simply not suitable for this kind of book. There should not be too many beautiful female supporting characters. It is okay to have them, and they are full of poisonous routines.

Others are cultivators and go to the fairy world. You have gone to the fairy world. Instead of cultivating and running business in the fairy world, is it interesting to go back to the Dharma-ending world to hang out in the world and watch girls? Aim to drive high and go low! What are you doing to cultivate immortality!

Drive high and go low, don't waste your time. There is a girl in heat starting from dozens of chapters, and it's a cool 13-story urban outfit. What a waste of a book with a good theme.

I've read 68 chapters so far, rewarded 500, and left a comment Just looking at the early stage, this is a book that will seriously polarize readers. Some people may be like me and leave after reading less than a hundred chapters, while others may regard it as a sacred book... The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. The advantage lies in the routine. It is the routine of a traditional urban pretense and slap-in-the-face novel. At the beginning, the protagonist faces a rebellion from his past brother in the end of the Dharma era. He has no choice but to use the ancestral treasure to travel to another world full of spiritual energy. After simple practice, he comes back to solve the problem and harvest a girl. I didn't look at the later stage and it is probably a routine... The shortcoming is that the routine is too regular. It's a bit annoying to take out the old stuff from 10 years ago and read it... The highlight is the author's description of the techniques and cultivation. He does not deliberately use difficult words, but it is very interesting to read. In addition, the protagonist is barely above the IQ in the other world (it feels like the age of the end of the law not only sucks spiritual energy, but also sucks the brain), and it is at the top Several chapters are written with great feeling, unlike other writing sects that are all grand and grand. What stands out here is the awe-inspiring tyranny of Yin Yang Mountain and the General Temple. No one is allowed to enter, and all who enter will be killed. The domineering power of intimidating Ling Ran in the world is very touching. The bad point is that the protagonist is not like the protagonist. In the early stage, the heroine is silly and sweet, but she still thinks she is smart... The protagonist's style is different from that of others. One second, he is still a mage who can control the country's life and death, and the next second, he switches to the male protagonist who is a pure love on campus... In addition, the background of the world is blurry, the styles before and after are too different, the plot connection is not smooth, the characters are really featureless, and the female characters are just vases, etc., Which are all poisonous... I can't hold on any longer. If you like this kind of school beauty's close-fitting and high-glove style, it's 4 points for food. If it's not bad, it's 3 points for hay. If it's disgusting, it's disgusting and degrades women. 0 Points for poisonous weeds. I'm going to sleep first. You can ORZ as you like.

As soon as the woman surnamed Ling came out, the protagonist had all kinds of obscene thoughts and said that she couldn't help it. She suddenly became wise and kneeled down to lick the woman and the forces supported by the previous patriarch. The writing of the spiritual practice system was messy.

I was speechless, just like a licking dog. Licking women, licking aristocratic families, obviously the aristocratic families were supported by their own disciples in the past

The more I look at it, the less I can stand it anymore. I can't walk when I see a woman. I don't want to practice immortality or Dharma.

Before the 40th chapter, people were applauding, but after the 40th chapter, the writing became more and more complicated, and the reading became more and more depressing. The three major families under his command were tested again and again, and the mana was restored but they were not punished, and they acted as their thugs. It was simply funny.

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Starting from the first chapter, I made all the mistakes in my language. I couldn't stand it until I read the second chapter. How derelict is your Chinese teacher?

It fell in Chapter 42, it was extremely poisonous. Was this written by someone else?

I still remember that when the protagonist first traveled to the Donghua world, he couldn't use pistols. It was said that the rules of the world were different. But now he can use cannons. Can you explain it?

Our book club has no one to organize it, which is also embarrassing! I think they are giving rewards for building buildings. The reward for 1000 floors is 10,000 points, but you cannot clear the floor. It feels good, but it's a pity that I don't have enough financial resources. Student Party, an embarrassment

Do you have any recommendations for novels similar to the Taoist system? I'm tired of reading normal fantasy and want to read something like this.

The author, after reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel really sad. There are too many loopholes. Can't you go back and change it? Since I have the perseverance and ability to write more than 2 million words, why not fix the previous bugs?