The Legend of Time and Space Immortals of Six Dynasties

After seeing Chapter 49, my evaluation is useless. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Practice Taoism with peace of mind and avoid dealing with women. There are not many smart people in the world, but there are also not many idiots.

The Han Dynasty was still red, and there was also a saying that the Red Emperor's son killed the White Emperor's son. I recommend the military song of the Red Scarf Army, which is very consistent with the living conditions of the Han nation in the Six Dynasties. Clouds follow the dragon, wind follows the tiger, fame and fortune come from dust and earth. Looking at China, the people are suffering and the fertile land for thousands of miles is barren. Look at the world, there are no barbarians, and only one man can make up for the incompleteness of the way of heaven. A good man, regardless of his parents, only cares for the common people and not for the Lord. Holding a ninety-nine steel knife, he stopped after killing Hu Er. I am a man, why should I act like a horse or an ox for the Tartars? A strong man drinks all the wine in his bowl and never looks back on a journey of thousands of miles. The golden drums are beating together and the crowd is roaring, and the yellow dragon will not stop until it is broken.

The subject matter is interesting, but the writing is too poor. I was disgusted by Yan Ling's description, and I really wanted to give it up.

Do you have to use some inexplicable female plot to promote the plot? I don't know what I'm thinking about

There is always a feeling of being out of place in the era and atmosphere of the books written by this author. If you want to write about the technological era, there should not be so many powerful gods and ghosts. It is not for nothing that the end of the law is the end of the law. If you have to write so much, you and I are fighting over each other. It would be much better to just write an alien world or something like a background for the killing. That way there would be much more room for development.

This name reminds me of the Six Dynasties Qingyu Plan←_←

It's strange that it's popular! I don't know what to write

I feel like I can't walk when I see a woman. Written by the author of The Evil Ghost in Sex

The writing is not bad, but if you revise it more, it will definitely be a good book. To be honest, if you talk about buying things and buying things in the Southern and Northern Dynasties, will people understand you?

For gold fingers, the most taboo thing is to give half, you can slowly unlock it, why should you only remember 50 or 60% of it? Although it doesn't matter much, it's just that the thoughts are not clear.

Apart from anything else, how many enemies has the protagonist accepted as apprentices who once wanted to kill him? I really don't know what the author was thinking

"Those who are facing the battle are all arrayed in front" was copied and translated incorrectly by the Japanese - -

This book is much better than A Broken Temple with Immortals.

In fact, you have all forgotten. A long time ago, our ancestors had boundless power. At that time, heaven and earth collapsed, and all living beings suffered disaster. There is a person who holds up the sky with his shoulders and life. Therefore, we say that he split the chaos and stood upright. Giving people a new world. The fish in Beiming soars into the sky without knowing the end. That majestic figure left behind a legend. But when the sky falls and the earth falls, we have no wings. So a woman, with her boundless kindness, completed the sky. The flood is coming. The tribesmen died in the water one by one, and the food they had worked hard to cultivate was submerged. Creatures in distant places scrambled to escape. I want to leave this world of endless disaster. But our ancestors refused to surrender. If the mountains block the direction of the water, then split the mountains. If the sea forgets its responsibility, then fill up the sea. The unyielding will created China. But today, everyone has forgotten. There once was a place called the Three Realms. When disaster strikes, our ancestors use their boundless power to take us away. But fleeing is not our way back, so more ancestors used their blood and bodies to pave a way back. I wrote all this in "The Dream Weaver" (also known as Return to the Three Realms), which tells the story of a modern man who, after entering the ruins of Zhuangzi, was sent to the Three Realms by the butterfly that Zhuangzi dreamed of in the legend. The secrets hidden in ancient times are revealed step by step. The names that had left their blood on this return road appeared one by one. Introduction In the distant ancient times, there was once a group of people who used their blood-stained backbones to prop up the dignity of a nation and ignite the hope of inheritance. Many years later, their descendants set out again, just to find those names that shone with glory. I'm very sorry, I know it's wrong to advertise... I apologize to the book friends who saw the advertisement, I'm sorry!

After reading many chapters, I feel strange. Abandon the pit

I only found out about the author after reading this book. Then I read two other books and found that the author is very capable, and both the setting and structure are very good. He has unique insights into the theory and development of Buddhism and Taoism. The author also mentioned in a certain book why it is not popular. I want to briefly talk about it. First, the author's writing is very good, starting from a short story and slowly introducing a narration, but it is not so coordinated with online articles. Most readers of online articles tend to prefer intense stories, while the author's writing style is more popular with real old readers, but this is a minority. The author's writing habits have been developed, and this needs to be adjusted slowly. Second, the author seems to be very good at describing the initial and development stages, but subconsciously does not want to describe the successful scenery. This situation exists in the two books I read (Northern Song Dynasty and Shinto). The protagonist is often arranged by the author to be forcibly reincarnated or reincarnated when he reaches the height of real success. Being beaten to the dust, and again and again, you are totally causing trouble for yourself. You must know that what most readers of online articles want to see is to feel happy. The protagonist has struggled for so long and it feels good to see it. You slap him and send him back to the starting point. This makes the readers vomit blood. Either you let the protagonist transcend to a higher level, or you let the protagonist fight with a real giant, which is a very good way of writing, but you let the protagonist reach the peak and immediately fall back to the ground. You are chasing readers. Authors should pay special attention to this point. If your new book is still written in this way, it is really hopeless. Third, the creation of the atmosphere. The protagonist described by the author looks decisive on the sofa, but in fact many plots make people feel depressed intentionally or unintentionally, because you do not give the protagonist proper space to relax. As a web novel, hard practice is actually for better enjoyment. Do not let the protagonist become a slave of cultivation. And regardless of reality or ancient times, those who should be powerful must show the momentum of a strong man. What's particularly strange is that the protagonist's upgrading and improvement do not show any joy and exuberance. The author can learn from the leader on this point. He cannot always be afraid just because there are mountains ahead. It seems that he has to keep his tail between his legs before reaching the peak. This is wrong. This may also have a lot to do with the second point mentioned above. You see, the protagonists in the Master's books have a tiger mentality even if they are at a very low level. You see, the protagonists in his books can make people feel a sense of excitement and refreshment even when they are at a very low level. In fact, the protagonists in his books may not be as decisive as your protagonist. This is a manifestation of atmosphere creation. Fourth, anyone who has read the author's book knows that the author's theoretical level is very good, but when the protagonist improves step by step, you can use theory to package the upgrade process, but do not overly express the theory in the book. After all, you are writing a novel rather than preaching and educating readers. Fifth, the author has written many books. Why does the new book have such a name? This kind of classical book title is not in line with the current trend of online writing. As you said in your book, under the general trend, adapting to the current trend is the way to go.

I read a lot of fairy tales and very few Shinto novels. It was really interesting at the beginning, and the writing style is very mature, but after reading more, I felt bored. The two time and space seemed very good, but they were always suppressed by something. This feeling was very unpleasant.

The books written by this great god are all very good👍🏻. I like to read this book "The Immortal" and "The Broken Temple" very much, both in terms of writing style and Thoughts and people are very good👍🏻Great👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

To be honest, I just didn't understand it when I saw it later.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

The worst thing to do is to have a crooked building. Don't ever crook a building in the forest.

Rules: Everything must conform to the habits and images of ancient characters, and concave and convex patterns will not be adopted.

Not to mention the writing style, not to mention the poisonous points, but there are too many typos! ! !

I've read more than a dozen chapters and it's really good. Come on.

Well written😁