About Me Coming to Save Kyoani

KyoAni without Dai Wei is not the KyoAni I want

Haruhi Suzumiya's authority is too great. No matter what she does, she cannot let it go. Otherwise, the world will collapse if she is not careful. The protagonist's garbage system is completely unable to resist. It is terrible to watch.

The author had nothing to do and made a story about how you can transform using your Zanpakutō swastika. If you don't like it, don't read it. I'll delete the book first.

This book has no soul, don't read it

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After watching dozens of them, it still looks like a running story. The protagonist has no attractive characteristics at all. The whole book is as bland as boiled water. I have no intention of making people complain, so I say goodbye.

The author, please don't let the male protagonist often become feminine, otherwise this will be a big poisonous point.

Kyon doesn't exist at all, Kyon is nothing, it just doesn't exist. Kyon is just created by Kasuga. Does Kasuga really believe in the existence of aliens, future people, and superpowers? After more than ten years of exploration, he has never seen one, and he has always been regarded as a weirdo. Why is it so easy for Kyon to talk to Kyon? Has Haruhi turned the non-existent possibility of aliens, future people, and superpowers into Kyon? When the non-existent possibility is humanized and together with Haruhi, only the inevitable existence is left.

Women's clothing can't satisfy you anymore? ? ? Author, are you addicted to transformation?

After seeing the latest part, I would like to give you a few suggestions 1. First of all, the author, don't be discouraged. Although the reviews in the comment area are not very good, in fact, the book as a whole is still a two-dimensional solid food. It is worth reading. If you make a better outline, future works will definitely be better 2. Open I started to express my suggestion, because I personally like Suzumiya very much. At that time, I also started reading official novels by reading Lulu's Infinite Love, so I particularly like Suzumiya-themed novels. The reason why I read this book is also because the descriptions of the main characters in Suzumiya are quite good, so I read it, but The writing of the characters other than Suzumiya is a bit dry 2.1 For example, Shifengin has been criticized in the comment area. Of course, this is also a common problem among fan authors. Shifengin may have been designed from the beginning to be a tool to introduce the Shinigami and Kyon to the Kyoto worldview, because she She is a very important character, so she fell in love with the male protagonist. The emotional line is very abrupt (this is one of the main reasons why this character is not likeable\). It does not mean that there cannot be tool people, but pure tool people will make the whole work become plot development for the sake of plot development, which will become very blunt. , If you really want to write such a character, then you might as well use the waste and combine the stalker girl with Shifengyuan or something like that 3. Then the overall story is very straightforward. After all, KyoAni has many stories in daily life, so it is difficult to write explosive points, especially It is a unit drama like Suzumiya, which means that there is no main line in the whole story. The protagonist is completely pushed away. This may also be the reason for writing about Death, because there is nothing to write about, but in fact, several works of Key Club can be integrated into the story of Suzumiya. While changing the tragedy, it also allows the team to The length is more lovable 3.1 The disappearing chapter made my eyes light up after reading the full text, but the switching of perspectives is very abrupt, and suddenly it is from Kyon's perspective. As the highlight part, if it is from the perspective of the protagonist, it will definitely better reflect the sense of emptiness. Of course, the writing requirements are also more stringent. High, it requires more brain cells. With Kyon as the main perspective, you can indeed be lazy according to the original work, but it will also bring a greater sense of tearing to the readers, and the interest of the story will decrease 4. Come on, author, you will definitely be able to depict a more interesting world and more interesting stories in the future!

I don't like the feeling of being on tenterhooks all the time. The existence of Haruhi Suzumiya makes me feel very depressed. A god who is ready to destroy the world at every turn makes people really uncomfortable to watch, and the more he watches, the more violent he becomes. The most important thing is that the protagonist's system does not even have the ability to fight against this god, which makes it even more uncomfortable. He will always be controlled by others and has no strength to resist.

Why write about Bleach? Does Bleach have anything to do with KyoAni?

The protagonist is really weak, he still wants to cause trouble, his brain is weak, and he can't fight. He only relies on Nagato. I can't stand it anymore. I say goodbye.

The writing is quite good, but it is always in a place where the world will be destroyed if you are not careful. . . . I can't stand it

After scrolling through the comment section, I feel that the points that others have complained about are almost all mine. Apart from the fact that the writing is flawless and can be read, other aspects really fail to attract people.

I just don't understand why the protagonist saved KyoAni? Isn't it a comprehensive manga based on Suzumiya? Also, is there any significance to the role of Shifengyuan Hongye? It's not even a tool. It's used to express the author's heart that I like you so you must respond to my wishful thinking?

Why did you finish this book? ( •︠ˍ•︡ )

That's outrageous. How could I finish this book?😭

I haven't watched many of KyoAni's anime, not even Kasuga, but I really like this book

Come on, author! Full subscription support!

For example, the plot of the movie was briefly mentioned, and Rikka was mentioned casually just to fill in a few tasks.